Post by Jojo Kaguya on Aug 8, 2011 18:54:45 GMT -5
Name: Jojo Kaguya
Race: Miraluka
Age: 25
Height: 5' 7"
Weight: 124 lbs
Appearance:
Her cloak is a light gray cloak while underneath she wears a tight fitting emerald tunic. Jojo is considered small for being a Mandalorian offspring but also average height for her Miralukan mother; she is average height of normal Humanoid species. Jojo has a slender yet curved body with a small chest but long arms and legs. Her hair is not seen but it is normally brown with slight curls. She veils her blind eyes; in which, she uses Force Sight to see. She has a tight muscle tone in her arms and legs that have helped her through her survival tests as well.
Personality: Jojo is the subordinate of the Jedi Order and does what is asked of her. She cares not what it takes so long as it will get done while she is alive. She attempts to make peace with the enemies that she encounters though sometimes her charisma isn't enough for them so they decide her words are meaningless. She dreads only one deed in her past; though, the deed only helped make her own inner self stronger.
Now for a more in depth description of Jojo, she is personally a friendly and outgoing person who always will push her belief of justice on someone who thinks death is the only answer or even if war is the only way to go in a situation. She is the kind of person who will go out of her way to set up circumstances to fit her favor. She is stubborn in that she follows a code of valor and other things such as trust, loyalty, morals, and integrity. Following these she will perform what needs done when it needs to be done.
Birth place: Ilum
Faction: Jedi
Rank: Sentinel: Knight
Lightsaber (1): Single Blade
Color: Viridian
Lightsaber (2): Single Blade
Color: Viridian
Practiced Lightsaber forms:
Shii-Cho: 5
Makashi: 0
Soresu: 0
Ataru: 0
Shien / Djem So: 0
>>Sub-form Backhanded: 0
Niman: 0
>>Sub-form Jar-kai, or Dual Wield: 4
Juyo: 0
Double Bladed Combat: 0
Force-Sensitive Abilities or practices:
Telekinetic: 3
Telepathic: 5
Body: 5
Sense: 4
Protection: 2
Healing: 4
Destruction: 1
Specialized Skills: Battle Meditation and Force Sight
Attributes
Physical Strength: 5
Intelligence: 6
Speed: 5
Leadership: 4
Unarmed: 4
Melee Weapons: 3
Ranged Weapons: 2
Force Attunement: +4
Bio:
Birth and Youngling years
[/b]Age: 0 - 4[/b]
Miraluka, Makire Leanne, and Mandalorian (Human), Jak'Jok, were both apart of a mercenary group noted for their brutality during a mission, this unlikely couple was formed during a mercenary mission where the two of them were a duo for the mission that lasted extensively and a bond formed between the two. The Miralukan female wanted nothing more to do with the murder of a congress senator where as the Mandalorian never was convinced of the sentimental views. Soon enough their journey landed on the planet of Ilum.
Born on the Jedi Planet Ilum by the Mandalorian and Miraluka, but as her umbilical cord was cut in the hospital the Mandalorian would kill the mother by putting a poison in her, only after the nurses and doctors were not looking. The child, he assumed, would die from the environment here. She was found by a Jedi who was old in years named Viel. Well known for his uncanny liking of large ice monuments but also his constant visitation of the hospital where she was left in the lap of her dying mother. As he bounded a corner her mother had seen him and cried out to him to rescue her child. This Jedi would not stop until the cries of the child were formed and heard. It was then that the child's future would shift and she would be taken to the Jedi Temple of Ilum in the nursery only to transfer to the temple on Corascant.
Age 5-7
She would indulge herself with the leaning of the histories inside her own room before becoming a learner of the Jedi. This would involve her learning the history and the mention of several key people in the ages while also learning the different scenarios that a Jedi took during their own lives while also the scenarios of the fights against the sith lords.
