The Drexl

[lordkaan]

Official Name: The Drexl
Faction/Affiliation: Sith Navy
Classification: Capitol Ship
Stock/Custom: Unique
Dimensions-
Height:300m
Width:400m
Length:1200m
Manufacturer: Kuat Drive Yards
Energy Source: Reactor
Hyperdrive Rating: 7
Crew Necessity: 32,543
Armament: 8 Medium Turbo Laser batteries(4xport, 4xstarboard), 6 Heavy Ion Cannon Batteries(3xport, 3xstarboard), 2 Point Defense Light-Laser Cannon Batteries(1xport, 1xstarboard, fore, stern), Proton Tarpedo Launchers (5xfore)
Passenger Capacity: 954
Cargo Capacity: 212,003 Tons
Consumables: 3 Years
Hanger Facilities/Starfighter Capacity: 2 Main Hanger bays, 8 Fighter Launch Bays, 3 docking bays
Statistics-
Speed:3
Maneuverability: 2
Effectiveness vs starfighters: 2
Effectiveness vs capital ships: 6
Shielding: 4
Armor: 8
Sensors: 2
Reliability: 3
Description/Role:

She is one of the many ships in the Third Fleet of the Sith, what makes her more out of place is her hull is aging, yet it`s still in perfect physical condition, inside, it is broken, shattered, and will sometimes lose pressurization. She mainly sits back in battles and commands orders, or launches fighters from afar, taking laser hits like nothing. However, her crew know that the Drexl is long overdue for it`s death, so they constantly worry about the ship exploding to little bits. However, the chances of that are slim, as the officer and commander aboard the Drexl know what strengths and weaknesses it has, with starfighters the most prominent threat.

[10Tickler]

Season's Greetings and a wonderful day to you! My name is Eclipse, But you can call me Mousie :3. I'm here to do a little quick critique of your ship today, try and iron out any wrinkles there might be with it, either technologically, or Statistically.

Note, I'm neither a Moderator, an admin nor am I part of the NGT, so my comments are merely an attempt at being helpful and making your ship not only passable, but also a success!

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Things that need to be changed
How they should be changed
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Official Name: The Drexl
Faction/Affiliation: Sith Navy
Classification: Capitol Ship
The fact that it is a Capitol ship is a wonderful thing to know, however, what specific TYPE of Capitol ship is she? The Classification of Capitol covers everything from Small, In-system defense ships to Dreadnaughts with enough firepower to burn a planet's surface into dust. Knowing what's going on here helps, especially when we try and factor in the firepower. Judging by the armament alone (we shall cross that bridge when we get to it) I'd say this should fit into the Battlecruiser class
Stock/Custom: Unique
Custom would be what this should be. Unique means customized, it's not a standard type of ship, wasn't produced en-masse
Dimensions-
Height:300m
Width:400m
Length:1200m
Manufacturer: Kuat Drive Yards When was this ship made then? You say she's old, but KDY has been private/Republic for some time now
Energy Source: Reactor What kind of Reactor? How Many? This ship is pretty big, so be sure to account for all her needs
Hyperdrive Rating: 7
Crew Necessity: 32,543
Armament: 8 Medium Turbo Laser batteries(4xport, 4xstarboard), 6 Heavy Ion Cannon Batteries(3xport, 3xstarboard), 2 Point Defense Light-Laser Cannon Batteries(1xport, 1xstarboard, fore, stern), Proton Torpedo Launchers (5xfore) I'm not sure about the standard here, so be sure to cruise some other ships of a similar size to ensure your armament is proper and would fit right
Passenger Capacity: 954
Cargo Capacity: 212,003 Tons
Consumables: 3 Years
Hanger Facilities/Starfighter Capacity: 2 Main Hanger bays, 8 Fighter Launch Bays, 3 docking bays
Statistics-
Speed:3
Maneuverability: 2
Effectiveness vs starfighters: 2
Effectiveness vs capital ships: 6
Considering the Armament you've put, these would probably be more balanced out. BC's are Mid-ranged ships, unlike Battleships, which are Long-range, almost like Artillery
Shielding: 4
Armor: 8
Curiosity here...but you say she looks like she's about to fall apart...wouldn't the shields be stronger than the armor, or at least more even then?
Sensors: 2
Reliability: 3
Description/Role:

She is one of the many ships in the Third Fleet of the Sith, what makes her more out of place is her hull is aging, yet it`s still in perfect physical condition, inside, it is broken, shattered, and will sometimes lose pressurization. She mainly sits back in battles and commands orders, or launches fighters from afar, taking laser hits like nothing. However, her crew know that the Drexl is long overdue for it`s death, so they constantly worry about the ship exploding to little bits. However, the chances of that are slim, as the officer and commander aboard the Drexl know what strengths and weaknesses it has, with starfighters the most prominent threat.