Senator-napping! [Civilian/Fringe/etc.]

[jedi334]

Hey everyone!
My sincerest apologies for not posting for so long.  Wit the holidays and some family stuff going in my life I have not had the motivation or time to write in my beloved SWU but now that things are getting back to normal I can refocus on my own writing and my projects here I will have a post either tonight or by the end of week.  Looking forward to seeing how this finishes up!

[Mara]

No worries. Thanks for the head's up!

[jedi334]

Posted!

Once again sorry for the wait.

Prepare for a stone and angry Echani!

*ominous music*

[Mara]

Dun dun dun...

[jedi334]

I'm all about the drama

[Juzt]

Post will bbe ready soon I hope ^_^

[jedi334]

[Mara]

-Friendly nudge-

[Juzt]

I am sorry in the middle of a huge crisis of confidence in my own writing and charchters at the moment.

[Juzt]

I posted for you.... I hope its ok... I am not quite happy wiht it... but... eh.

[Agent of Greystone]

Heyo. I'm just wondering if y'all had any qualms about heading to the basement now.

[Mara]

Nope!

Best if we start trying to wrap this thing up, lol.

[Juzt]

If thats what you want to do that is fine by me.

[jedi334]

Me too Let's do it!

[Mara]

Post up!

Also, just a fair warning: there is something rather unpleasant in it.

[jedi334]

Annnnnnnnnnnnd now my dominant hand is hurting after reading that post.....good description Mara

Post w8ill be up soon!

[jedi334]

POSTED!

[Mara]

Awesome!
Laughed when you called Ina a young girl, haha... she's older than Chias. ;D




However, I have to point out (I don't mean to be picky when we're trying to finish this up, but it seems like an important detail)... Both of the cyborg Offshoots have shock staffs. I mentioned this in my last post, lol.


And a better description of them from my original post, 'cause in my previous one I just summarized bits:

Before the door slid closed after the being entered, two more came in after him and took positions on either side of the entrance, awkwardly holding shockstaffs. From the brief sliver of bright illumination streaming in from the hall, the two guards could be first discerned as a male and a female of Arkanian origin. But upon closer examination, they were instead a poor representation of the master race: the oft-experimented-upon Offshoots. And indeed, these two had been biologically tampered with. The male’s legs had been surgically changed to bend backwards at the knees, giving him a stilted, jumpy digigrade stride; as well, he had six-fingered hands, and his right eye was cybernetically enhanced with a rudimentary laser. A mechanical whip-like tail attached to the bottom of her spine dragged on the floor behind the female guard, and her hands had been replaced with pincher clamps. Both had been shaved bald to highlight their pointed ears, and they wore simple body armor underneath flowing gray robes.

Not quite sure if the female's whip-tail is as nimble as you make it out to be, lol. And it wouldn't feel pain I don't think, since it's mechanical, not organic.



Don't have to edit if you don't want to... but I just wanted to make everyone aware for future reference.

Male - walks like a bird/digigrade stance, six-fingered hands, laser right eye
Female - mechanical tail, mechanical pincher hands
Both - Offshoots, shock staffs, armor/robes, bald

[Juzt]

I hope my post was ok

[jedi334]

Whoops! Sorry for the age mix up and the tail thing. Will read more care fully from now on