Post by Bourne on May 3, 2007 16:27:47 GMT -5
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Name: Vos Atreyu
Rank: Jedi Master
Homeworld: Kiffex
Age: 26
Species: Human - Keiffar
Gender: Male
Height: 6.1 ft
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Green
Parents:
Jade Atreyu
Jecen'ru Atreyu
Weapons:
Lightsaber x1
Color: Green
Equipment:
Varies Upon Jedi Order
Force Powers:
Force Wave
Force Repulse
Force Mind Trick
Telekinesis
Force Jump
Telekinesis
Force Pull/Push
Burst of Speed
Force Sense
Force Throw
Force Crush
Force Lightning
Precognition
Appearance:
Vos has dark black hair that falls past his shoulders. He can be seen usually wearing the above outfit. A band of pale yellow across his upper face represents his mothers’ markings, a Kiffex tradition. His eyes are green and once changed grey during his Sith phase. On his left hand is several scars indicating harsh times.
Personality:
Vos' feelings are mixed in the Jedi code and yet are still dabbled in the Sith during times of battle. This sole reason is why the Jedi Council keep a close eye on him and yet trust him for his fervor and expertise in the field. Vos was always liked by his Jedi peers and is very likeable among many ranked officials.
History:
Vos was the son of Jade and Jecen’ru Atreyu, members of Clan Atreyu, the rulers of Vos' home world before the ruling of the Vos' Clan. Vos was born with psychometric powers, and thus destined to become a Guardian like his parents. Most Kiffar had this psychometric ability to some degree, but Vos' latent ability with the Force enhanced his own, and he was considered by many to be the best exemplar of the ability that had ever been seen.
Vos did not have the abundance of time with his parents as most young Kiffar would, at a tender age he was met by a Jedi master and offered to become a Jedi; his family agreed. He was mentored and became a padawan to a famed Jedi known to that time. Master Filn. They trained vigorously during their time together. Vos became a jedi knight several years later at the age of 17. He often times accompanied the higher ranked jedi on missions to the beginning of the Jedi - Sith War.
Vos was quickly was held responsible for infiltrating the Sith high command. He succeeded on doing so and over time was considered a Sith. Years past by as he was trained in the Sith powers. Vos learned a great deal of the force that is the Sith. During this time he excelled under the eyes of his master and became a ranking Sith general. He was close to the dark side until Master Filn, a jedi counselor now, shocked him into realization. Vos completed his mission and destroyed a large amount of Sith and dark Jedi along with future plans for the space fleet.
The high Jedi council was speculating of his involvement in the Sith, he denied his involvement and was allowed to keep the rank of master. During his times as a "Sith" he underwent several light saber chances along with a hilt change as well.
Vos was considered one of the most inept force users of the Jedi of his time. He was adept in the dark and light side of the force making him especially brutal in combat, often times using the Dark side of the force more prevently than the Light.
Introduction:
Vos sat at a perch over looking the Jedi Temple and the surrounding area. The wind blew against is dark black hair making it wave in the breeze. The doors behind him open, Master Filhn walks beside the path to where Vos is sitting, he sighs as he sits down.
"Whats the matter?" Vos asks. "An approaching war is on hand and yet the Council see nothing. I'm becoming worried." The old Jedi Master layed back and looked into the stars. Master Filhn turned his head. "I'm sending you to Jabiim. There has been military activity there for quite some time now. I expect you will find something there." Vos nodded his head. "Will you be coming as well?"
"No I will not. I must tend to the order at hand here." Vos nodded his head again and made his way back into the Jedi Temple. Several guards eyed him as he strolled by. He wondered what they could possibly be looking at or thinking. He turned his head as he saw three Twi' Lek walk by him. Not even saying "excuse me". People were becoming increasingly rude and angry. The times were changing as if he were an old man.
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Name: Vos Atreyu
Rank: Jedi Master
Homeworld: Kiffex
Age: 26
Species: Human - Keiffar
Gender: Male
Height: 6.1 ft
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Green
Parents:
Jade Atreyu
Jecen'ru Atreyu
Weapons:
Lightsaber x1
Color: Green
Equipment:
Varies Upon Jedi Order
Force Powers:
Force Wave
Force Repulse
Force Mind Trick
Telekinesis
Force Jump
Telekinesis
Force Pull/Push
Burst of Speed
Force Sense
Force Throw
Force Crush
Force Lightning
Precognition
Appearance:
Vos has dark black hair that falls past his shoulders. He can be seen usually wearing the above outfit. A band of pale yellow across his upper face represents his mothers’ markings, a Kiffex tradition. His eyes are green and once changed grey during his Sith phase. On his left hand is several scars indicating harsh times.
Personality:
Vos' feelings are mixed in the Jedi code and yet are still dabbled in the Sith during times of battle. This sole reason is why the Jedi Council keep a close eye on him and yet trust him for his fervor and expertise in the field. Vos was always liked by his Jedi peers and is very likeable among many ranked officials.
History:
Vos was the son of Jade and Jecen’ru Atreyu, members of Clan Atreyu, the rulers of Vos' home world before the ruling of the Vos' Clan. Vos was born with psychometric powers, and thus destined to become a Guardian like his parents. Most Kiffar had this psychometric ability to some degree, but Vos' latent ability with the Force enhanced his own, and he was considered by many to be the best exemplar of the ability that had ever been seen.
Vos did not have the abundance of time with his parents as most young Kiffar would, at a tender age he was met by a Jedi master and offered to become a Jedi; his family agreed. He was mentored and became a padawan to a famed Jedi known to that time. Master Filn. They trained vigorously during their time together. Vos became a jedi knight several years later at the age of 17. He often times accompanied the higher ranked jedi on missions to the beginning of the Jedi - Sith War.
Vos was quickly was held responsible for infiltrating the Sith high command. He succeeded on doing so and over time was considered a Sith. Years past by as he was trained in the Sith powers. Vos learned a great deal of the force that is the Sith. During this time he excelled under the eyes of his master and became a ranking Sith general. He was close to the dark side until Master Filn, a jedi counselor now, shocked him into realization. Vos completed his mission and destroyed a large amount of Sith and dark Jedi along with future plans for the space fleet.
The high Jedi council was speculating of his involvement in the Sith, he denied his involvement and was allowed to keep the rank of master. During his times as a "Sith" he underwent several light saber chances along with a hilt change as well.
Vos was considered one of the most inept force users of the Jedi of his time. He was adept in the dark and light side of the force making him especially brutal in combat, often times using the Dark side of the force more prevently than the Light.
Introduction:
Vos sat at a perch over looking the Jedi Temple and the surrounding area. The wind blew against is dark black hair making it wave in the breeze. The doors behind him open, Master Filhn walks beside the path to where Vos is sitting, he sighs as he sits down.
"Whats the matter?" Vos asks. "An approaching war is on hand and yet the Council see nothing. I'm becoming worried." The old Jedi Master layed back and looked into the stars. Master Filhn turned his head. "I'm sending you to Jabiim. There has been military activity there for quite some time now. I expect you will find something there." Vos nodded his head. "Will you be coming as well?"
"No I will not. I must tend to the order at hand here." Vos nodded his head again and made his way back into the Jedi Temple. Several guards eyed him as he strolled by. He wondered what they could possibly be looking at or thinking. He turned his head as he saw three Twi' Lek walk by him. Not even saying "excuse me". People were becoming increasingly rude and angry. The times were changing as if he were an old man.
But that probably isnt important 
Second off....those are a LOT of force powers....I haven't seen a jedi high council member with so many... The RP sample is smaller than your bio. I suggest you lengthen that too.
