Jedi Mission: Its Just Good Business [Discussion]

[Miri Mojito]

Mission Name:Its Just Good Business
Mission Participants:Mirian Fel,Vince Beole and his padawan Tem Farelle
Planet:Druckenwell
Mission Briefing:Gorran Securities ltd is a private security firm which is contracted all over the galaxy. The company was founded and is run by their chairman Gorran Eaves.They have been believed to have been involved in many questionable activities but lack of proof has prevented the Republic from doing anything. Lately many of the company's competitors have closed shop due to fatal 'accidents' of their executives. The Republic has requested that the Jedi investigate these deaths and uncover the truth. Be wary, it is believed that a rogue Jedi may possibly be one of their operatives, tread carefully.
NPC's:Gorran Eaves(TBD);unknown Rogue Jedi(TBD)

OKay so we are open to discusion, lets hear your thoughts on this mission.

[Miri Mojito]

Just an FYI for the NPC's. Our charries are already on the planet in a seperate thread. (Like a prequil to the main event)

[Jace]

alright Meira is going to be the CEO(assuming you go to question him and stuff), I will be NPCing the Rogue Jedi.

Remember you can start the actual mission whenever you want, don't wait for one us to start it

[Sir Aaron]

Sweet. I am getting pumped up! My first mission! *Does The Time Warp* And by the way Miri, prepare for Vince's bull-headedness and bluntness. Hehehe.

[Miri Mojito]

Alright well with us crashed on the planet i think we can start the actual mission pretty soon. Just a few loose ends to tie up (like our ride off the planet when we are done, and Crumbs funeral thingy)

so as soon as those are tied up we can start up a new official thread for the mission. I think the first order of Buisiness wil be for the jedi to meet with Gorran. Maybe the DJ would be there as well, possibly disguised as an assistant of some sort.

[Charlie Sharper]

I think that we should definitely meet up with Gorran, but I don't know about introducing the Dark Jedi so early, but it's up to you guys, I'm just glad to be on a mission.

[Miri Mojito]

Well like i said he could be in disquise. or he could even be hiding in the shadows and after we leave or are kicked out he could say somethin to gorran and then begin trying to hinder our investigation, or scare us off, or even kill us. But this way he gets a feel for the jedi, allowing him a bit of an advantage if things come down to a conflict.

[Meira]

I agree with you Miri on that last point. Having the DJ nearby, but unseen, would give Gorran some peace of mind.

[Miri Mojito]

Now im wondering how most of this is gonna work.

My thoughts are after the innitial meeting with Gorran all the jedi might be asked to leave or almost forcibly removed. Resulting in the jedi breaking into the building and gathering intel. Then a after the jedi have searched a few rooms, one of Gorrans security might notice them on security cams. They alert Gorran who sends a security team, and the DJ... naturally a fight occurs, but the three jedi are too much and the DJ flees back to his boss. The jedi now convinced of gorrans guilt go to apprehend him. Something happens that seperates the jedi... fight ensues... Myabe Gorran eventually begs the jedi not to kill him (not that they would) in return he will confess to everything. DJ doesnt like this tries to kill Gorran... Dj is defeated... Gorran confesses to everything and is turned over to appropriate athorities..

now this is not like a script this is just my thought...any other ideas are always welcome, and any changes or addons or anything is great.

[Sir Aaron]

Wow. Miri, you seem pretty good with coming up with the plot. See, I can have an epic opening and finale, but when it comes to the center of it all, I can get lost or else ramble on too long with it. I like your current general idea. We get there, kind of ask him questions and see what who ever plays him does. And we go from there. I like the idea of the Dark Jedi hiding though, and then of course upon our breaking in, if we have to, are attacked. Brilliant! But I agree with Ziggy, the Dark Jedi should not appear too soon.

[Jace]

hmmm good basic outline but don't plan out everything too much otherwise it loses its fun.

and Don't worry my rogue DJ isn't going to be some pushover and he will have extra help.

These are my thoughts on how I imagined it vaguely

jedi question Gorran..he stonewalls em
Jedi investigate disappearances
start getting on to something
possibly get attacked somewhere
realization
climax,epicness,battle,thrillerness
conclusion

anyways your mission, so you guys do it the way you want..us NPCs are just here to make sure you have someone to RP with

[Sir Aaron]

I know. Oh, and Jace... I have a special request for you.

[Jace]

okays.....what ees eet?

[Sir Aaron]

I will message it to you.

[Charlie Sharper]

I'm with Jace, let's just go with it and see what happens, but the first order of business should still be to talk with Gorran

[Miri Mojito]

alright, well i think we should be nearly ready to satrt this up.

[Sir Aaron]

Sweet!

[Miri Mojito]

If all our NPC's are readyi think we can begin like now.

[Jace]

well don't wait for us to start the thread, go ahead and start it!

[Miri Mojito]

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