Pursuer-class Enforcement Ship Prototype

[Raytheon]

Hello, my name is Raytheon most call me Ray and I'll be offering your review today now since I'm not a mod all my advice should be considered suggestions.

Lets get started.

I'm sorry to say that is is a canon ship that does not exist yet and isn't created until after the establishment of MandalMotors approx a few hundred years BBY as quoted from Wookieepedia.

starwars.wikia.com/wiki/MandalMotors

Established several hundred years before the Battle of Yavin, MandalMotors was founded by General Gustav Zenlav. The company created numerous starships including the Pursuer-class enforcement ship, one of which would come into the ownership of the famed bounty hunter Boba Fett and eventually be known as Slave II.

Further more the ship as stated previously is a canon ship created by this company the link is below.

starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Pursuer-class_enforcement_ship

From it's design to the schematics you provided.

I'm sorry to inform you that it is HIGHLY likely this ship will not be approved. The current timeline sits at 3601 BBY it will be approx 3300 years before this concept is conceived let alone it's founding company established.

Also under armaments you listed "Ion Cannon" All Ion cannons fall under restricted tech within the forbidden aspects page.

Additionally you listed it's primary hyper drive as being a class one, any hyper drives class 3 or below are also restricted tech that requires approval.

Do not allow this to dwindle your spirit or desire to create a unique custom ship, Sorry for the bad news.

[Nephill Kilner]

Jan 7, 2013 22:01:15 GMT -5 Raytheon said:

Hello, my name is Raytheon most call me Ray and I'll be offering your review today now since I'm not a mod all my advice should be considered suggestions.

Lets get started.

I'm sorry to say that is is a canon ship that does not exist yet and isn't created until after the establishment of MandalMotors approx a few hundred years BBY as quoted from Wookieepedia.

starwars.wikia.com/wiki/MandalMotors

Established several hundred years before the Battle of Yavin, MandalMotors was founded by General Gustav Zenlav. The company created numerous starships including the Pursuer-class enforcement ship, one of which would come into the ownership of the famed bounty hunter Boba Fett and eventually be known as Slave II.

Further more the ship as stated previously is a canon ship created by this company the link is below.

starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Pursuer-class_enforcement_ship

From it's design to the schematics you provided.

I'm sorry to inform you that it is HIGHLY likely this ship will not be approved. The current timeline sits at 3601 BBY it will be approx 3300 years before this concept is conceived let alone it's founding company established.

Also under armaments you listed "Ion Cannon" All Ion cannons fall under restricted tech within the forbidden aspects page.

Additionally you listed it's primary hyper drive as being a class one, any hyper drives class 3 or below are also restricted tech that requires approval.

Do not allow this to dwindle your spirit or desire to create a unique custom ship, Sorry for the bad news.

Greetings,

Thanks for the information. Well I must say this is embarrassing for me, but it is a much needed lesson. The mods can feel free to delete this. I will read all of the rules that you have directed me to, as I was not aware of some of them .__. It seems I misread/misinterpreted some things, but I will not clutter the thread with any excuses. My sincerest thanks for being very polite and professional in your response, and rest assured I will attempt to create a new ship at a much later time (after I am confident of no mistakes). If I submit a new starship, it will be within the parameters you mentioned. Sorry being a hapless noob, this is quite an original concept you guys have going on here and I am still acclimating to the timeline and rules and such. See you around the site friend!

[A®heim]

Moved as per requested.