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Post by Mara on May 22, 2009 17:00:20 GMT -5
Official Name: Heleen's HopePrevious Name: the TrailblazerPrevious Faction/Affiliation: Republic Military/Independent contractors Current Faction/Affiliation: Fringe/Ean Stenner, bounty hunter Classification: Dynamic-Class light Freighter MKII [modified] Dimensions--Height: 6m Width: 27m Length: 27m Manufacturer: Corellian Engineering Corporation Energy Source: KDY reactor Engine Unit: 2x Ranthrax OptimaX engines Speed: 900km/hr max in atmosphere Hyper drive: Ranthrax AS hyperdrive Rating: 2 Crew Necessity: 1 minimum [pilot], 4 max [pilot, copilot, turret gunners] Armor/hull: Medium Ferro-Ceramic Plating Shields: Ranthrax Beta SC shields Armament: 2 duel laser cannon turrets (360 - Dorsal, 360 - ventral), 1 retractable repeating blaster (ventral - 360), 2 heavy duel laser cannons, bow-facing (360 - starboard, 360- port) Passenger Capacity: 4-6 Cargo Capacity: 60 tons Consumables: 2 Months Hanger Facilities/Starfighter Capacity: N/A Other: Docking claw Description/role: (See below link for image/description). The only difference in its appearance is that it's painted matte black (formally Republic gray). Ean will be using it as his main form of transportation during his various bounty jobs. I was using THIS ship app... It is modified from stock.I hope I did this right! If anyone can help me fill in the blanks, that would be awesome.
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May 22, 2009 19:46:45 GMT -5
Post by Xef'se on May 22, 2009 19:46:45 GMT -5
Well, I'd put its height at 3-6 meters (~10-~20 feet)
Width at 27 meters because it's roughly circular I'd say.
Hmmm... the E-Web is a Rise of the Empire and later weapon, by the way, so that's not exactly accurate. You could also fit a Swoop into the "hangar capacity" section. Energy source would probably by a Hydrofission or Hypermatter reactor (or even Antimatter, as Hypermatter is probably rarer) And the the Hyperdrive could be a CEC Stock Freighter Hyperdrive.
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May 22, 2009 19:55:15 GMT -5
Post by Mara on May 22, 2009 19:55:15 GMT -5
Well, I just basically copied off the original thread. But those dimensions make sense. I'll add them in. And I'll take your word on the hyperdrive and energy source. Anyway, this is now ready! Everything copied/pasted from the original posted ship app, 'cept what I just added on Pol's advice.
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May 22, 2009 19:57:55 GMT -5
Post by Xef'se on May 22, 2009 19:57:55 GMT -5
okely dokely
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May 22, 2009 19:59:51 GMT -5
Post by Mara on May 22, 2009 19:59:51 GMT -5
Yep. Yep. I can always replace the questionable weaponry with the other upgrades.
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May 22, 2009 20:24:01 GMT -5
Post by Xef'se on May 22, 2009 20:24:01 GMT -5
Under-slung retractable light laser cannon that pivots to cover the ramp?
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Post by Dire Wolf on May 22, 2009 22:48:41 GMT -5
... or you could add in a light laser cannon chin turret that is controlled by the co-pilot ^___^
< <3's chin turrets for some odd reason
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May 26, 2009 16:47:49 GMT -5
Post by Mara on May 26, 2009 16:47:49 GMT -5
All will be considered. Ship should be ready for approval. ;D
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Jun 13, 2009 1:23:47 GMT -5
Post by Xef'se on Jun 13, 2009 1:23:47 GMT -5
Considering it's my review more or less, I stamp it with my approval. If a mod wants to back me up, kudos.
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Post by Dire Wolf on Jun 13, 2009 1:30:26 GMT -5
your review? O.o who gave you the authority to approve? The only reason Sparrow can do it is because I gave him the authority to do so.
anyways, the E-web repeater is a galactic empire era weapon. All you really have to do to fix is switch "e-web" to heavy repeating blaster or something.
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Jun 15, 2009 16:16:56 GMT -5
Post by Mara on Jun 15, 2009 16:16:56 GMT -5
Like I said earlier, I will be... probably when I make the other upgrades. Zarky said it's not worth approving yet, since it's a all stock. So it'll just sit here till the upgrades are adding and it needs approval. (And the E-web came from the original ship posting).
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Jun 15, 2009 16:27:58 GMT -5
Post by Zarkan on Jun 15, 2009 16:27:58 GMT -5
which will soon be edited >.<
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Aug 10, 2009 17:05:06 GMT -5
Post by Mara on Aug 10, 2009 17:05:06 GMT -5
Yup, still working on this one.
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Post by Xef'se on Sept 11, 2009 18:44:01 GMT -5
I'd like to recommend that the Dorsal/Ventral dual laser cannons have it specified that they're laser cannon turrets, otherwise they wouldn't have the 360 degree lateral/180 degree vertical coverage.
Also, the starboard/port cannons wouldn't have 360 degree coverage as they're fixed forward.
I still think that the E-Web should be changed into an under-slung blaster cannon.
As it's a bounty hunter's ship, there will probably be some non-standard customization. I'd chalk on two ventral heavy or medium laser cannons, and put some ship hardware from different manufacturers, e.g. a KDY reactor and a more advanced CEC hyperdrive.
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Sept 11, 2009 19:12:34 GMT -5
Post by Mara on Sept 11, 2009 19:12:34 GMT -5
Okay.. I did some modifications, and this should be ready for a real look-through and approval.
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Sept 11, 2009 19:20:30 GMT -5
Post by Xef'se on Sept 11, 2009 19:20:30 GMT -5
Well, I don't see anything wrong. The aft-facing blaster cannons don't make it very OP'd. I'd say it's good to go.
/seal of approval.
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Sept 11, 2009 20:00:03 GMT -5
Post by sparrow on Sept 11, 2009 20:00:03 GMT -5
I'm not understanding the aft-cannons thing. Are they on a separate turret, or are they simply on the other side of the same turret as the bow facing ones?
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Sept 11, 2009 20:22:42 GMT -5
Post by Mara on Sept 11, 2009 20:22:42 GMT -5
Uh, they're separate. I'm just meaning that they are attached to the back of the ship, while the bow ones are attached to the front... Maybe I used the wrong terminology?
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Post by sparrow on Sept 11, 2009 20:25:19 GMT -5
hmmm... I thought they were on the side, like the picture in the other page that based it off of...
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Sept 11, 2009 20:28:10 GMT -5
Post by Mara on Sept 11, 2009 20:28:10 GMT -5
Oh, I didn't check the picture.
And I added the aft ones; they weren't on the original app.
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