Name: Klon Driviz
Race: Kiffar
Age: 52
Height: 5'11 ft
Weight: 172 pounds
Appearance: 
He has jet black hair that is somewhat shaggy and goes back into a single long braid. He has a young youthful look mostly because he takes care of himself by being very clean eating very healthy as well as working out to keep up a well toned body. He has something of a sharp chin and seems to look very handsome.He looks as if he is in his early 30s at least. He is always clean cut having no hair on his face to add on to the young look.
There is a tattoo all over most of his upper back.The tattoo is a yellow line going though a oval shape in between his shoulders on his back.He has a light brown skin tone and brown eyes. along with tattoos, two yellow lines going under his right eye. That being one other part of being a Kiffar, the tattoo.
His outfit is that of the common jedi in that its simply brown robes and a white under shirt.His left shoulder wears a thick white plate that is very strong when it comes to protection from sabers and blaster shots. On his hands a brow leather like gloves along with black leather like combat boots.He also keeps on a brown cloak with a hood.
Personality:He is a mostly Peaceful man who would more then likely take a persons arm or remove there weapons then kill. That's what he often does if fighting a person he has no reason to out right kill. He is not the type to always think things out after the first plan goes wrong...He works out a few ideas in his head before going into a battle. Although he is very flexible when it comes to going from a plan to winging it. He seeks to end the sith and there evil ways in the most peaceful way possible. He is the type to hide in the shadows then run out into the fight wild and violently swinging his sabers around like some. He is devoted to form zero in that he tries to avoid combat when ever he can.
He never speaks of the darkside and what happened on his home world. After his fathers death by the hand of a dark jedi, something he totally remembers his goal has become to show people the way to the light of the force. He feels a deep longing to be as great as most of the jedi masters that he has come to know in his youth. He is very devoted to the order and puts his trust in the hands of the order at all times.
He hates to kill, so he would always try to find a way to avoid that mostly by not fighting if it is not called for, and he is shown to run away from a battle more often then not. But He also fears the power he has had all his life, the power rare to Kiffar kind. He can not control the power well as a youngling and sometimes he sees something he dislikes and would sometimes be out of breath after for some unknown reason.There is even now still moments were the ability activates outside of his control.
He has a basic understanding of most combat styles and force abilities.
No, he doesn't. You need to make sure all aspects of the application reflect those changes you've made already. He is known as a hard worker and kind man. He is also thought to be wise and giving, often giving credits to the poor in the event he passes them on the street.He is also easy to look up to and students are often very devoted to his teachings.
Birth place: Kiffu
Faction: Jedi
Rank: Sentinel Jedi Master ~Force-Sensitive Child recruiter/Teaching Assistant
Bio:Youngling he was born on his home world of Kiffu living with his mother and father a former marksmen for the Galactic Republic's army. His dad was kiraai and mother lizzra Driviz. He was born in a wide open space on a peaceful part of the world.
He lived in a small home alone with mom and dad, they lived a nice life after Kiraai got from the army after losing a arm to a dark jedi he had the luck to kill. One day when he was 4 years old a hurt man showed up at there door. So his kind mother helped him and let him stay for three days with his father's okay.
This man was a dark jedi and after they helped him he shows he had a reason for stopping at there home other then the fact he was badly wounded. He was the brother of the man Kiraai had killed many years ago and had come to deal with him.So he killed Klon's mother and father then burned there home to the ground. Klon got away because he had gone into town with a family friend, and was lucky he was not there.
Then he was found by a group of jedi who showed up a short time after Klon found what was left of his home. They could feel the force in him, so after asking how would Klon feel about becoming a jedi.He said yes he had lost his family and his home so there was no reason to stay.
Because of that they took him back with them after there mission was done hours later. The jedi had been on a mission hunting this dark jedi who had just turned on the order.The same man who just took Klon's family from him. The master liked him a great deal for his respect and kind heart. He also was friendly with most other younglings of his years.He learned many basics and what life as a jedi would be like. This made a small impact on the way he sees things from that point on.