Age: 5-12
While learning how to use a blade she was taught to manifest her Force Sight at a better rate where it didn't exhaust her to do so, only then could she learn an advanced saber form. She could see those who are of the dark side and of the light side. Not to mention those in between. During this her Shii-Cho training could only deprive from the actual training with remote droids at which she always practiced with an unusual number of two. She personally developed the sequence with the help of her soon to be master, Viel, whom encouraged her to program the drones to a specific sequence at which every shot from the drones would be randomly aimed at her body's high extremities to her low extremities.
Padawan
Age: 13-15
Upon mastering her force sight to the level of a pure bred Miraluka she would begin her real tests and it was at this time she became a padawan to Master Viel, the same one that found her when she was abandoned. She was to learn the next steps of the Shii-Cho form; in which, she learned at an astonishing rate. During this training Viel had begun his teachings to her of the core Force Powers that all Jedi learn one point of their lives.
Each force power she learned was a different potential whether a complete failure or a great aptitude. She had shown this under the different areas of the core powers. The powers recorded as Control she only was able to manifest Force Speed to an extent and the other two were more than a failure to her. The powers known as the Force Sense powers she was already well aware of given the Force sight but also far sight. Force empathy was still beyond her as well as her force telepathy was very low in skill. Her Telekinesis skills had a lot of development to do before she was ready for any of them.
Age: 16
During morning lessons one day, a time designated to force power training; she had showed great aptitude to telepathic and telekinetic powers. These powers ranged from the small force persuade and push to the immense battle meditation and force whirlwind. She was in the divide of Counselor and guardian specialties where as according to her skill set she was best fit for the Sentinel tier. Master Viel noticed this and pushed her to master one of the three things leaving everything else in the center. This was Battle Meditation in which she would be in a meditative trance with all but a small fraction of her mind indulging to bring a calming yet highly potent feeling of greatness that could well up inside anyone of the meditative rooms surrounding hers.
Age: 17
Late in her Shii-Cho training at the center padawan level she would be tutored to learn the forms of force spin, jump, and run to style her for the acrobatic style of Form IV. But it was soon demised when she had trouble with force run and spin, though her force jump skills were excellent, she would be taught Jar'kai, the Dual-wield Form, where she would be balanced in her self and merged learning that strived from other forms while using the most time in the form of Jar'kai using graceful fighting tactics.
The Jar’kai, dual wield, form itself used the style of two blades and she was quite graceful in the transitions of the styles that worked for her hand in hand. She still only had training sabers but even then she was having quite a good aptitude for such a way of fighting. For the next 6 months her training was 7 hours of Battle Meditative studies, 2 hours of other force training, 1 hour break and cool down, 6 hours of Jar'kai training. This gave 8 hours, three sets of thirty minutes broken in intervals from awaken, after Battle Meditative studies, and then after the first three hours of Jar'kai training. The other six hours and thirty minutes was her resting period. This was indeed a dangerous mix-up but all the same she had the training and stamina for such an immense schedule.
Age: 18
There were few instances that she was not in this training experience and those few were the times for missions. She would be accompanied by Master Viel as the two would travel through different worlds to gather the artifacts of the dark side. One mission in particular had a lasting effect that strengthened the bond between her master and herself. This mission was to retrieve a certain artifact of the Sith teachings that was not just a tome or something but an actual holocron. She had learned of these artifacts in the past but this one unparticular had a reason to be treated as a high priority mission, perfect for the two of them. They were to retrieve it in any way possible but with this ideal the problem was that she had to retrieve it from a group of battle ready mercenaries.
