Post by loken on Jul 8, 2011 16:36:32 GMT -5
Name: Garviel Loken
Race: Zabrak
Age: 16
Height: 1.80 Meters
Weight: 70 Kg
Appearance:
As all member of his species, Loken has got horns on his head and no hair. His skin has a yellowish colour and after joing the Sith he has tattoed himself with the Sith tattoes, that other members of his race had worn. Together with his red eyes, he is an imtimidating sight, looking more like a monster than a person.
Personality:
Before his fall Loken was a very generous and kind man. He would gladly stand to protect those that couldn't do that themselves. But was also very hasty and always wanted to rush into action. Which in turn let the Zabrak appear blood lusting, but that only came appearent once he had fallen to the dark side of the force.
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After his fall, the Zabrak has become cold,cruel and merciless. For him the life of someone is worth nothing. Which has resulted in him taking pleasure killing others, preferably in a very painful and savage way. This added to his apperance he really looks like someone might imagine a Sithwarrior.
Birth place: Danthomir
Faction: Sith Order
Rank: Initiate
Previous Faction: Jedi Order
Previous Rank: Padawan
Bio:
Born on Danthomir, he was subject to the experiments of the Nightsisters for 2 long years. Until the young Zabrak was saved by the Jedi Master Corran Daniels. He sensed the potenial in the two year old and took him back to the Jedi Temple.
Years passed and the youth presented a great capability with the force. Though his ability with the lightsaber suffered under it. Garviel didn't have many friends in the Temple at the time. Only two actually, Sahra Dawn and Cyclen Draigo. The two girls had befriended him the first day he had arrived as a baby. The three had been training together for the lst few years. During that they had discovered the Cyclen was the best in Lightsaber comabt, Garviel in the use of the Force and Sahra was pretty good in both. They were inseparable until they had turned 13 and were chosen as Padawans. Loken was chosen by Jedi Knight Raphael Pieper. Their first Mission was on the Planet Cato-Neimodia. It was rumored that corruption had spread throughout the planet's government. The two Jedi were sent there to evalulate the damage caused by the corruption and if possible end it.
The Fall Begins:
The moment they had arrived a band of mercenaries attack them. The two peacekeepers had only one choice, they had to flee. Which was completely against Loken's will. He wanted to kill those bounty hunters and find the leader of the corrputed government. But his master told him that they had to wait. But the young Zabrak didn't want to and kept insisting that they had to act and finally Pieper gave in. The two Jedi managed to infiltrate the government building and witnessed a deal between the corrupt govener and a strange huded figure who ran off as soon as he saw the Jedi.
The politician called for his guards who opened fire on the Forceusers. They blocked the shots with their lightsabers and fled. But before Garviel followed his master he used the force to push one of the support beams out of it's holding. Now parts of the ceiling rained down on the unfortunate guards, who were knocked unconscious by the falling pieces of stone. Outside of the residence the Jedi saw a shuttle just about to lift off. It was the govener's, the Padawan threw his lightsaber which pierced one of the windows and destroyed a few of the controls. The shuttle tumbled back towards the ground and exploded in a shower of metal fragments. The now very exhausted Zabrak, fell onto one knee panting heavily. Though his master didn't sense it at the moment, Garviel had started his journey towards the darkside of the force.
After they had come back to the Jedi Temple, his master began training him in the force ability , Force Cloak. In retrospect it might have been better to train him in lightsaber combat as that was a far more pressing matter. He was far worse in that, than in force usage. But that's beside the point. The important thing is that, they had a few months left before their new mission and during that, Garviel trained Force Cloak. It was a hard time, and he failed most of the time, but he didn't give up. The Zabrak kept pushing himself and then finally mastered it. But he wasn't very good in it.
The Fall:
Three years had passed since the mission on Cato Neimodia. The Zabrak had become a far more powerful Jedi, since then. So it happend that he and his two childhood friends were sent on a missionw ith their masters two a space station near Alderaan. None of the suspected what would happen that day...
