Nehlan Jorin (Better remake)

[Nehlan Jorin]

Name: Nehlan Jorin
Race: Human
Age: 13
Height: 5'4"
Weight: 129 lbs
Appearance: Dark brown hair up in a small ponytail in the back, the front-right side of his hair in a ponytail holder or tucked behind his ear, letting the front-left side fall over his left eye, brown eyes, fair skin, black and grey robes. He always has some variable pair of goggles from his collection on his head that he puts down over his eyes in heated battles, and black Jedi pants with buckle-strapped black boots.
Birth place: Bonadan

Faction: Jedi
Rank: Youngling

Bio: Starting out very young in age, he hasnt done much but train in the ways of a Jedi. For half his life, before he was allowed or ready to weild a lightsaber, he was trained heavily in the Force, spending years on his home planet being pushed to use it, to lift and move things, to interact with ones mind, to heal someone who had been hurt, and to build the base of a great Jedi. Soon he was able to utilize many techniques with it at a young age with ease, and even able of using many challenging Force powers in everyday life. After his Force training was complete for then, he was tossed a lightsaber, and it wasnt too easy for him to learn this one. He really couldnt get how to hit an opponent who could block and move, and he didnt really understand or have much skill deflecting blaster fire in controlled directions or even being able to throw his lightsaber and make it come back to him, and it took him a while until he could finally figure out he could use the Force to help him with his lightsaber. Here was when he found an interest in and started to purchase, find, or make different kinds of goggles for a period of time, gather up a small collection, and wear them, a different pair each day or each time he had a chance to change. This fact may seem irrelevant, but he figured out that wearing and using his goggles while he trained and fought was what seemed to help him out a little bit with his lightsaber work, and after working hard with his lightsaber (and goggles), and as soon as he understood how to use it in combination with the Force, he became just a blur with one. Once the Force and lightsaber training he went through all his life was finally completed, and he was ready, he was sent on many trials of his family, to learn the ways of a Jedi. He was sent to far reaches of the planet, doing things for people, and being taught new things and new tactics everyday from those who offered to teach him other than his own family, and through these trials he learned a very lot about his lightsaber fighting style, how to use the Force directly against the opponent in many ways, and overall how to defend himself like a true Jedi in battle. After a time of finishing up his trials and proving himself as a great to-be Jedi, he is now going through the Academy as a Youngling, and he is wishing for a great Master to take him as Padawan and lead him to the path of a Jedi Knight.

Lightsaber: Single blade (Single-phase).
Color: Purple

Practiced Lightsaber forms:

Shii-Cho: 4
Makashi: N/A
Soresu: N/A
Ataru: N/A
Shien / Djem So: N/A
>>Sub-form Backhanded: N/A
Niman: N/A
>>Sub-form Jar-kai, or duel Weild: N/A
Juyo: N/A
Double Bladed Combat: N/A

Force-Sensitive Abilities or practices:

Force Push
Force Pull
Lightsaber Throw
Force Heal
A smaller form of Force Wall

Telekinetic: 5
Telepathic: 3
Body: 4
Sense: 4
Protection: 3
Healing: 2
Destruction: N/A

Specialized Skills: N/A As of now.


Attributes:

Physical Strength: 4
Intelligence: 6
Speed: 7
Leadership: 4

Unarmed: 4
Melee Weapons: 5
Ranged Weapons: N/A

Force Attunement: +5

RP Sample:
N/A As of now. (Youngling)

[Meira]

I suggest you look at some of our accepted profiles and read up on our time line and other rules.

I will tell you right now that this will not be accepted. The only place a child can receive force training (on this site) is from the Jedi at the Temple, or from a Dark Jedi. He would not be taught on his home planet. Here's some quick notes that you should take into account:

Children are brought to the Jedi Temple for training at some point before they turn 6, which is the cut off. They can be brought as an infant (which is likely the case if they are in the core world area where they would be detected quickly) or at later ages (the farther away they are, the longer it might take to be detected). They then train at the temple until they are taken as a padawan (some time between 10-13) They must be taken by 13, otherwise they either leave to live their own life, or go into a lesser service such as agri-corps or medi-corps. So if you are going for youngling status, then he cannot be 13, he must be younger.

Also, your stats reflect a character more in the late padawan, early knight range. Again I suggest looking at other characters to get a feel for the right numbers.

Lastly, do not make another thread, simply edit this one with changes. Post when you have done so, and I will come back and look over it again.