This group was the same as her father's group as she would learn her father was the leader of this group though at the time she didn't know he was her father until he was dieing at her feet. Her master and herself had to retrieve the artifact with as little fighting as possible but her father, who hoarded the object, hadn't went down without the fight as the two had battled him and his guard of 8 camouflaged warriors. This fight was inevitable with an outcome predestined as Jojo used the battle meditation to raise the influence of her master with images of victory and while doing so she was slowly draining her own self to exhaustion. She had a direct link with her master to allow the distance inevitably as far as the whole settlement but as such she was easily exhausted as her father was struck down in front of her meditation sight as he died clutching the holocron and said one phrase, "Live... my daughter..." She had learned the reason to her upbringing and through that she had spent a whole day just to meditate on the events as she tried to keep herself from mental ruin. She would live one as her father had commanded but also with a place of kindness in her heart for knowing he had at least said one thing to her before passing on...
...
Age: 19
Jojo Kaguya was given the single mission of creating a lightsaber by Master Viel whom was planning to leave her there as he would venture into deep space in search for a certain artifact of the sith on his own mission. He had left her on a forested moon of Onderan, aka Duxn, where she was to go into crystalline caves where she would meditate and build her own Lightsaber with the silvery green Viridian crystals. She never understood why he left her but she would eventually understand in time. Of course during the months she had battled her fair share staying out of site and knowledge of the mandalorians whom were on this planet as she was avidly in the midst of being found no matter what path she took. But eventually after defeating a Zar'rok she would find the right cave tunnel and dive into the shelter yet also the troubles of the sith powered cave that was powered by the burial of a sith lord meters above her. She would however find some light blue aura surrounding fungi that housed the crystals and thus her lightsaber building would begin and unfold to two lightsabers...
Her master on the other hand had passed her to another teacher during this time to study the Sith artifact in the deep space world she had never heard off. However the master would fall to the dark side and only then send a transmission to his old padawan to return and see him once more. Little did he himself know that this would be the final encounter between the two of them.
Age: 20-21
As the months passed after her creation of her own blades she received a transmission from her old master to see him again on some far off system that he also gave coordinates to. The final seeing of her master, whom had left her on Duxn and then passed her off to another master, would teach her one of the darkest abilities of the dark side of the force using the torture of the mind to decrease someone's resolve of living into a wish for a more horrid fate, but only after using a powerful torment mind on her to follow instruction. She would attempt it once but after a failure that affected her own mind's weakness; as well as destroyed the torment mind on her, she would now see the critical shift in that moment to see her own master had shifted to the dark side. She would battle her master after countless moments battling where she took and collected his double edge Cyan Lightsaber, and his remains, that would be buried soon at an enclave on Ilum. She had affected him in the end of their fight where he was slowly coming to peace as he had wanted her to kill him but as she had done so her mind influxed to pain her to the point of her dark force powers being a mere child's play work, as in weakened to that of a young dark acolyte's.
However this didn't do anything but boost her own resolve by knowing her dark side sorcery she had been taught won't be as dominative as it was then. And after returning to Corascant she would have his lightsaber placed inside a burial place on an enclave somewhere on Ilum where also his remains would return to as a final resting place.
Knight
Age:22+
Jojo would enter the Jedi temples later after hours of meditation in the past two months of coming to terms with the death of her previous master, Viel, as well as training her battle meditation and sight to heights of formidable prowess. Now 22, she would ask to become a Jedi Knight of the order and seeing how she is now old enough to become what she asked to be, as well as she has proven herself to be past the padawan learner stage she would undergo the trials. The feat of defeating the rogue Jedi was in her opinion as well as the council's a feat worthy of the initiate trial. The next five trials were done in the following years.
Trial of Skill: She was pitted to go head to head with a Jedi Guardian of her same age but he had trained his whole life to Form IV, one she studied for the longest of times in books and tomes. She would then go into a dual with stun sabers against this bulky form. He used the form well and with such finesse with the dual blade. But even with his heaviest strikes her dual-wield form of Jar'kai had been irritating to her adversary whom relied on his strength and not his wits as she dodged and weaved through to merely match his blows with gentle but effective pins on his dominant arm as he soon fell to the numbness in his arm and then his chest after he let his right arm hang for a second giving her an opening.
