Illaina (100% Ready)

[☠War☢Gerbil☠]

I can has review plox? :3 ^-^

[sparrow]

No Lost City. Wouldn't the Templars have left some saber parts in their big Temples?

[☠War☢Gerbil☠]

Mar 16, 2011 20:33:25 GMT -5 sparrow said:

No Lost City. Wouldn't the Templars have left some saber parts in their big Temples?

If you say so. ;D

And yeah that'll work fine!

=edit fixed=

[sparrow]

Ok, better.

I do have a concern though. Is Illiana supposed to be the leader of the new Order of Shokuur? Because the way you've written this character, she's not really qualified to be the leader of... well, pretty much anything. After all, she's a "twisted cluster f***" who's never had normal interactions with another sentient. "Living weapons" pretty much by definition don't make good leaders, since they're weapons and tools.

Basically, what we have here is a Maul, when in order to lead a faction you'd probably need a Sidious or a Tyranus instead.

Of course, she'd make a pretty decent second, head assassin, or whatever you want to call it. Someone who can take orders, go out by themselves, and get some dirty work done, but leave that hard thinking and management stuff to the guy up top.

But...

Those are concerns are about the future faction, not the present character. So as far as this character is concerned...

<Approved>

PS: might want to remove footnote 2, since that's no longer relevant.

Accepted stats:

Practiced Lightsaber forms:
Shii-Cho - 5
Makashi - N/A
Soresu -
Ataru - 4
Shien / Djem So - N/A
>>Sub-form Backhanded N/A
Niman - N/A
>> Jar'Kai - 5
Juyo - N/A
Double Bladed Combat - N/A

Force-Sensitive Abilities or practices:
Telekinetic: 6
Telepathic: 4
Body: 6
Sense: 5
Protection: 5
Healing: 0
Destruction: 5

Specialized Skills: Force cloak (photo-kinetic); Force Stealth

Other Skills:

Teräs_Käsi mastery - For all of her younger life Illaina basically ate, drank, and slept Teräs_Käsi so to speak. The fluid and precise movements of Teräs_Käsi are second nature to 'laina after over three decades of training.

Piloting - Nothing special. Illaina can get herself where she needs to go if she's at the controls of a speeder or light freighter, but she's not qualified for anything beyond that.


Attributes:
Physical Strength: 4
Intelligence: 5
Speed: 8
Leadership: 1

Unarmed: 7
Melee Weapons: 6
Ranged Weapons: 1

Force Attunement: -8

[☠War☢Gerbil☠]

;D ;D

[☠War☢Gerbil☠]

updated her footnotes because one of them still said something about her being adopted and etc. I took it out and made the formerly "#3" number 2. That's all I changed though.

[Silas]

Inactivated as per admin request