While two of the masters went Planet side the Padawans and the third master stayed on the station. When suddenly the hooded man from Cato Neimodia appeared behind them. He reveled himself to be a Sith and challenged the Master to a duel. While suddenly a trapdoor opened under Sahra and Cyclen and the two teenage girls fell down into a chamber. The person who had opended that door was the Sith's apprentice. The dark jedi charged the Padwan and a furious lightsaber duel erupted. The apprentic taunted Loken that he was weak to follow the Jedicode and that he, the dark jedi, would proof it to him. Because suddenly the chamebr in which the girls were catpured was filled with poisinous gas. The Zabrak assaulted his opponent now far more savagly and didn't realize that he was getting closer to the dark side with every strike he made. Then suddenly he could feel his master ,who had battled the Sith on a different floor, die. That was it, the catalyst. The young Jedi gripped his opponent with the force and slammed him against the wall, the ceiling, the floor and that all over again. Before pinning him against the window of the room. Then out of his hatred Garviel screamed " I hate you !" and suddenly let a slob of metal fly at the weakened apprentice. That slob crushed it's victims chest cavity. But the Zabrak wasn't finished yet, with one hand he held the dark Jedi pinnioned against the glass and with the other threw the his opponents lightsaber at him. The red blade penetrated it's owners chest and then with a powerful force push, broke the window and the apprentice was blown out of the station, dead. Garviel felt every muscle in his body ache, he knew he was to tiered to continuing fighting any one. But in his anger and hatred, ingnored his bodies screams for mercy and rest.
Now Loken deactivated his purple lightsaber and turned around. To look into the Sith's eyes. "Good, your hatred has made you powerful. I know you seek power and want to avenge what has been done to you here. But don't let your revenge out on me, you must understand that it is the Jedi who caused you to suffer today and not the Sith," said the fallen Jedi, while at the same time using the force to influence Loken's mind. "You..you...are wrong. I will never join the Sith !" screamed Loken at him. "You will see how wrong you are..." the Sith couldn't continue his sentence as the other two students had managed to free themselves from the chamber and apparently been able to keep the poisonous gas away from them. Now the three Padwans charged the dark Jedi. Who didn't even start to battle with his full power merely playing with the young Jedi. Trying to seduce Loken all the time. "You see, if you'd join me this fight could be over right now and none of you would have to die." "Ah, shut up already," shouted Loken at him while he threw another slob of metal at his opponent. Who in turn merely sent it back. Now Loken got thrown against another window, blood trickling from his mouth and nose. "I will kill your friends, if you don't join me," said the Sith and threw both girls against the wall. "Forget it I won't join you !" shouted Loken and charged again only to get shocked by force lightening and thrown back again. Garviel could feel every muscle aching and looked up into the face of the Sith, the red blade at his throat. " Now join me and they can live." said the Sith, while showing the Zabrak and alternate future in which everyone he cared about had been killed by the Sith Empire. "That...That's not true..." answered Loken panting. "Even if I'd join you, there is no way, that one more Sith could change that..." said Garviel. He was mentally weakened from the two fights and didn't have enough power left to withstand the psychic attacks to seduce him from the Sith. "You don't understand the Sith Order is not really part of the Sith Empire, and every Sith that joins us. Is one more step to our victory," lied the Sith. "Don't listen to him Garviel he is lying !" shouted Sarah at him from the other side of the room. But it was to late the young Padawan had given in. "I will join you, but you have to spare the others..." sighed the Zabrak as he came back on his legs. "Good then we can go, my apprentice." said his new masters. The Zabrak followed him, his two former best friends looking shocked at him. Before the door shut close behind him.
A few months later the now, fallen Jedi, had replaced his old lightsaber with a new red one. His new lightsaber had four claw-like extensions on the top. But those simply served a decorating purpose. Even though Garviel has turned on the Jedi, he still keeps his old lightsaber with him. To remind him every day, why he joined the Sith and so that he doesn't forget, form whom he is fighting.
Lightsaber: Single-Blade, but dual phase.