Trial of Courage: By a simulation in the Trial Chamber she was simulated to defeat two sith lords. Each was an apparent on of the past she had studied long ago in a tome that easily was recognized by their size. The one who was smaller was recognized to be the force user while the bigger one was a relevant fighter wielding a large gamorean axe and the other had no weapons apparent. She would battle them with difficulty as she had plenty of close calls but the one she had to watch out for was the smaller of the two as she would use her force push to knock the bigger of the two back as the aim was to terminate the smaller one. After a success she would do all she could to resolve the matter with words of the Jedi order to disrupt the bigger one's resolve and ideology which soon resolved to the big one's termination.
(I do not know if this actually could be accepted but noting that Obiwan's fight with Darth Maul was acceptable I'd say this would be as well)
Trial of Spirit: Done in a meditative trance with a Jedi master actively with her as a guide she would delve into the darkest memory of that which she killed the Master Viel. After a short fight the master's body would shape shift into a cloaked face that swirled with a warp around it that seemed to be mind bottling but at the moment of the strike down the face twirled and revealed to be her own face. She overcame this and as such she was horridly unable to speak for a week from the trauma of having an instance occur in her own mind.
Trial of Flesh: Her lightsaber remained extinguished for this trial as she had met this trial head on for an old dead, but effective ritual. The burning was a choice by the padawan to endure at this time until its incarceration later in the years as she was pitted to endure the fierce burning of not just her skin but mind by two Iridonian Masters. One applied the pressure at her back and the other applied it to her mind with his/her own affect mind power. For four hours she endured it until she fainted and they would have stopped at two hours but she wanted them to push her to her limit which was admirably foolish yet commendable.
Trial of Insight: This was done by physical items since illusions would have no way of effecting Jojo due to her force sight proving as a high advantage. She was given several puzzles and had to see the item within and then decipher what they would make. The test was oddly difficult to tell as three images popped up on a hologram and she spent a good amount of time analyzing each projection to find the key links. There was a blur over the first, a smudge over the second, and a red crystal glyph in the third with which she uncovered the dark sides potential to smudge and obscure the sight of any being whether true sight, force sight, or even sights into the future as she would delve into the remaining lesson of "The dark side clouds everything."
After the 5 trials completion she would be commended, told what she did poorly with and how to train upon it and then given the rank of Jedi Knight as her status elevated and yet her life become tighter woven into the Jedi Order's beliefs.
RP Sample: Jojo would enter a forested island with many temples surrounding the area. She had no idea of what to expect from her master hear and yet she knew of what was to happen. This is where she would fight him after her brutal mind conversion of the Sith power she was taught. She knew he ran here of all places since this was where the tracker on his shuttle said he was at. She was to fight him and for that she would ideally do so with the utmost honor of her system. She would serviceably carry out the ideal with her own honor and in hopes to change him.
Viel was waiting on the roof of the center spire as she would look up at him and then call out, "Surely you can't believe in what you’re doing. You are a Jedi Master yet you are following the Sith creed!"
He would merely look at her with a contemptible face as he gave a spiky tooth grin as his eyes were focused on her alone as he ignited his blade. Around his neck was the Sith holocron he found on this world as he would follow the Sith creed to the letter. He would ignite his blade as he jumped in the air with a swirl of his blade and a flurry of attacks.
Jojo on the other hand would ignite her blades, one was backwards ignition and the other upright ignition, as she would follow after with a preparation of her mind as she as well Force Jumped to follow and while in the air their fight lasted all the way to the ground where they attacked each other with jabs and strikes. Jojo's left arm waged the attack where her right furrowed the defense. She would ideally make his anger rise but then she would attempt her force telepathy, a skill she was up most horrible at, as she would attempt to touch the bond between the two while also encouragingly repeating the Jedi code over and over with every block and strike. He would soon ask of her to strike down him as she would concur only after she made sure the bond between the two was pure and non-dark.
