Post by nickmario88 on Dec 18, 2009 12:56:47 GMT -5
before i make this i want moderators to know this is my first tim making this and i dont mind if you do what ever to it i just want you to know that so i can mke this without really getting exiled or anything im just gonna try any way thank you age:86
Planet:Kar Vella
Race:human
Height:"5"
Weight:234 ibs
Occupation: war veteran/retired
appearance:
he wears black pants and he wears and he wears his veteran suit every where he goes he has tam skin and shaved hair and he wears glasses
before he was born his dad was serving in the military while his mom was working in a fast food restaraunt to help with the taxes then tanks father came home on an afternoon in march they just talked for a while and tanks dads dad died they went to his funeural got dinner then tanks father left on may 16 then 9 months after he left tank was born
The doctors said Tank allmost died while he was born and when he came out he was black they thought he was dead because they could`nt hear him crying then about a minute later Tank woke up crying tanks mom died though giving birth to him so tank went up for adoption considering his dad was in war he was in the adoption center for 11 years all he wished for was a family except when he was 6 years old he asked for a monster truck with flames on it that he saw watching telivision one day so he looked in his stocking and all their was in the stocking was tooth paste he did not know how to take it so he did what any kid would do cry so he did that and when his best friend asked if he was ok tank broke his leg so tank got a lump of coal next year for christmas next year and frankly he did`nt care whenever he was 9 he had a best friend named billy hartzelplayed togethor they played socker and tag and one day they were playing socker and it was the final point of the game billy shot it in the net and scored the winning point tank was so mad because he never loses and he hates to lose so tank was so mad at dinner time he got the knife to cut the thanksgiving dinner because it was thanks giving and slit billy`s head off alot of the kids were so disgusted some of them had seizures that day he was never allowd to eat thanksgiving dinner ever again and had to sleep in a room where all the nasty kids go to so it was actually just him in their for 2 years no christmas present no friends no nothing so when he was 11 he finnally was allowd to sleep with the other kids ( no i dont mean like that) he could finally have a social life when he was 11 nothing interesting happened it all leads up at age 12 when he was 12 he got a mysterious call it was his dad he told him to meet him at the park at 9:00 p.m so while all the kids were sleeping he snuck out to go so when he got their he saw his dad fighting with a gang his dad was killing all of them then one guy came out and shot his dad tank attacked the killer he beat tank up and shot him in the leg then ran away so tank went to the hospital for 1 year til he was 13 years old and when he got back from the hospital a family adopted himthats how he got his first and last name he did`nt really have a name bafore the just called him squirt tank had 3 sisters with his family their names were kit, tammie, and janet at the tim kit was 15 tammie was 6 and janet was 23 so she actually didnt live with them because tank was the boy he did all the chores tammie tried to help but allways made his chores worse so he never let her clean until she was 10 kit was really mean she would never let anyone in her room and she was esspecially mean to Tank when Tank dropped food bringing it up to her room she smacked him really hard in the face considering he wasnt like that any more he cleaned it up without saying a word when Tank was 16 he gained an interest fo war so him and his new father went to get a license to hunt so he could practice shooting when he gets in war but instead of animals when he gets in war he will be shooting people tammie was 10 and his other sister kit moved out one day after he was done hunting with his dad to come eat dinner tammie say the gun thinking it was a toy she looked at it then pulled the trigger tank heard the gun shot and said oh my god and he say his own sister killed he never cried not event when his dad died not when his sister died the only time he ever cried is when he was born does this man ever cry when he wan 17 he got a job as a wall painter he did`nt get payed much he saved up til he was 18 to get a new weaponhe was 18 and he went to the academy of war he made friends most of them killed them selves but thier was one friend he made that was allways his friend since he first got their his name was kim stone (and yes kim is a boys name) they were all ways friends
Before he could graduate he had to pass an obstacle course he made it through and they accepted him into the infantry him and kim (hey that rhymes) were mainley just snipers they went up the ranks and up in ranks and finally they were each sargeants while they were sargeants they were each 47 each 20 years before they retire one day they were to gaurd their captian while he was having a meeting with the other captains a spy jumped out of a bush and killed kim he shot the killer and kept shootng at him he was devestated but he still did not cry at the feunural his whole family was their he felt bad but did`nt cry at 56 it was the fight of his life he killed 214 men that day he fought for freedom just as they were about to retreat on day 309 tank stepped up and said to much has happened in my life to give up now i`v seen more people close to me die than anybody here so they got all their men to fight and they did and that`s how we won with 83 men living at age 86 he had a heart attack his son got home and screamed then he caled the police they were to late when they put his body in the cascettte and they say when they were paying their dues to him some body said they say a tear go down his face and he was smiling so all at the end after all that he finnally cried tears and they wer`nt just any tears they were tears of joy
