Shul Kruth (Finish Later)

[narimonk]

Name: Shul Kruth

Race: Selkath

Age: 37

Height: 1.5 Meters

Weight: 115 Pounds.

Appearance:

Birth place: Underneath Ahto City, Manaan

Occupation: Grand Senator

Rank: Member Of the Oversight and Fiscal Responsibility Committees.

Bio:

Attributes:

Physical Strength: 1 - 7

Intelligence:1 - 10

Speed:1 – 7

Leadership:1 - 10

Unarmed: 1 - 7

Melee Weapons: 1 - 7

Ranged Weapons: 1 – 7


Alignment:

RP Sample:

[starwarsgirl008]

Hey, I know this is a work in progress, but I noticed a few things you could fix up before you go any further.

First off, please but your height in feet.

And secondly, I have never heard of the position of Grand Senator and when I looked it up on Wookieepedia the position wasn't found. Perhaps you are a little confused, our perhaps my information is wrong. I suggest going to Wookieepedia and doing some research on the various government positions and select one, or simply post a link leading me to proof that this poistion does exist.

Thank you!

[Mara]

Ooh, another senator! Yay!

Ahem... Yes, there are no grand senators. If we ever do use titles for senators, it's usually senior or junior senator. Perhaps you want him to be a senior Senator?
And, as SWG said, height goes in feet/inches.

Also, for appearance, I would like a bit of a written description in addition to the image, which, by the way, isn't a working link.
Plus, you'll have to list which planet he is senator of. You would put that in occupation. I am assuming Manaan?


Either way, let us know when you're ready for this to be looked over.

[Mara]

Are you still going to be finishing this?

If so, please let me know. And also please regard the updated template for Civilians.

If I don't hear from you soon, I'll be moving to inactive pending.