The family friend had tried to keep him from going but he could not. Klon felt that would be better then being alone. He started training right away after going. He seemed to have a high midichlorian count from what was said when he joined.He was well trained by the jedi teachers as a youngling and by age 13 he was told he was of age to get a master. He showed a balanced level of power with both force and lightsaber combat and was taken on by a master of the same type.
PadawanSoon he had a master and not only a master, but a well known friend. he stuck with him for about 10 years before his death at the hands of a powerful jedi who turned on the order. His master was never found after going on a solo mission. He was always with his master training and learning in his own way and they were like father and son in some ways. He was said to be one of the most powerful masters known as the human krcuck delonnu.He was skilled with his lightsaber and helped his student master it the best he could.
His time with Krcuck was a time of great learning. He learned how to fly a star ship from his master and he learned how to control his abilities from him also. krcuck was a good male Nautiloid who was born on naboo. He looked after Klon from the age of 8. He had planed to take him as a student for about that long. It was training day in and day out. He had a great deal of respect for that man and they had gone on 81 missions with each other before Krcucks death. less then half were peaceful. His master would always keep a cool head. This would effect Klon's feelings also.
They were on many missions with each other and only became closer with time.His time with his master who was a duel wielder he soon learned to duel wield his saber with one other.He became effective with it over time and showed his master some proof he would one day best him. They were on 39 missions with each other before Klon could even take the knight trials.
He died only days before his his student's trial for knight and Klon did not find out about this for almost a week after his rank up to knighthood.The lost of his master was painful and hard to deal with for months but he good over it after coming very close to the darkside. After that time he took the knight trials.
His master was a great man of many styles, known as a master of Ataru, Niman, and Duel wielding sabers. He started teaching Klon how to improve his body though the force and his Telekinetic ability. His body training was simple, simple test of the bodies limits though lifting weights and running laps, and leaping large objects as well to train before adding the force itself to the work outs. This was a day by day thing for Klon until he was highly skilled. Klon would later train his own students in the same way.
His telekinetic training was much harder, in that he used the force to do reps with large objects starting with things of size of a blaster up to the size of Speeders, (and in his own training later, star ships would be used) while deflecting in coming stones thown though the force. It was hard training and long rest after was common.
Niman training was almost every day from the age of 13 up. By the time he was 15 the Niman training had started with two lightsabers to complete the training.He had known right away he had a talent for it( Mastering single hand Niman by 28 and duel saber Niman by 32) as he could use both hands in a balanced manner. Although at the same time he got a basic understanding of all common styles (One month of training in each style.) Although this was just to help Klon understand what would be best for him to learn and practice in combat as a jedi.He picked Niman, but planned to work on Ataru a bit as well. only mastering it about half way, he thought why not like the other styles take what he had learned and use it to improve his Niman. He worked and worked to turn it into a great weapon.
His senses were growing fast like his other abilities and were thought strong not mastered at that age (But mastered by the time he was a master jedi.) He was thought of as one who could someday be of great use to the republic and the order from a young age.By the time he was taking the jedi knight trials his jump was 6x stronger and could over power some two handed fighters with a single arm.His reasons for leaving behind a saber to Klon was because he had known he was about to die. so did away with his float.
Klon put some work into making this ability that he was blessed with from childhood useful by training and mastering it though the practice of sense related abilities as well. Though hard work and training he gained the ability to read the freshes memories of the living witch was almost unheard of.Although he often sommoned up the power without meaning to when the signs started to show at age 24.
He just worked with it more and more and by 40 he was controling it almost as well as the normal form of this abiity.He only focuses on this the way he does inorder to be so good that he could take information from dark jedi without much trouble. Even learn locations of hidden bases although he almost never gets a chance to test it out in that manner. It also helps him find the Force-Sensitive in minor ways when used with his sense that is greater then most of the best even.
