Adenn class Heavy Cruiser

[Zarkana]

Official Name: Adenn
Faction/Affiliation: Mandalorians
Classification: Heavy Cruiser

Stock/Custom: Stock

Dimensions-
Height: 525m
Width: 795m
Length: 1000m

Manufacturer: Concord Dawn Shipyard

Energy Source: (7) Capital Class Plasma Reactor Cores

Hyper drive rating:

• Primary - Class 3
  
• Secondary - Class 12
  

Crew Necessity: 12,973

Armament:

• (2) Heavy Proton Torpedo Banks, (6 Launchers; 48 Torpedoes)
  
• (3) Heavy Turbolaser Cannon Batteries (24 Turbolasers Cannons)
  
• (4) Medium Turbolaser Cannon Batteries (32 Trubolaser Cannons)
  
• (6) Point Defense Medium Laser Cannon Batteries (72 Laser Cannons)
  

Passenger Capacity: 1,152
Cargo Capacity: 150,000 Tons
Consumables: 5 Standard Months
Hanger Facilities/Starfighter Capacity: (2) Troop Shuttles

Other: (2) Tractor Beam Projector Batteries (8 Tractor Beams)

Statistics-
Speed: 5
Maneuverability: 5
Effectiveness vs. Starfighters: 6
Effectiveness vs. Capital Ships: 7
Armor: 6
Shielding: 6
Sensors: 5
Reliability: 5

Description/role:

[Raytheon]

Hello, Kulan would you like a review on this I've been hesitant due to our last conversation regarding reviews.

[A®heim]

IT'S A FAAAAAAACE

*ahem* Yeah, that's the battlecruiser from Starcraft, you're like the ninth person to try to use it. If you need a good resource for starship pictures, databases for obscure space simulators or art websites like DeviantArt make for good places to look.

Otherwise, this application feels rather generic. We have scores of cruisers and dreadnoughts with more or less this identical loadout, much like canon Star Wars does. I would really suggest aiming for something truly unique when you make a ship app. Let the ship tell a story just form it's design. What does its loadout say about it's role? The tactics of the man commanding it?

Also it's flat-out too fast for a cruiser of its size and firepower.

[Zarkana]

We can probably just move this to inactive. The character I had done this for needs a major edit so no sense in keeping this active.

[A®heim]

Will do. Good luck on the edits.