Spectrum XXI Series - Rapture XII Model

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Class name: Rapture XII
Faction: Fringe
Manufacturer: Oasis Corporation (An arms company working with various military organizations.)
Classification: Combat
Purpose: Assualt Droid (Made for Military uses)

Dimensions: 188 metres x 89 metres
Height: 6''2
Weight: 135lbs

Power Source: Oasis MK XXIII Power Cells

Movement type: Bipedal

Number of limbs: 4
Arms: 2
Legs: 2
Other: 1
Armor: 10% damage resistance, exoskelleton that protects inner circuits.
Shields: Spectrum Fusion XIII Exoskelleton shielding, it's weak shielding that resists most things, except lightsabres, by 27%

Armaments: Powerful Dual Electrified swords, electrified arms (Only in combat)

Other Equipment: Semi-broken mortality core (Commits crimes and not affraid to break the law, but not a mindless droid, either.) , Speach core, Stealth augmentations, Pain systems, Advanced Speed Augmentations, Heat seaking sensors, Translation devices.

Description:
Black streamlined body, Exoskelleton on body, Sword sheaths on back, Red visor/eyes

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*puts on tech criticism shoes*

Jun 19, 2011 7:47:10 GMT -5 binarysunset said:

Class name: Rapture XII
Faction: Fringe
Manufacturer: Oasis Corporation (An arms company working with various military organizations.)
Classification: Combat
Purpose: Assualt Droid (Made for Military uses) <== kinda redundant

Dimensions: 188 metres x 89 metres I'm hoping you mean centimetres.
Height: 6''2
Weight: 135lbs This is a droid not a human being. Even a comparable sized droid will be a hundred pounds heavier than a carbon based being, at least.

Power Source: Oasis MK XXIII Power Cells

Movement type: Bipedal

Number of limbs: 4
Arms: 2
Legs: 2
Other: 1 This makes it 5 limbs. What is it?
Armor: 10% damage resistance, exoskelleton that protects inner circuits. What type of armor (material)?
Shields: Spectrum Fusion XIII Exoskelleton shielding, it's weak shielding that resists most things, except lightsabres, by 27%

Armaments: Powerful Dual Electrified swords, electrified arms (Only in combat) Do the swords get their charge via the arms or a separate power cell?

Other Equipment: Semi-broken mortality core (Commits crimes and not affraid to break the law, but not a mindless droid, either.) This is not your character but the factory standard of droids of this type. A broken "morality" core would not bring much of a profit to the developers. If this IS the factory standard, why is it built broken? You should put the broken core in your character app.

Speach core, Stealth augmentations What kind; optical, audio, sensory?

Pain systems What would this accomplish to a production droid? May want to explain in description.

Advanced Speed Augmentations, Heat seaking sensors, Translation devices.

Description:
Black streamlined body, Exoskelleton on body, Sword sheaths on back, Red visor/eyes

Detail is your friend here. Since you are making a character off of this droid the more detail you have the better.

Please keep in mind that I am not the final word on tech, Arheim is.

Edit: Also. Until you get this droid accepted you will be unable to get your character past pending.

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Actually lock this, I don't really want to do this idea anymore, I've got better ideas that'd be less Gary Stu.

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Please send this to graveyard.