How does psychometry (you're vague but I'm assuming that's what you're referencing as from his childhood) help take secret information from other Force users? And if you don't mean psychometry, his telepathy skill is only 4. Not enough to read disciplined minds' secrets.Making a lightsaberHe had made up his mind about making a lightsaber to look like that of his master so he had the same type of items used to build it just not the same crystals. He was given a green lightsaber crystal like he asked for and also had gone on a hunt for a very powerful and rare crystal.He had gone on a hunt For the Solari Crystal his master told him about in his younger years.Ilum is were he had gone for 20 days on a hunt for the Crystal before finding it in the hands of a frozen dead body in a pit of snow. He pulled out the body then Took the Crystal for himself.He then had gone back home to make his saber just like his masters.
TrailsTrial of SkillIn the Jedi Trials Chamber there was a program set up to test young Klon's skills. For the test he was to battle a program of a dark jedi of the past. The jedi was a Kiffar with the same powers as Klon himself. He was known as doji'nnda koz. He was known as a jedi hunter in his day and was truly evil. He was what any Kiffar who gives in to the darkness would become. After a long battle Klon had thrown his lightsaber into the chest of Dokji'nnda.Ending the long battle on a high point passing the trial.He won using his skills in Shii-Cho to over come the other jedi.He one with many counter attacks and with his ability to make opening with the power of the force. He had pushed back the dark jedi with his most powerful force push and when the man jumped into the air for a diving counter attack at Klon he used that opening for one more force push. As the dark jedi rises he is pulled by the draw closer attack and impaled on the saber.used that opening to put his saber into the chest of the evil kiffar.
Trial of fleshFor his trial of flesh he had gone back to his old home world.
Bring out his dislike of the dark side and the jedi who break down and fall into. This was also when he started to think about his dislike for himself for not being there to protect his own people. He had remembered his father was part of the army. He feels some of the time he should have taken that path.He then at that time came across a newly rouge jedi. The boy could not have been older then 16 and he was also Kiffar.
The boy attacked Klon out of fear and and Klon had a hard time talking up arms to a boy so much like him in his younger years.Klon was cut all over his body and in pain to some level but, he soon found himself with a goal to free the boy from the trouble he had just given himself. At the end Klon disarmed the boy and when he had fallen to the ground and tears started to fall from his eyes.
The fear was so clear the sadness and everything else he had felt shortly before had right then left his heart and he let the boy go free but took away his lightsaber as he himself left. He made the boy swear he would give up the life of a jedi and avoid the force from that point on.He totally understands that his win should have been flawless but he went into combat with a clouded mind and trying to avoid ending the child's life.His lost master that was clouding his mind at this time also counted to this trial.
Trial of CourageFor his trial of courage he was to fight a hologram of his master. It was a hard fight he lost it but it was a great try. He keep the fight going for some time and never backed down even a little. He was to fight somebody stronger that's what he did. He learned a great deal from it and would only become better form that point on.He passed by having the Courage to take on his master who he had known he could not beat.
trial of SpiritFor his trial of spirit he had gone into Meditation for a whole day and he saw something. He saw himself fighting side by side with the dark jedi who took his family and his master. he was fighting a hooded man who was about the same size with the same skills as Klon. First he saw the man kill the dark jedi then his master and after he was killed. And when the hooded man turned it was him. It was the darkness within him and what would happen if he gives in to it. He then came from the state in shock but he had better understanding of the force after.
After that he made his own lightsaber to look like his masters with a blue color. He was right then made a knight.
Age 24-32At the age of 24 he was posted in the jedi order as jedi teacher, or a care taker for the very young jedi in training. The jedi Klon took great care of the younglings and trained them before they had gone to learn with real masters. Klon soon took his own student when he turned 25.
The student was known as Kifali sijrez. He could tell right away this young man had a darkness to him and Klon was thinking he had what it took to change that. Klon soon found himself on a mission with his student in a space station. They dealt with things fast, But then a star ship crashed into the space station. It was the ship of somebody fighting off the people coming to pick up Klon and his student.Although in the end there ships wing would be hit and lose control hitting the station. Klon used his power to shut the doors and kind of stop the explodion, or weaken it. It still knocked down the doors but everybody made it out alive but Klon was badly hurt. He had fallen into a comma for the next year. Then after waking up he would be to weak for missions and rest and re learn basics most of the next year. This makes him work the next year on only basics.