sorry it was so short i do not mind at all i you take in databse it is ok it is to short any way
Planet:Kar Vella
Race:human
Height:"5"
Weight:234 ibs
Occupation: war veteran/retired
appearance:
he wears black pants and he wears and he wears his veteran suit every where he goes he has tam skin and shaved hair and he wears glasses
before he was born his dad was serving in the military while his mom was working in a fast food restaraunt to help with the taxes then tanks father came home on an afternoon in march they just talked for a while and tanks dads dad died they went to his funeural got dinner then tanks father left on may 16 then 9 months after he left tank was born
The doctors said Tank allmost died while he was born and when he came out he was black they thought he was dead because they could`nt hear him crying then about a minute later Tank woke up crying tanks mom died though giving birth to him so tank went up for adoption considering his dad was in war he was in the adoption center for 11 years all he wished for was a family except when he was 6 years old he asked for a monster truck with flames on it that he saw watching telivision one day so he looked in his stocking and all their was in the stocking was tooth paste he did not know how to take it so he did what any kid would do cry so he did that and when his best friend asked if he was ok tank broke his leg so tank got a lump of coal next year for christmas next year and frankly he did`nt care whenever he was 9 he had a best friend named billy hartzelplayed togethor they played socker and tag and one day they were playing socker and it was the final point of the game billy shot it in the net and scored the winning point tank was so mad because he never loses and he hates to lose so tank was so mad at dinner time he got the knife to cut the thanksgiving dinner because it was thanks giving and slit billy`s head off alot of the kids were so disgusted some of them had seizures that day he was never allowd to eat thanksgiving dinner ever again and had to sleep in a room where all the nasty kids go to so it was actually just him in their for 2 years no christmas present no friends no nothing so when he was 11 he finnally was allowd to sleep with the other kids ( no i dont mean like that) he could finally have a social life when he was 11 nothing interesting happened it all leads up at age 12 when he was 12 he got a mysterious call it was his dad he told him to meet him at the park at 9:00 p.m so while all the kids were sleeping he snuck out to go so when he got their he saw his dad fighting with a gang his dad was killing all of them then one guy came out and shot his dad tank attacked the killer he beat tank up and shot him in the leg then ran away so tank went to the hospital for 1 year til he was 13 years old and when he got back from the hospital a family adopted himthats how he got his first and last name he did`nt really have a name bafore the just called him squirt tank had 3 sisters with his family their names were kit, tammie, and janet at the tim kit was 15 tammie was 6 and janet was 23 so she actually didnt live with them because tank was the boy he did all the chores tammie tried to help but allways made his chores worse so he never let her clean until she was 10 kit was really mean she would never let anyone in her room and she was esspecially mean to Tank when Tank dropped food bringing it up to her room she smacked him really hard in the face considering he wasnt like that any more he cleaned it up without saying a word when Tank was 16 he gained an interest fo war so him and his new father went to get a license to hunt so he could practice shooting when he gets in war but instead of animals when he gets in war he will be shooting people tammie was 10 and his other sister kit moved out one day after he was done hunting with his dad to come eat dinner tammie say the gun thinking it was a toy she looked at it then pulled the trigger tank heard the gun shot and said oh my god and he say his own sister killed he never cried not event when his dad died not when his sister died the only time he ever cried is when he was born does this man ever cry when he wan 17 he got a job as a wall painter he did`nt get payed much he saved up til he was 18 to get a new weaponhe was 18 and he went to the academy of war he made friends most of them killed them selves but thier was one friend he made that was allways his friend since he first got their his name was kim stone (and yes kim is a boys name) they were all ways friends
Before he could graduate he had to pass an obstacle course he made it through and they accepted him into the infantry him and kim (hey that rhymes) were mainley just snipers they went up the ranks and up in ranks and finally they were each sargeants while they were sargeants they were each 47 each 20 years before they retire one day they were to gaurd their captian while he was having a meeting with the other captains a spy jumped out of a bush and killed kim he shot the killer and kept shootng at him he was devestated but he still did not cry at the feunural his whole family was their he felt bad but did`nt cry at 56 it was the fight of his life he killed 214 men that day he fought for freedom just as they were about to retreat on day 309 tank stepped up and said to much has happened in my life to give up now i`v seen more people close to me die than anybody here so they got all their men to fight and they did and that`s how we won with 83 men living at age 86 he had a heart attack his son got home and screamed then he caled the police they were to late when they put his body in the cascettte and they say when they were paying their dues to him some body said they say a tear go down his face and he was smiling so all at the end after all that he finnally cried tears and they wer`nt just any tears they were tears of joy
sorry it was so short i do not mind at all i you take in databse it is ok it is to short any way