Color: Red ( former purple )
Practiced Lightsaber forms:[/b]
Shii-Cho 3
Makashi N/A
Soresu 2
Ataru
Shien / Djem So N/A
>>Sub-form Backhanded
Niman N/A
>>Sub-form Jar-kai, or Dual Wield
Juyo N/A
Double Bladed Combat
N/A
Force-Sensitive Abilities or practices:
Telekinetic: 5
Telepathic: 2
Body: 1
Sense: 2
Protection: 1
Healing: 1
Destruction: 1
Specialized Skills:
Force Cloak
Attributes:
Physical Strength: 6
Intelligence: 5
Speed: 4
Leadership: 2
Unarmed: 3
Melee Weapons: 3
Ranged Weapons: 3
Force Attunement:
-5
RP Sample:
The young Sith was sneaking through the tunnels of the government building. He used his lightsaber and cut a hole through the ceiling. After climbing through it, the apprentice looked around. No one was near, so he continued to his destination. Stalking on his way like a shadow, mostly because he had learned the force power ; force cloak in the mean time. So the "Stalker of the Night", as he was called on this planet, silently slid through the lower levels of the building. His lightsaber ready in his hand, the Zabrak turned a corner and nearly ran into a maintenance droid. It beeped alarmed for a moment before it got sliced apart. He then continued on his way, cloaked again. He entered one of the air-vents and crawled through it. It was brutally hot in those vents, and more than once Garviel had to mop sweat of his forehead. But finally he had found the entrance to the governor's office it was guarded by two grim-looking guards. The fallen Jedi thought about this for a moment he could of cause kill those two but that would without doubt alert his target, to the Zabrak's presence. So he decided on, using a bit of trickery. Loken crawled a bit back and used the Force to let on of the vases topple over. He repeated the process and the guards actually left their positions to investigate. Now Garviel ahd his chance he jumped down from the vent and with force speed rushed into the office. His target, a very young women, was sitting in her chair, firmly asleep. He sighed that was to easy, the Zabrak went up to her and with a disgusting sound broke her neck and ripped the head of in total. On the outside no one had heard him,so Garviel climbed into the garbage disposal and through it back to the lower levels. "The first thing I'll do when I'm out of his taking a shower," mumbled the Zabrak to himself as he entered his ship.
Race: Zabrak
Age: 16
Height: 1.80 Meters
Weight: 70 Kg
Appearance:
As all member of his species, Loken has got horns on his head and no hair. His skin has a yellowish colour and after joing the Sith he has tattoed himself with the Sith tattoes, that other members of his race had worn. Together with his red eyes, he is an imtimidating sight, looking more like a monster than a person.
Personality:
Before his fall Loken was a very generous and kind man. He would gladly stand to protect those that couldn't do that themselves. But was also very hasty and always wanted to rush into action. Which in turn let the Zabrak appear blood lusting, but that only came appearent once he had fallen to the dark side of the force.
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After his fall, the Zabrak has become cold,cruel and merciless. For him the life of someone is worth nothing. Which has resulted in him taking pleasure killing others, preferably in a very painful and savage way. This added to his apperance he really looks like someone might imagine a Sithwarrior.
Birth place: Danthomir
Faction: Sith Order
Rank: Initiate
Previous Faction: Jedi Order
Previous Rank: Padawan
Bio:
Born on Danthomir, he was subject to the experiments of the Nightsisters for 2 long years. Until the young Zabrak was saved by the Jedi Master Corran Daniels. He sensed the potenial in the two year old and took him back to the Jedi Temple.
Years passed and the youth presented a great capability with the force. Though his ability with the lightsaber suffered under it. Garviel didn't have many friends in the Temple at the time. Only two actually, Sahra Dawn and Cyclen Draigo. The two girls had befriended him the first day he had arrived as a baby. The three had been training together for the lst few years. During that they had discovered the Cyclen was the best in Lightsaber comabt, Garviel in the use of the Force and Sahra was pretty good in both. They were inseparable until they had turned 13 and were chosen as Padawans. Loken was chosen by Jedi Knight Raphael Pieper. Their first Mission was on the Planet Cato-Neimodia. It was rumored that corruption had spread throughout the planet's government. The two Jedi were sent there to evalulate the damage caused by the corruption and if possible end it.