When he would wake and find his student joined the dark side he would not speak or train for weeks after but moved on at some point. He would tell the order he did not wish to go back into the field for he was not ready. He would just become a jedi teacher and slowly work on re-building his skills for the next 10 years.
By then he would still be in something of a depression even when taking a new student and starting all over. He would try to avoid putting his student in danger so he trys to keep out of an fighting if he can. He tends to be a more peaceful jedi now and would often put his focus on the young thinking his time may have passed.
Klon started working on mastering this back when he was 17 years old under his masters watch and leadership. His master at that time was known as a very skilled master of the force valor, and was passing as much infermation on it as he could to Klon in his young days. This was the key to many lightsaber combat victories for his master and Klon used it to great effect on others as well. Klon was trained though combat were his master tries to force him to rely on it, and use it to the best of his abilities to try and match him. Klon often failed to come close to his masters level at this time, but he is still later approved the knight rank without complete knowledge of his master's ace force ability.
When he turned 29 people would often complement skill in this area saying that it's use and movement style only increased the already increadable nature of Klon's fight style. Klon loved to be compaired to people, his master, plus sister at times are fallowed . He trained all his students as much as he could with this and truly mastered and perfected it at 36, but that was very much his former students falt in that he hurt him then gave time to recover.He only advanced his force valor more when he was 44.This helps in his work to combine his other lightsaber elements with Neman/duel Wielding and make a more forceful and effective style.
taking a new student 32-38Some time after he woke from his comma he found out his student had fallen into the grasp of the dark side and he would have to train a new jedi. Turning 36 he took on a student to train as his padawan. They spent about 6 years in none combat missions.Only time will tell what happens later. He also plans to ask to be made a jedi master soon for he feels he has proven himself as a knight. His new padawan was a good kid but not very happy with the way he reacted to rules. So Klon would mostly devote the next 6 years of his life working on Ataru,Soresu, and Makashi.As well as heavy training for the boy before going back to teaching.
Klon learned this not long after his advance to master. He started using this ability without trying to do so a few times at the age of 32 only days after being named a master. He didn't understand at first so he studied up as much as one could to understand the ability and slowly master it. by the age of 38 he could create a small forest in about 4 hours though meditation. When he was 36 to 42 years old he practiced this twice a month for all 20 years. Around then it was mastered without much trouble.
A forest in four hours before he even has it mastered? I don't see that working. I also don't see two times a month being enough practice to master a skill.Training by memery 30-44He was trained mostly in lightsaber combat and training to improve speed and body force skills because his master told him speed in needed more then any other jedi skill. So that took time with his master and in free time he worked on his Telekinetic power to be more useful in the field. His master also trained him to help him learn the force repulse as it was a force power Klon could use someday.After learning this and mastering it he was finally balancing his sense with Telekinetics, two abilities he had that was near the same level to start. Its very powerful and took klon 3 years to learn it after many hours of training each day to get it just right. He had to learn that skill to protect himself.He also learned the Saber Barrier
That's still a disallowed aspect. from his master.Body force powers were also a focus he always trained to get to a very high level before taking a student. Some time at the again of 38 he learned Repulse
You dropped this from your skills list, it shouldn't still be in your bio. from a much younger jedi who learned the ability from his master. He worked for some time to get it to a mastered level.
He also became well known for his Telekinetic and sence powers. He spent years training the two areas and worked on improving his body with the force years before that. His first student had joined the darkside only weeks after he was about to be named a knight. Although he had also proved himself in combat and work as a deplomate as well. He was then named a master after seeing all of this.
He trained in the force choke only slightly but it is a ability very easy to master. Even with limited ability with dark side force abilities something like this is easy to work out. He learned this on a mission when his first padawan learner was shot in the shoulder, he for a moment gave in to rage and choked the man though the force until the attacker passed out. He felt a need to work with the force choke in the event he needs it again someday.Klon also picked up on a weaker form of force lightning that tends to work as a stunning attack, less so then a real offence.He never turns to his dark side powers unless the order says the enemy is to powerful to be left alive.
