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Oct 13, 2009 19:31:55 GMT -5
Post by Vipervertical on Oct 13, 2009 19:31:55 GMT -5
Bump.
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A®heim
One does not just make a dreadnought.
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Oct 13, 2009 19:33:25 GMT -5
Post by A®heim on Oct 13, 2009 19:33:25 GMT -5
Cheater! How dare you ruin my brood fest!
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sparrow
The Night is Dark and Full of Onions
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Post by sparrow on Oct 16, 2009 3:08:27 GMT -5
Good stuff. Just a few minor issues before I can slap the approved stamp on this one.
I would like an explanation of what his family was doing on Korriban. It's a sparsely populated planet, and not one where most families would to raise their kids. Add in the fact that the great-grandparents were Force users,... sounds suspicious...
According to wookieepedia, Kima is a canine native to Talus. How did one get to Korriban and why does she look like a cat? I guess Pride brought her over, maybe?
I talked to Jace about the staff and we're a bit iffy about having an artifact with magic powers. My suggestion is to make the staff a focus and training tool, helping him utilize the full extent of his natural abilities. I think that that's a quick change, and it would still have him be more powerful with the staff than without.
Force Flare should be fine.
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Post by A®heim on Oct 19, 2009 12:49:52 GMT -5
It is suspicious. Very suspicious in fact. I always considered his family's background as more than I originally intended. I've been using this character in an informal IM RP just for fun and I've been having a blast building up back story (the latter part of the bio is based around a flashback in the RP). I know it sounds far-fetched, but it fits in with this recurring theme of never being able to get way from that god-forsaken planet. As for the kima, I find it funny that you brought that up. I've played a few SW games (most notably SWG) and I know kimas pretty well. True it says canine on the wookiee, but just look at it: www.mygalaxie.com/files/center/screenshot/load/load053.jpg I'm not sure if they're just some freakin messed up dogs or if that was a mistake on the wookiee, but there you go. Chat Log: Pride: (Shut up you stupid cat.) Leadre: (Actually, according to this breakthrough research I'm reading right now, Kimas have been decided to be closer to canines in lineage and biology...) Leadre: (Go figure. Maybe you lot aren't monkeys after all..) Pride: (I'd ask if you can see my face, but I honestly don't know if I'm actually in control of it. So I'll put this bluntly. I. Don't. Care.) Leadre: (I'm controlling the mechanical arm about to shove an IV into your vein. Don't make me laugh.) Pride: (Hey, did you hear the one about the Jedi and the Rodian?) Leadre: *misses by "accident"* Pride: *is more or less completely detached from body, feels nothing* 07: Oi! Pilot kima! Whats our destination? *flits down to a landing in front of Leadre* Leadre: Get out of my hard drive bird. At the moment, it's straight. 07: ...........That's....not a destination. Leadre: Quite the opposite. It's an infinite number of possible destinations. 07: One of them including flying right into a star. Leadre: Eventually. *edits wookieepedia in another window making her a feline again* 07: *edits wookiepedia, making her a rodent* Leadre: -_- *goes to editing war with 07* So yeah, just found it funny the subject was brought up again. Just don't ask why she's talking, it's a VERY long story. But yes, the original Pride did take them with him to raise in the temple. She looks like a cat. Young Jeremy called her cat and treated her like a cat. So she's a cat. > v < Yeah, that's what it was originally, but someone said that he should have something cooler to be obsessed with if he's an archaeologist. However, since I really don't care whether or not it's special, I'll revert to what it was previously.
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sparrow
The Night is Dark and Full of Onions
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Oct 21, 2009 17:23:32 GMT -5
Post by sparrow on Oct 21, 2009 17:23:32 GMT -5
I still need a reason for the Korriban thing. But doesn't he leave in the last part of the bio?
Kima's fine.
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A®heim
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Oct 21, 2009 19:52:23 GMT -5
Post by A®heim on Oct 21, 2009 19:52:23 GMT -5
Very well....let me consult my council of despair...
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Taylor: Well his Family is from there....don't people ever just LIVE on a planet cause they can? Xinder: It's a recurring theme in the rp that he keeps winding up back there. That's why. Raloxmly: Someone needs a nefarious reason to live somewhere on a planet?
......done.
Alright, here I go: His great grandfather was a historian who originally brought the family to the planet in order to make his studies more convenient. Library archaeologists, basically. His studies became well-known throughout the learned galaxy and GHI (the Galactic Historical Institute). Through this, the family became wealthy from their location and therefore stayed there for generations to come.
And yes, it's a recurring theme throughout future RP that he can't stay away from there one way or another.
Should I stick that in the bio?
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sparrow
The Night is Dark and Full of Onions
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Oct 21, 2009 19:59:05 GMT -5
Post by sparrow on Oct 21, 2009 19:59:05 GMT -5
Fair enough. Yes, put it in the bio.
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Vex
A Self-styled computer geek that moonlights as a G.I. Joe.
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Oct 21, 2009 20:02:45 GMT -5
Post by Vex on Oct 21, 2009 20:02:45 GMT -5
For some reason, Arh, I looked at the name and then the picture and can't stop thinking "Harry Copperfield Blackstone Dresden." All he needs is a talking skull...
...carry on.
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Oct 21, 2009 20:32:52 GMT -5
Post by A®heim on Oct 21, 2009 20:32:52 GMT -5
......< v < You saw nothing.... SHUSH!
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Vex
A Self-styled computer geek that moonlights as a G.I. Joe.
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Oct 21, 2009 20:39:46 GMT -5
Post by Vex on Oct 21, 2009 20:39:46 GMT -5
Bwahaha... perhaps. For a price.
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Post by Talau the Ever-Lurking on Oct 24, 2009 22:50:03 GMT -5
lol I haz your price *dangles aunna*....oh wait...that only works on your character...*dangles lia* ^_^ (that ought to work)
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Vipervertical
One-Trick Pony =XINISTER=[/b]
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Post by Vipervertical on Mar 8, 2010 20:50:51 GMT -5
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Post by Squee on Mar 3, 2011 22:57:02 GMT -5
Approved Stats:
Force-Sensitive Abilities or practices:
Telekinetic: 4 (5 with staff) Telepathic: 3 Body: 4 Sense: 6 Protection: 7 Healing: 2 Destruction: 5 (6 with staff)
Specialized Skills:
Shatterpoint
Force Bubble
Force Flare - A technique he uses to light the way in dark areas such as newly discovered ruins or dig sites. By telepathically gathering photons on an atomic scale, he can create a point of intense light. This ability also has the interesting passive effect of making his surroundings seem slightly darker.
Attributes:
Physical Strength: 5 Intelligence: 8 Speed: 5 Leadership: 2
Unarmed: 3 Melee Weapons: 8 Ranged Weapons: 2
Force Attunement: -4
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Post by Jenno on May 5, 2013 18:11:17 GMT -5
Moved to Inactive.
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