Haran(DONE)

[Lobo]

Official Name: Haran (A Customized Tracinya)
Faction/Affiliation: Tracyn Karta (Mandalorian)
Classification: Heavy Striker

Stock/Custom: Custom

Dimensions-
Height: 1.8m
Width: 6m
Length: 8m

Manufacturer: MandalMotors
Energy Source: 2x Model K-3 ion collectors, 1xbasslisk type V reactor
Engine Unit: 2xType K Ion drives
Hyperdrive: Incom Corp. Starbanner MKI Hyperdrive Unit
Hyper drive rating: x3

Crew Necessity: 1

Armament: 1xMultiple munitions tube (2xFire Sword torpedos, 6xUnguided heavy HE rockets), 2xHeavy Laser Cannons, 2xMedium Laser Cannons

Passenger Capacity: 0
Cargo Capacity: 40 kilograms (Consumables and survival kit)
Consumables: 1 week
Hanger Facilities/Starfighter Capacity: N/A

Other: Survival kit set within the, Beskar plate hull

Statistics-
Speed: 7
Maneuverability: 6
Effectiveness vs. Starfighters: 7
Effectiveness vs. Capital Ships: 2
Armor: 7
Shielding: 4
Sensors: 5
Reliability: 8

Description/role: Painted black with green accents,it is a modified Tracinya-Class Heavy Strike Fighter. Jayna removed the five Modular mounts to make room for the hyper drive system. It was salvaged from a Aurek tactical strikefighter and repaired by her father.

It was that or the shielding and she wasn’t willing to remove that. Aside from that there is only one other significant change. She modified the controls to take advantage of the fact that she has four arms.

[Ash]

Alrighty, time to get to work. Even though I am no mod, I hope you take heed of my words. Also keep in mind that I think more realistically rather than in a sci-fi way. (me and some buddies argue all the time about stuff. XD)

Anyway, back on target. This is listed as a heavy striker, or heavy starfighter: heavy and slow. Usually also pretty large to carry everything and be defensible. Starting off, the Dementions are all wrong, even though its pulled right from the original craft. 1.6 meters isn't very tall... at all. Vader stood over 2 meters. The X-wing, I believe, was 12.5 meters. The A-wing was nearly 10 meters, with the with of it being about 6.5 meters. Based on the picture alone, it looks smaller than an x-wing, but larger than an x-wing, so id probably put it somewhere in the middle of there.

Hyperdrive rating also is too fast. Listed under the forbidden aspecs, and in there, under restricted tech, it states no hyperdrive at a 3 or lower. For something this small, id keeping it around a 4 personally, though it is scavanged from a Aurek-class, so you should be able to get away with a 2. lol.

Looking at that same section, it also restricts armor, which this thing has a covering of Beskar. Beskar is very, very heavy, and hard to get a hold of. Id keep it limited to around certain parts, if it is approved at all.

Now, the stats: It needs to slow down, especially with the hyperdrive as well as the armor you want. Both speed and maneuverability would shrink down to a 4 or 5, as that extra weight would kill ya, especially with the stock engines and power generators in it.

The rest of the the stats seem fine to me, but id take the armor down to a 7 at most, especially without the beskar.

You state that you removed the modular mounts from this fighter, which is all fine and dandy, but they are mounts, which means that they are mounted on the outside, and not the interior of the fighter. Something inside would need to me moved around and shifted to make room for the hyperdrive, unless you want it to be a sitting target.

Well thats about all that I got. I am sure people would disagree with some stuff i say, such as the official mods for this section, but cant say I didn't toss my two cents in. haha.