Race: Miraluka
Age: 25
Height: 5' 7"
Weight: 124 lbs
Appearance:
Her cloak is a light gray cloak while underneath she wears a tight fitting emerald tunic. Jojo is considered small for being a Mandalorian offspring but also average height for her Miralukan mother; she is average height of normal Humanoid species. Jojo has a slender yet curved body with a small chest but long arms and legs. Her hair is not seen but it is normally brown with slight curls. She veils her blind eyes; in which, she uses Force Sight to see. She has a tight muscle tone in her arms and legs that have helped her through her survival tests as well.
Personality: Jojo is the subordinate of the Jedi Order and does what is asked of her. She cares not what it takes so long as it will get done while she is alive. She attempts to make peace with the enemies that she encounters though sometimes her charisma isn't enough for them so they decide her words are meaningless. She dreads only one deed in her past; though, the deed only helped make her own inner self stronger.
Now for a more in depth description of Jojo, she is personally a friendly and outgoing person who always will push her belief of justice on someone who thinks death is the only answer or even if war is the only way to go in a situation. She is the kind of person who will go out of her way to set up circumstances to fit her favor. She is stubborn in that she follows a code of valor and other things such as trust, loyalty, morals, and integrity. Following these she will perform what needs done when it needs to be done.
Birth place: Ilum
Faction: Jedi
Rank: Sentinel: Knight
Lightsaber (1): Single Blade
Color: Viridian
Lightsaber (2): Single Blade
Color: Viridian
Practiced Lightsaber forms:
Shii-Cho: 5
Makashi: 0
Soresu: 0
Ataru: 0
Shien / Djem So: 0
>>Sub-form Backhanded: 0
Niman: 0
>>Sub-form Jar-kai, or Dual Wield: 4
Juyo: 0
Double Bladed Combat: 0
Force-Sensitive Abilities or practices:
Telekinetic: 3
Telepathic: 5
Body: 5
Sense: 4
Protection: 2
Healing: 4
Destruction: 1
Specialized Skills: Battle Meditation and Force Sight
Attributes
Physical Strength: 5
Intelligence: 6
Speed: 5
Leadership: 4
Unarmed: 4
Melee Weapons: 3
Ranged Weapons: 2
Force Attunement: +4
Bio:
Birth and Youngling years
[/b]Age: 0 - 4[/b]
Miraluka, Makire Leanne, and Mandalorian (Human), Jak'Jok, were both apart of a mercenary group noted for their brutality during a mission, this unlikely couple was formed during a mercenary mission where the two of them were a duo for the mission that lasted extensively and a bond formed between the two. The Miralukan female wanted nothing more to do with the murder of a congress senator where as the Mandalorian never was convinced of the sentimental views. Soon enough their journey landed on the planet of Ilum.
Born on the Jedi Planet Ilum by the Mandalorian and Miraluka, but as her umbilical cord was cut in the hospital the Mandalorian would kill the mother by putting a poison in her, only after the nurses and doctors were not looking. The child, he assumed, would die from the environment here. She was found by a Jedi who was old in years named Viel. Well known for his uncanny liking of large ice monuments but also his constant visitation of the hospital where she was left in the lap of her dying mother. As he bounded a corner her mother had seen him and cried out to him to rescue her child. This Jedi would not stop until the cries of the child were formed and heard. It was then that the child's future would shift and she would be taken to the Jedi Temple of Ilum in the nursery only to transfer to the temple on Corascant.
Age 5-7
She would indulge herself with the leaning of the histories inside her own room before becoming a learner of the Jedi. This would involve her learning the history and the mention of several key people in the ages while also learning the different scenarios that a Jedi took during their own lives while also the scenarios of the fights against the sith lords.
...