The Fall Begins:
The moment they had arrived a band of mercenaries attack them. The two peacekeepers had only one choice, they had to flee. Which was completely against Loken's will. He wanted to kill those bounty hunters and find the leader of the corrputed government. But his master told him that they had to wait. But the young Zabrak didn't want to and kept insisting that they had to act and finally Pieper gave in. The two Jedi managed to infiltrate the government building and witnessed a deal between the corrupt govener and a strange huded figure who ran off as soon as he saw the Jedi.
The politician called for his guards who opened fire on the Forceusers. They blocked the shots with their lightsabers and fled. But before Garviel followed his master he used the force to push one of the support beams out of it's holding. Now parts of the ceiling rained down on the unfortunate guards, who were knocked unconscious by the falling pieces of stone. Outside of the residence the Jedi saw a shuttle just about to lift off. It was the govener's, the Padawan threw his lightsaber which pierced one of the windows and destroyed a few of the controls. The shuttle tumbled back towards the ground and exploded in a shower of metal fragments. The now very exhausted Zabrak, fell onto one knee panting heavily. Though his master didn't sense it at the moment, Garviel had started his journey towards the darkside of the force.
After they had come back to the Jedi Temple, his master began training him in the force ability , Force Cloak. In retrospect it might have been better to train him in lightsaber combat as that was a far more pressing matter. He was far worse in that, than in force usage. But that's beside the point. The important thing is that, they had a few months left before their new mission and during that, Garviel trained Force Cloak. It was a hard time, and he failed most of the time, but he didn't give up. The Zabrak kept pushing himself and then finally mastered it. But he wasn't very good in it.
The Fall:
Three years had passed since the mission on Cato Neimodia. The Zabrak had become a far more powerful Jedi, since then. So it happend that he and his two childhood friends were sent on a missionw ith their masters two a space station near Alderaan. None of the suspected what would happen that day...
While two of the masters went Planet side the Padawans and the third master stayed on the station. When suddenly the hooded man from Cato Neimodia appeared behind them. He reveled himself to be a Sith and challenged the Master to a duel. While suddenly a trapdoor opened under Sahra and Cyclen and the two teenage girls fell down into a chamber. The person who had opended that door was the Sith's apprentice. The dark jedi charged the Padwan and a furious lightsaber duel erupted. The apprentic taunted Loken that he was weak to follow the Jedicode and that he, the dark jedi, would proof it to him. Because suddenly the chamebr in which the girls were catpured was filled with poisinous gas. The Zabrak assaulted his opponent now far more savagly and didn't realize that he was getting closer to the dark side with every strike he made. Then suddenly he could feel his master ,who had battled the Sith on a different floor, die. That was it, the catalyst. The young Jedi gripped his opponent with the force and slammed him against the wall, the ceiling, the floor and that all over again. Before pinning him against the window of the room. Then out of his hatred Garviel screamed " I hate you !" and suddenly let a slob of metal fly at the weakened apprentice. That slob crushed it's victims chest cavity. But the Zabrak wasn't finished yet, with one hand he held the dark Jedi pinnioned against the glass and with the other threw the his opponents lightsaber at him. The red blade penetrated it's owners chest and then with a powerful force push, broke the window and the apprentice was blown out of the station, dead. Garviel felt every muscle in his body ache, he knew he was to tiered to continuing fighting any one. But in his anger and hatred, ingnored his bodies screams for mercy and rest.
