X22 Pistol 'Handgun'

[jaker]

Before you judge, not tech spam.

Official Weapon Name: X22
Faction/Affiliation: Up for Grabs

Classification: Pistol/stealth.

Stock/Custom:Stock.

Manufacturer: Scare Crow Inc.
Dimensions:
Length:10 -15 cm
Weapon weight: 4 kg
Magazine / Power Cell Capacity: Two
RPM: 2

Projectile: Plasma bolt
Bullet dimensions:
Width: 2 cm
(Case) Length: 2.5 cm

Other:
Is easily disguised and no one will suspect it. (You know when you get one of those clothes hangers and pretend you have a hook for a hand, just like that.) If anything, it could be seen as a prosthetic hand or cyborg enhancement rather than actual weapon.

Description:
Designed to be a revolutionary weapon in the art of stealth. It can not be detected by any security and is easily hid in plain sight. Covered in a unique polymer that creates an organic feel and shaped by some of the most talented crafters, it is truly unique.

[Latus]

*tech criticism shoes, on!*

Jun 18, 2011 16:28:55 GMT -5 jaker said:

Before you judge, not tech spam.

Official Weapon Name: X22
Faction/Affiliation: Up for Grabs

Classification: Pistol/stealth.

Stock/Custom:Stock.

Manufacturer: Scare Crow Inc.
Dimensions:
Length:10 -15 cm
Weapon weight: 4 kg
Magazine / Power Cell Capacity: Two
RPM: 2

Projectile: Plasma bolt
Bullet dimensions:
Width: 2 cm
(Case) Length: 2.5 cm

Other:
Is easily disguised and no one will suspect it. How? This is a major advantage but you do not explain how it achieves it.

Description:
Designed to be a revolutionary weapon in the art of stealth. It can not be detected by any security and is easily hid in plain sight. Covered in a unique polymer that creates an organic feel and shaped by some of the most talented crafters, it is truly unique.


"It can not be detected by any security and is easily hid in plain sight." This right here is not acceptable. You say it is utterly undetectable yet you do not describe how or not. If its just a gun covered in a polymer you could see it in the palm of the hand. If its super thin and applies directly to the hand [lol] how does it get or hold those two shots. Is it a prosthetic replacement, because those are quite easy to detect?

Detail ^3 please. This is an interesting piece but please put some more thought into it. Anything that is described as undetectable by "any" security and hid "in plain sight" needs more description.

*tech criticism shoes, off.*

Not final word on tech, Arheim is.

[jaker]

Alright after how many months? I've added some things, but is there any chance you could specify on what you think is missing, though you probably have but you gotta realize I'm not smart with these apps.

[sparrow]

Sept 6, 2011 17:18:28 GMT -5 jaker said:

is there any chance you could specify on what you think is missing, though you probably have but you gotta realize I'm not smart with these apps.

You might want to read Lat's review then.

Or perhaps you were looking for something like this: starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Stealth-2VX_palm_shooter. It makes more sense than carrying a disembodied hand where one of the fingers is in a permanent pointing position and has a hole in the tip. Plus, convincing human-replica droids won't be available for at least another thousand years.

[jaker]

I can't see anyway of arguing with that, scrap it.

[A®heim]

Aye aye. Funny concept, though.