Age: 5-12
While learning how to use a blade she was taught to manifest her Force Sight at a better rate where it didn't exhaust her to do so, only then could she learn an advanced saber form. She could see those who are of the dark side and of the light side. Not to mention those in between. During this her Shii-Cho training could only deprive from the actual training with remote droids at which she always practiced with an unusual number of two. She personally developed the sequence with the help of her soon to be master, Viel, whom encouraged her to program the drones to a specific sequence at which every shot from the drones would be randomly aimed at her body's high extremities to her low extremities.
Padawan
Age: 13-15
Upon mastering her force sight to the level of a pure bred Miraluka she would begin her real tests and it was at this time she became a padawan to Master Viel, the same one that found her when she was abandoned. She was to learn the next steps of the Shii-Cho form; in which, she learned at an astonishing rate. During this training Viel had begun his teachings to her of the core Force Powers that all Jedi learn one point of their lives.
Each force power she learned was a different potential whether a complete failure or a great aptitude. She had shown this under the different areas of the core powers. The powers recorded as Control she only was able to manifest Force Speed to an extent and the other two were more than a failure to her. The powers known as the Force Sense powers she was already well aware of given the Force sight but also far sight. Force empathy was still beyond her as well as her force telepathy was very low in skill. Her Telekinesis skills had a lot of development to do before she was ready for any of them.
...
Age: 16
During morning lessons one day, a time designated to force power training; she had showed great aptitude to telepathic and telekinetic powers. These powers ranged from the small force persuade and push to the immense battle meditation and force whirlwind. She was in the divide of Counselor and guardian specialties where as according to her skill set she was best fit for the Sentinel tier. Master Viel noticed this and pushed her to master one of the three things leaving everything else in the center. This was Battle Meditation in which she would be in a meditative trance with all but a small fraction of her mind indulging to bring a calming yet highly potent feeling of greatness that could well up inside anyone of the meditative rooms surrounding hers.
...
Age: 17
Late in her Shii-Cho training at the center padawan level she would be tutored to learn the forms of force spin, jump, and run to style her for the acrobatic style of Form IV. But it was soon demised when she had trouble with force run and spin, though her force jump skills were excellent, she would be taught Jar'kai, the Dual-wield Form, where she would be balanced in her self and merged learning that strived from other forms while using the most time in the form of Jar'kai using graceful fighting tactics.
The Jar’kai, dual wield, form itself used the style of two blades and she was quite graceful in the transitions of the styles that worked for her hand in hand. She still only had training sabers but even then she was having quite a good aptitude for such a way of fighting. For the next 6 months her training was 7 hours of Battle Meditative studies, 2 hours of other force training, 1 hour break and cool down, 6 hours of Jar'kai training. This gave 8 hours, three sets of thirty minutes broken in intervals from awaken, after Battle Meditative studies, and then after the first three hours of Jar'kai training. The other six hours and thirty minutes was her resting period. This was indeed a dangerous mix-up but all the same she had the training and stamina for such an immense schedule.
Age: 18
There were few instances that she was not in this training experience and those few were the times for missions. She would be accompanied by Master Viel as the two would travel through different worlds to gather the artifacts of the dark side. One mission in particular had a lasting effect that strengthened the bond between her master and herself. This mission was to retrieve a certain artifact of the Sith teachings that was not just a tome or something but an actual holocron. She had learned of these artifacts in the past but this one unparticular had a reason to be treated as a high priority mission, perfect for the two of them. They were to retrieve it in any way possible but with this ideal the problem was that she had to retrieve it from a group of battle ready mercenaries.
This group was the same as her father's group as she would learn her father was the leader of this group though at the time she didn't know he was her father until he was dieing at her feet. Her master and herself had to retrieve the artifact with as little fighting as possible but her father, who hoarded the object, hadn't went down without the fight as the two had battled him and his guard of 8 camouflaged warriors. This fight was inevitable with an outcome predestined as Jojo used the battle meditation to raise the influence of her master with images of victory and while doing so she was slowly draining her own self to exhaustion. She had a direct link with her master to allow the distance inevitably as far as the whole settlement but as such she was easily exhausted as her father was struck down in front of her meditation sight as he died clutching the holocron and said one phrase, "Live... my daughter..." She had learned the reason to her upbringing and through that she had spent a whole day just to meditate on the events as she tried to keep herself from mental ruin. She would live one as her father had commanded but also with a place of kindness in her heart for knowing he had at least said one thing to her before passing on...
