Lady Madora

[Hotel]

returned force stats to what they were and edited RP sample, hope ya like. Done and ready for re check

[sparrow]

I'm still feeling very iffy about the whole killing a bunch of Jedi masters thing right after killing a bunch of Jedi knights. It just feels too overpowered for any character to do. Also keep in mind that if someone has a gash on the arm and is bleeding over the ground, then they're probably not going to last a twenty-minute swordfight.

My suggestion is to simply remove the second fight. Have her return with Vornak mortally wounded and the jedi having already left. He could even have a few last words for her, and she can still have an anguished emotional moment.

For the RP sample, snapping someone's neck takes more TK power than pushing and pulling them around. Change it to something slightly less impressive, like throwing around some tables and chairs, and it should be good.

[Hotel]

it is not possible to snap the neck in a force choke? I believe that is under destriction, but I could be wrong. And I could also be wrong about the possibility of a neck snapping while doing that. So not questioning what you said, just actually asking because I thought it was possible.

[sparrow]

Sure you can snap a neck with a Force choke. I think it's one of those powers that doesn't quite fit into just one category though, being part destruction, part TK. So the same argument would apply as when Dutch said that her throwing people around as a reaction to getting shot at seemed a bit out of character.

[Hotel]

ah. alright then, will work on that

[Karl the Unfettered]

It's called Force Crush, I believe, where you bear down on parts of the body with the Force. You could learn it in KotOR 2, and it had a very satisfying sound effect to go along with it.

[Hotel]

EDITED

[sparrow]

Okay, almost there. Just a few more things.

You only mention her learning tier one of Echani martial arts. You'd probably need her to at least start tier two to justify the seven.

Her melee weapons stat either needs justification or should be lowered, since I don't think she is ever mentioned using a sword, axe, dagger, etc...

What's up with the pendant. Why does Carn give it to her, and why does it seem to not get mentioned again ever?

[Hotel]

edited stats and changed bio a bit, removed pendant

[sparrow]

Looks good.

<Approved>

[Hotel]

Edited name, rank, and appearance, with permission of Sparrow.

[Squee]

Approved stats:

Practiced Lightsaber forms:

Shii-Cho 5
Makashi 5
Soresu (n/a)
Ataru(n/a)
Shien / Djem So(n/a)
Niman 3
>>Sub-form Jar-kai, or Dual Wield 5
Juyo
Tripzest 5
Double Bladed Combat 1

Force-Sensitive Abilities or practices:

Telekinetic: 3
Telepathic: 4
Body: 7
Sense: 4
Protection: 3
Healing:
Destruction: 7

Specialized Skills: Deadly Sight(untrained in it, has only used it twice, but has the capability to learn more with it), Healing(Racial, non force), Telepathy(Racial, non force), Visions(Racial, non force), Echani Martial Arts(Can sometimes predict an opponents moves before they strike). Cut off from Mind Speaking

Attributes:

Physical Strength: 5
Intelligence: 5
Speed: 8
Leadership: 6

Unarmed: 6
Melee Weapons: 4
Ranged Weapons: 2

Force Attunement: -7

[sparrow]

Moving to Inactive.