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Aug 24, 2011 13:55:27 GMT -5
Post by Eludajae Marr on Aug 24, 2011 13:55:27 GMT -5
Official Name: Mercury Hg80 Faction/Affiliation: Sith Classification: Interceptor Stock/Custom: Custom Dimensions-Height: 3m Width: 5m Length: 11m Manufacturer: Fondor Shipyards Energy Source: Hypermatter Reactor Core, 2 Solar cells Hyper drive rating: 6 Crew Necessity: 1 Armament: Laser Cannon [x1] Passenger Capacity: N/a Cargo Capacity: N/a Consumables: 3 days - 1 week Hanger Facilities/Starfighter Capacity: N/a Other: Statistics-Speed: 7 Maneuverability: 6 Effectiveness vs. Starfighters: 5 Effectiveness vs. Capital Ships: 3 Armor: 6 Shielding: 5 Sensors: 6 Reliability: 8 Description/role:i829.photobucket.com/albums/zz218/ashley4649/Vehicle_design.jpg
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sparrow
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Aug 24, 2011 14:11:10 GMT -5
Post by sparrow on Aug 24, 2011 14:11:10 GMT -5
This ship is roughly the same size as the Jedi interceptor as seen in Attack of the Clones. That ship comes several thousand years after this one, and has no on-board hyperdrive, missile launchers, or passenger capacity due to its small size. Also, it didn't have capital ship grade shielding and sensors.
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Aug 24, 2011 21:02:03 GMT -5
Post by Latus on Aug 24, 2011 21:02:03 GMT -5
*puts on tech critique shoes* Critique is colored red for your convenience. For starters, interceptors rarely have hyperdrive, being carrier launched as a counter to bombers and assauly fighters. Go look into some of the other categories for different types of fighters. Official Name: Mercury Hg80 Interesting name choice.Faction/Affiliation: Sith Classification: Interceptor Stock/Custom: Custom Dimensions-Height: 3m Width: 5m Length: 11m Manufacturer: Fondor Shipyards Energy Source: Hypermatter Reactor Core, 2 Solar cells Hypermatter is radically unstable. In something as fragile as an interceptor it would cause problems on even the smallest hit. Solar cells are also, by and large, ineffective especially in cases where the ship is nowhere near the system's star or in deep space.Hyper drive rating: 6 Unless you put more into detail this would likely be the result of a "hyperdrive ring" similar to those seen in the clone wars.Crew Necessity: 1 Armament: Laser Cannon [x1] What caliber? Light, medium, heavy.Passenger Capacity: N/a Cargo Capacity: N/a Consumables: 3 days - 1 week Hanger Facilities/Starfighter Capacity: N/a Other: Statistics-Speed: 7 Maneuverability: 6 Effectiveness vs. Starfighters: 5 Effectiveness vs. Capital Ships: 3 There is nothing this thing has to attack capital ships. 1.Armor: 6 You are making an interceptor who's strongest capacity is speed/maneuverability. Compare with other interceptors and reduce.Shielding: 5 Similar to armor. No interceptor even has the power for this to be nearly so high.Sensors: 6 Reliability: 8 Description/role:i829.photobucket.com/albums/zz218/ashley4649/Vehicle_design.jpg My concerns are similar to those of your tank. You need to look into other vehicles of similar make that have been accepted on this site and make adjustments accordingly. *takes of tech critique shoes*
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