...
Age: 19
Jojo Kaguya was given the single mission of creating a lightsaber by Master Viel whom was planning to leave her there as he would venture into deep space in search for a certain artifact of the sith on his own mission. He had left her on a forested moon of Onderan, aka Duxn, where she was to go into crystalline caves where she would meditate and build her own Lightsaber with the silvery green Viridian crystals. She never understood why he left her but she would eventually understand in time. Of course during the months she had battled her fair share staying out of site and knowledge of the mandalorians whom were on this planet as she was avidly in the midst of being found no matter what path she took. But eventually after defeating a Zar'rok she would find the right cave tunnel and dive into the shelter yet also the troubles of the sith powered cave that was powered by the burial of a sith lord meters above her. She would however find some light blue aura surrounding fungi that housed the crystals and thus her lightsaber building would begin and unfold to two lightsabers...
Her master on the other hand had passed her to another teacher during this time to study the Sith artifact in the deep space world she had never heard off. However the master would fall to the dark side and only then send a transmission to his old padawan to return and see him once more. Little did he himself know that this would be the final encounter between the two of them.
Age: 20-21
As the months passed after her creation of her own blades she received a transmission from her old master to see him again on some far off system that he also gave coordinates to. The final seeing of her master, whom had left her on Duxn and then passed her off to another master, would teach her one of the darkest abilities of the dark side of the force using the torture of the mind to decrease someone's resolve of living into a wish for a more horrid fate, but only after using a powerful torment mind on her to follow instruction. She would attempt it once but after a failure that affected her own mind's weakness; as well as destroyed the torment mind on her, she would now see the critical shift in that moment to see her own master had shifted to the dark side. She would battle her master after countless moments battling where she took and collected his double edge Cyan Lightsaber, and his remains, that would be buried soon at an enclave on Ilum. She had affected him in the end of their fight where he was slowly coming to peace as he had wanted her to kill him but as she had done so her mind influxed to pain her to the point of her dark force powers being a mere child's play work, as in weakened to that of a young dark acolyte's.
However this didn't do anything but boost her own resolve by knowing her dark side sorcery she had been taught won't be as dominative as it was then. And after returning to Corascant she would have his lightsaber placed inside a burial place on an enclave somewhere on Ilum where also his remains would return to as a final resting place.
Knight
Age:22+
Jojo would enter the Jedi temples later after hours of meditation in the past two months of coming to terms with the death of her previous master, Viel, as well as training her battle meditation and sight to heights of formidable prowess. Now 22, she would ask to become a Jedi Knight of the order and seeing how she is now old enough to become what she asked to be, as well as she has proven herself to be past the padawan learner stage she would undergo the trials. The feat of defeating the rogue Jedi was in her opinion as well as the council's a feat worthy of the initiate trial. The next five trials were done in the following years.
Trial of Skill: She was pitted to go head to head with a Jedi Guardian of her same age but he had trained his whole life to Form IV, one she studied for the longest of times in books and tomes. She would then go into a dual with stun sabers against this bulky form. He used the form well and with such finesse with the dual blade. But even with his heaviest strikes her dual-wield form of Jar'kai had been irritating to her adversary whom relied on his strength and not his wits as she dodged and weaved through to merely match his blows with gentle but effective pins on his dominant arm as he soon fell to the numbness in his arm and then his chest after he let his right arm hang for a second giving her an opening.