Now Loken deactivated his purple lightsaber and turned around. To look into the Sith's eyes. "Good, your hatred has made you powerful. I know you seek power and want to avenge what has been done to you here. But don't let your revenge out on me, you must understand that it is the Jedi who caused you to suffer today and not the Sith," said the fallen Jedi, while at the same time using the force to influence Loken's mind. "You..you...are wrong. I will never join the Sith !" screamed Loken at him. "You will see how wrong you are..." the Sith couldn't continue his sentence as the other two students had managed to free themselves from the chamber and apparently been able to keep the poisonous gas away from them. Now the three Padwans charged the dark Jedi. Who didn't even start to battle with his full power merely playing with the young Jedi. Trying to seduce Loken all the time. "You see, if you'd join me this fight could be over right now and none of you would have to die." "Ah, shut up already," shouted Loken at him while he threw another slob of metal at his opponent. Who in turn merely sent it back. Now Loken got thrown against another window, blood trickling from his mouth and nose. "I will kill your friends, if you don't join me," said the Sith and threw both girls against the wall. "Forget it I won't join you !" shouted Loken and charged again only to get shocked by force lightening and thrown back again. Garviel could feel every muscle aching and looked up into the face of the Sith, the red blade at his throat. " Now join me and they can live." said the Sith, while showing the Zabrak and alternate future in which everyone he cared about had been killed by the Sith Empire. "That...That's not true..." answered Loken panting. "Even if I'd join you, there is no way, that one more Sith could change that..." said Garviel. He was mentally weakened from the two fights and didn't have enough power left to withstand the psychic attacks to seduce him from the Sith. "You don't understand the Sith Order is not really part of the Sith Empire, and every Sith that joins us. Is one more step to our victory," lied the Sith. "Don't listen to him Garviel he is lying !" shouted Sarah at him from the other side of the room. But it was to late the young Padawan had given in. "I will join you, but you have to spare the others..." sighed the Zabrak as he came back on his legs. "Good then we can go, my apprentice." said his new masters. The Zabrak followed him, his two former best friends looking shocked at him. Before the door shut close behind him.
A few months later the now, fallen Jedi, had replaced his old lightsaber with a new red one. His new lightsaber had four claw-like extensions on the top. But those simply served a decorating purpose. Even though Garviel has turned on the Jedi, he still keeps his old lightsaber with him. To remind him every day, why he joined the Sith and so that he doesn't forget, form whom he is fighting.
Lightsaber: Single-Blade, but dual phase.
Color: Red ( former purple )
Practiced Lightsaber forms:[/b]
Shii-Cho 3
Makashi N/A
Soresu 2
Ataru
Shien / Djem So N/A
>>Sub-form Backhanded
Niman N/A
>>Sub-form Jar-kai, or Dual Wield
Juyo N/A
Double Bladed Combat
N/A
Force-Sensitive Abilities or practices:
Telekinetic: 5
Telepathic: 2
Body: 1
Sense: 2
Protection: 1
Healing: 1
Destruction: 1
Specialized Skills:
Force Cloak
Attributes:
Physical Strength: 6
Intelligence: 5
Speed: 4
Leadership: 2
Unarmed: 3
Melee Weapons: 3
Ranged Weapons: 3
Force Attunement:
-5
RP Sample:
The young Sith was sneaking through the tunnels of the government building. He used his lightsaber and cut a hole through the ceiling. After climbing through it, the apprentice looked around. No one was near, so he continued to his destination. Stalking on his way like a shadow, mostly because he had learned the force power ; force cloak in the mean time. So the "Stalker of the Night", as he was called on this planet, silently slid through the lower levels of the building. His lightsaber ready in his hand, the Zabrak turned a corner and nearly ran into a maintenance droid. It beeped alarmed for a moment before it got sliced apart. He then continued on his way, cloaked again. He entered one of the air-vents and crawled through it. It was brutally hot in those vents, and more than once Garviel had to mop sweat of his forehead. But finally he had found the entrance to the governor's office it was guarded by two grim-looking guards. The fallen Jedi thought about this for a moment he could of cause kill those two but that would without doubt alert his target, to the Zabrak's presence. So he decided on, using a bit of trickery. Loken crawled a bit back and used the Force to let on of the vases topple over. He repeated the process and the guards actually left their positions to investigate. Now Garviel ahd his chance he jumped down from the vent and with force speed rushed into the office. His target, a very young women, was sitting in her chair, firmly asleep. He sighed that was to easy, the Zabrak went up to her and with a disgusting sound broke her neck and ripped the head of in total. On the outside no one had heard him,so Garviel climbed into the garbage disposal and through it back to the lower levels. "The first thing I'll do when I'm out of his taking a shower," mumbled the Zabrak to himself as he entered his ship.
