Post by .:Falcon:. on Nov 21, 2009 11:54:28 GMT -5
Disclaimer- I am not in any way official, so feel free to disregard this if you so wish. 
With that said-
At first glance, I'd say you need to add a lot more bio. He's been alive for 34 years, surely things have happened to him, and a lot more things than you have in his bio. Here's the key with bios here- the more detail you can cram in there, the better. We don't want you to detail every time he eats his favorite cookie, but we do want some sort of detail.
At this point in our RP, the Sith (Force-users) have only existed as Sith for about three or four months. That means that it is physically impossible that Chason found any Sith whatever.
Alright, so let me get this straight- at this time in his life, Chason is the rough equivalent of a teenager? So why did the Jedi accept him, especially since they have a strict policy about when you can join, etc.
I think that, if Chason were trained in the Dark Side, it would take more than a lot of deliberation for the Council to take him in, especially since Chason apparently has so much anger in him. That much anger doesn't simply disappear.
A note on his stats- on this site, lightsabers do not count as melee weapons, which means that unless he has had training with some other bladed weapon, he should have no melee stats. If he has had training with other melee weapons, that needs to be put into his bio.
Once again, I'm not official, so this is just my two cents.
With that said-
At first glance, I'd say you need to add a lot more bio. He's been alive for 34 years, surely things have happened to him, and a lot more things than you have in his bio. Here's the key with bios here- the more detail you can cram in there, the better. We don't want you to detail every time he eats his favorite cookie, but we do want some sort of detail.
For many months he lived as a stow away aboard commercial transport vessel and eventually ended up on Sernpidal where his Force sensitivity was discovered by a Sith enclave on planet.
At this point in our RP, the Sith (Force-users) have only existed as Sith for about three or four months. That means that it is physically impossible that Chason found any Sith whatever.
Eventually he was discovered by the Jedi, who, after much deliberation, brought him into the Order to train as a Jedi.
Alright, so let me get this straight- at this time in his life, Chason is the rough equivalent of a teenager? So why did the Jedi accept him, especially since they have a strict policy about when you can join, etc.
I think that, if Chason were trained in the Dark Side, it would take more than a lot of deliberation for the Council to take him in, especially since Chason apparently has so much anger in him. That much anger doesn't simply disappear.
A note on his stats- on this site, lightsabers do not count as melee weapons, which means that unless he has had training with some other bladed weapon, he should have no melee stats. If he has had training with other melee weapons, that needs to be put into his bio.
Once again, I'm not official, so this is just my two cents.