Trial of Courage: By a simulation in the Trial Chamber she was simulated to defeat two sith lords. Each was an apparent on of the past she had studied long ago in a tome that easily was recognized by their size. The one who was smaller was recognized to be the force user while the bigger one was a relevant fighter wielding a large gamorean axe and the other had no weapons apparent. She would battle them with difficulty as she had plenty of close calls but the one she had to watch out for was the smaller of the two as she would use her force push to knock the bigger of the two back as the aim was to terminate the smaller one. After a success she would do all she could to resolve the matter with words of the Jedi order to disrupt the bigger one's resolve and ideology which soon resolved to the big one's termination.
(I do not know if this actually could be accepted but noting that Obiwan's fight with Darth Maul was acceptable I'd say this would be as well)
Trial of Spirit: Done in a meditative trance with a Jedi master actively with her as a guide she would delve into the darkest memory of that which she killed the Master Viel. After a short fight the master's body would shape shift into a cloaked face that swirled with a warp around it that seemed to be mind bottling but at the moment of the strike down the face twirled and revealed to be her own face. She overcame this and as such she was horridly unable to speak for a week from the trauma of having an instance occur in her own mind.
Trial of Flesh: Her lightsaber remained extinguished for this trial as she had met this trial head on for an old dead, but effective ritual. The burning was a choice by the padawan to endure at this time until its incarceration later in the years as she was pitted to endure the fierce burning of not just her skin but mind by two Iridonian Masters. One applied the pressure at her back and the other applied it to her mind with his/her own affect mind power. For four hours she endured it until she fainted and they would have stopped at two hours but she wanted them to push her to her limit which was admirably foolish yet commendable.
Trial of Insight: This was done by physical items since illusions would have no way of effecting Jojo due to her force sight proving as a high advantage. She was given several puzzles and had to see the item within and then decipher what they would make. The test was oddly difficult to tell as three images popped up on a hologram and she spent a good amount of time analyzing each projection to find the key links. There was a blur over the first, a smudge over the second, and a red crystal glyph in the third with which she uncovered the dark sides potential to smudge and obscure the sight of any being whether true sight, force sight, or even sights into the future as she would delve into the remaining lesson of "The dark side clouds everything."
After the 5 trials completion she would be commended, told what she did poorly with and how to train upon it and then given the rank of Jedi Knight as her status elevated and yet her life become tighter woven into the Jedi Order's beliefs.
RP Sample: Jojo would enter a forested island with many temples surrounding the area. She had no idea of what to expect from her master hear and yet she knew of what was to happen. This is where she would fight him after her brutal mind conversion of the Sith power she was taught. She knew he ran here of all places since this was where the tracker on his shuttle said he was at. She was to fight him and for that she would ideally do so with the utmost honor of her system. She would serviceably carry out the ideal with her own honor and in hopes to change him.
Viel was waiting on the roof of the center spire as she would look up at him and then call out, "Surely you can't believe in what you’re doing. You are a Jedi Master yet you are following the Sith creed!"
He would merely look at her with a contemptible face as he gave a spiky tooth grin as his eyes were focused on her alone as he ignited his blade. Around his neck was the Sith holocron he found on this world as he would follow the Sith creed to the letter. He would ignite his blade as he jumped in the air with a swirl of his blade and a flurry of attacks.
Jojo on the other hand would ignite her blades, one was backwards ignition and the other upright ignition, as she would follow after with a preparation of her mind as she as well Force Jumped to follow and while in the air their fight lasted all the way to the ground where they attacked each other with jabs and strikes. Jojo's left arm waged the attack where her right furrowed the defense. She would ideally make his anger rise but then she would attempt her force telepathy, a skill she was up most horrible at, as she would attempt to touch the bond between the two while also encouragingly repeating the Jedi code over and over with every block and strike. He would soon ask of her to strike down him as she would concur only after she made sure the bond between the two was pure and non-dark.
)If you insist on putting commentary in the stats, at least try to keep it easy to understand. This is complicated.
This is confusing. Was there something edited out from before and not edited throughout? Explain please?