Mara
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Aug 14, 2011 0:07:38 GMT -5
Post by Mara on Aug 14, 2011 0:07:38 GMT -5
Please read the Civilian Tips thread.
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Aug 14, 2011 17:55:56 GMT -5
Post by snip417 on Aug 14, 2011 17:55:56 GMT -5
Could you please be more specific otherwise I'm probably gonna spen 3 days on this, so please tell me what to do better,other than the Bio which is to short edited a more discriptive version of the bio. thank you
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Mara
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Aug 15, 2011 0:56:42 GMT -5
Post by Mara on Aug 15, 2011 0:56:42 GMT -5
Please read more carefully.
1). You have the old password and need the new one.
2). The knife and blaster need more description at the very least, if not a link to a weapon app if they're custom.
3). Even without reading the bio, your stats are way too high for how little I can tell the bio contains.
I would suggest reading through some accepted characters as well as the information on the template thread and the Tips thread to get a better idea.
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Mara
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Sept 12, 2011 17:58:16 GMT -5
Post by Mara on Sept 12, 2011 17:58:16 GMT -5
I see you have made some edits, but it's still listed as "WIP."
If you are finished and ready for a review, please remove that, and post a reply in here saying you're ready.
If you're not, please let me know that, too.
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Sept 15, 2011 19:37:05 GMT -5
Post by snip417 on Sept 15, 2011 19:37:05 GMT -5
still working on little bits
my internet was down for awhile
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Mara
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Sept 16, 2011 19:24:12 GMT -5
Post by Mara on Sept 16, 2011 19:24:12 GMT -5
All right, let me know whenever it's ready.
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Mara
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Oct 14, 2011 18:21:34 GMT -5
Post by Mara on Oct 14, 2011 18:21:34 GMT -5
No new edits in over a month...
This is being moved to Incomplete for the time being. You may still work on him there. Ask to have him moved back to Pending when he's ready for review.
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