Force choke and lightning for someone with a +6 and a 2 in destruction? That doesn't add up. Time of Re-discovery 44-48:At this point in time Klon was approved to take a short term leave from the main Temple to devote some time to direct training of the jedi arts. After heavy thought was given on the matter klon was given a 4 year leave to Mustafar to re-vamp his training and improve as a jedi.
Klon at this time would leave for the planet and start his lone training as he had few friends he could devote his time to growing more skilled in combat though out his life. So 4 years of training alone would be perfect. He would devote a whole two years to improving his Ataru and at least a month more training in each other style and coming up with knew ways to add each and every style on to his Niman, as Niman was no more then a combination of all styles to begin with...
He had done something new
You had me expecting something new. This is what Niman is. If you want him to have a unique take on it, don't just describe what the style is. with Niman after the first two years. By the end of his time there he could combine the force with all his Niman movements to improve physical traits though out the fight and use fast pace leaps and strikes. Then because of the Djem So and Soresu style he thought to keep one saber back at all times to to protect himself from counter blows and only attack with both sabers when going for the killing blow. From the Makashi style he combines flowing movements with swift controled strikes. From Shien he thinks to counter blaster bolts from many angles though the use of both sabers and reflecting the blast as often as one can. Shii-Cho gave understanding of the best ways to disarm swiftly and over power more then one target at once without always aiming to kill.
He mixed all of that with normal Niman to make something that matches him but overall is still just a high level use of Niman duel wielding. So he would give up all the four years of free time to train harder each day. He had by then gained a strong understanding of his lightsabers and had been named a true master of the Niman style while just being what one would expect of a Shii-Cho master.
He would on his last two years focus on force training getting back to the fundamintals of his training given to him by his master.He had kept on working with his lightsaber forms, but most of the work was focused around his force powers at this time. It took some time but he had taken his masters old training to a new extreme as he was using large star fighters for his reps a day telekinetic training. and with the help of other jedi speed enhancement training with a bit of strength work as well.Also some life sense training and force sight as well. He was moving to a whole new level and proud of it.
By his last six days the enclave
Which enclave? had gotten a distress call and rushed into battle to save the distressed and Klon felt a need to join. He felt uneasy the whole way and so did the other three jedi masters in the group of ten. When they got to the location they were attacked by a total 18 dark jedi. Klon and the others were fighting to the best of there abilities but the dark jedi had the numbers. Although every jedi got at least one kill, as for Klon's up-graded Niman managed to sweep though a total six with a little help from the force and his great speed and tactical abilities.
Although after he had cut though six the real challenge would come, the one he would face his own. His former student had shown himself to Klon, after some monologing a fight came to pass. It was one hell of a death match as Klon's former student was Kifali sijrez who would right away take his lightsaber into the battle with a master he remembered very closely. Klon took sometime but managed to over come the great Niman skills of his former student though the Greater knowlege and duel blades he held. Klon would
Did, not would. This isn't hypothetical.kill with a saber though the right shoulder with the follow up of a saber thought the right hip and coming from the other. This was a hard moment for the jedi and he was heart broken, but what happend next would bring back faith as Klon's former student would smile and say
"Thank you master... It was not the dark side that made me strong, but you... I am to join the force soon.... Please forgive me for my sins, thats the last thing I want from this world... Last words I want to hear, please forgive me..." Grabbing his hand Klon would say
"I forgive you..." and that very same moment life would seem to just vanish from the body of this once loved student. The jedi had lived only losing two masters and two knights with only two more knights wounded badly.
As Klon walks back with only the most minor of the wounds before going back to the jedi main temple
Incomplete sentence, incorrect tense.. That is were he would ask that he be free to take on new students and devote his free time to youngling training as a teacher. At that point Klon felt he had come to his limits of his power and it was time to help the younger serpass him already. He was only a teacher for 9 years in fact if the one year after becoming a knight is not counted.He would be approved and simply move on.
48-52 looking for students:He would at this point dedicate himself to his work as a teacher in-order to find somebody he can work with at some point. There was a number of students who proved they could make skilled jedi some day and finding one would only be a matter of time. Klon around this time only trained in free time whenever he got it that is. As a teacher he seemed to value his students and teach them in mostly the same way he learned. He by this time had a good idea of who he wanted to train. By this time he was one of the orders greatest Shii-Cho masters and even more so a extremely well known master of duel saber combat.His tactics are thought to be very effective and he is loved by his students and thought to be extremly wise amoung the order.
Lightsaber: Dual Wield
Color: one blue and one purple
Green lightsaber: He made his blade to look just like his masters. The saber his master for some reason left behind for him before his death. It holds a Solari crystal making the beam wider and it becomes easier to block attacks, and deflect blaster bolts.
Modifications to anything besides color are still disallowed aspects. The rules didn't change between now and when I told you last time.Purple lightsaber (masters):His masters old lightsaber made by him was for some reason passed down to him before his masters passing.
Crystal:The crystal of this blade was the Opila crystal~was a type of crystal occasionally used in lightsaber construction. The crystal was mined in an asteroid field in the Fyrth system.
Practiced Lightsaber forms:Shii-Cho: 5
Makashi:0
Soresu:0
Ataru:4
niman:4
>>Sub-form Jar-kai, or Dual Wield: 5
Shien / Djem So: 0
Force-Sensitive Abilities or practices:Telekinetic: 7
Telepathic: 4
Body: 7
Sense: 8
Protection: 2
Healing: 4
Destruction:2
Specialized Skills:I'm still convinced that with three rare skills his main force powers or his saber skills need to take big hits. Generally the more important skills they show the lower their other skills need to be. You're still gunning for both numerous specialized skills and high force skills.Psychometry:the ability to read the memories of inanimate objects—including formerly animate objects like corpses—by touch.
Plant Surge[Mastered]
Force Valor[Mastered]
Attributes: Physical Strength: 6
Intelligence: 8
I see no evidence for this stat in the bio or personality.Speed: 6
Leadership: 8
Unarmed: 5
Melee Weapons: 5
Ranged Weapons: 2
Force Attunement:+6
RPthe skys were dark on the world of Mustafar. It was a great looking plant, very lush and green.The thing about the plant there was very little peace so a jedi enclave was set up there to protect the peace. Klon has been sent to help only time will tell what happens later. It was shocking to Klon to think the people who live on a planet so beautiful could be so divided and hateful the jedi needed to set up a enclave to keep the people from killing each other. Why would they risk a world so lush with confilict. Well he was mostly taken in by the jedi after the lost of his family so he had grown up with peaceful caring people.
He never really had known hate and all but forgot about his old family and never felt the need for revenge one the man who took him. His darkside would be very hard to find.He passed many masters and well known jedi so he showed them his respects in passing. He even showed there padawans a great deal of respect in passing.He may not have very much fame but he is brave, strong, kind and very respectful. He was loved by the people who had known him. He showed he valued all life as much as he did his own.
He had a goal to someday become a great master who the younglings could look up to and jedi could someday tell stories about his acts after his passing. He will follow any order if it is the will of the force and his fath in the jedi is very strong and only growing. As he walks into the area were he would be told his mission he moves in with his head high and spirit in tact.
After being imformed he would be on a mission to keep peace and step into the middle of a conflict Klon was nervice as at this time he was still a young man at this point in time but very brave. Stopping conflict was what the jedi did and he was now a trained jedi on his way to becoming a master even. Using the force he would locate the source of trouble as he and one other older jedi departed on speeder bikes.
Coming to the threat it was seeming to be no more then a emty dead forgoten area. So there was not much to be found or fixed in such a place and it had to be a trap. The moment Klon and the man turned to face the two who had set the trap they attacked with blasters, clearly bounty Hunters targeting the jedi in whatever sick ways they can think of. After a long combat the other jedi was shot and hurt badly so to finish up right away Klon deflected a few blaster bolts back at this one and before the last could reload his weapon a force thrown lightsaber would cut though the hand of the harmful targets. Whatever he thought about the two didn't matter, as he had simply turned and rides off with the wounded jedi on the bike back.He would later let the masters know of the trap as they slowly planning counter attacks...
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? This trial would be a good example... if it made sense with the rest of the bio.