Rajjdan Trillvan vs Lon Ka'jaire

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Rajjdan Trillvan {Dantien] vs Lon Ka'jaire {Jerek}

Dark Jedi vs Jedi

6 rounds

Dantien's up first

Go

[danthien]

Rajjdan Trillvan walked along one of the stone bridges that ran through the huge cave. He was calm, strong, ready for whatever might jump out at him in this dark place. The Dark Side was strong here. Rajj stopped and looked up at one of the huge, ancient Spires. They seemed to come from the core miles below and went all the way to the surface of the planet. Rajj had looked up information on this planet. It had been discovered thirty years ago, just two years before Rajj was born. After finding ancient ruins of Rakatan design on the planet, it was decided that the planet would not be colonized. Thousands of researchers, archeologists, and general ditch diggers had been brought to the planet to learn everything they could about the great lost civilization. But like most Rakatan places, the Dark Side was strong here, to the point of Nexus of the Dark Side had formed at its deepest point. The archeologists who were researching this planet were driven mad by the power of the place, soon slaughtering everyone there. Just four years after its discovery, the planet was empty again. Until now.

Rajj walked over and touched one of the spires. From deep within its ancient circuitry and steel, Rajj could almost hear the Dark Side screaming at him, as if from a distance. It screamed of war, of death, of anguish unimaginable. Rajj quickly took his hand off of the spire and kept walking, he had a job to do, after all. The head of a certain crime syndicate had hired Rajj to come to the planet, and retrieve an artifact that was supposed to have been hidden there since long before the Rakatan Empire fell. It was a weapon of supposedly unimaginable power, small enough to hold in your hands, but powerful enough to wipe entire armies from existence. Somewhere in these caves was a hidden temple like the one on Lehon, and Rajjdan was going to find it.

Rajj looked up at the Neebrays flying around in the cave. During their time in the cave they had changed from the normal kind, altered by the Dark Side. They no longer had mouths, as they fed on the Dark Side energies that formed naturally in the cave. They were still dangerous though, as in place of their mouths and teeth, there was now a sharp bone, like a beak, ready to skewer any threat. But they left Rajj alone, especially after he had destroyed one with Force Lightning.

Suddenly, a tug, no, a push, a presence, poking at the edges of Rajjdan's mind. He quickly turned, suppressing his presence in the Force, though he knew the Jedi had sensed him as well. He could tell it had been a Jedi by both the Strength of the Jedi's presence in the Force and the "color" of his presence. Only Jedi felt like that.

Quickly, Rajjdan ran in the direction he had felt the Jedi, sprinting across immense bridges of stone, going around giant monoliths, looking for the Jedi. Wherever he was, Rajj was ready to take him down. Rajj wasn't in a merciful mood today.

Rounding a corner, he saw the Bothan. With no word or warning, Rajj grabbed a nearby boulder with the Force, hurling it at the Jedi, following it with a Force Blast. Igniting his two lightsabers, one silver, the other a rainbow, Rajjdan got into a Jar-Kai stance, and watched the Jedi's reaction to the surprise attack.

[Jerek]

Lon jumped down from his perch, landing gracefully on the stone bridge beneath the stone tower in which he was previously sitting atop. He immediately scanned the area for the Dark Jedi he was hunting down. That was why he had come here. The dark energies colliding with one another here threw his senses off a bit. He could pinpoint the Dark Jedi's location with a slight resistance. The creatures dwelling here gave off the same presence, but the Dark Jedi's was stronger, which was the only way Lon could find him.

He was a good fifty meters from him. Hopefully all the dark presences here would throw the Dark Jedi off of Lon's own presence. Hopefully, Lon could find and eliminate the Dark Jedi soon as well. He didn't like being here. He hated the feeling these caverns were giving him. All the pain and suffering felt here years ago was hitting Lon with a powerful push, trying to corrupt him.

He'd stay strong though. He had to if he was going to kill the Dark Jedi that was.... moving towards him. So he had sensed Lon after all. Lon had barely prepared for the eminent attack when a boulder came flying through the air at him. With the speed and grace of a being gifted with the force, Lon drew his lightsaber, ignited the dark green blade and cut the boulder vertically in half. Before the two halves to the boulder even touched the ground a powerful wave of force energy came crashing into Lon.

It had taken him off guard, effectively sending him off the edge of the Stone bridge in which the Dark Jedi still remained. In midair, Lon recovered, giving him the ability to stick the landing on the bridge just below the one he was pushed off of. Lon looked up, estimating the distance in his head. The distance between the two bridges must have been at least one hundred meters vertically and eleven meters apart, forming a hug gap.

His lightsaber lay a few feet away form him. It had luckily landed on the center of the bridge. With the force, Lon reached out and invisible hand and pulled his lightsaber to him. With the metal, cylindrical weapon back in his hand, Lon reached out with the Force, lifting one of the halves of the boulder that was used to attack him and flung it towards the dark presence above him.

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Alright, guys, sorry it took so long to get to this. Been a bit busier than normal as of late.

Rebel 1

Danthien
Effort: 4/5 Was alright, as far as opening posts go. I'm expecting more as the fight progresses
Fairness: 2/5 For the most part, it was fine. Hoever, points were docked because Rajjdan used Concealment--a power to hide his presence--but when I when to look at his profile, I saw that it's a power he's not listed as knowing; which is strange/not good, considering he uses that a lot. However, Concealment is a special power. I.E., in order to use it, you have to know it and have it listed as such in the profile/approved by the section mod--it's not something you can just do because you want to. So be wary with that.
Detail: 3/5 Again is was alright, as far as opening posts go
Coolness: 3/5 See the above statements
Bonus: /2
Comments: Wasn't bad, but you've got to watch keeping Rajjdan within his abilities.

Jerek
Effort: 3/5
Fairness: 4/5 I'm a bit iffy on him falling a hundred meters (which is almost 330 feet) without any sort of pain or something of the sort coming from it. Even for a Jedi, that's quite the fall.
Detail: 2/5 Would like to see a bit more here
Coolness: 3/5
Bonus: 0/2
Comments: Again, it was okay, I just want to see some more as the fight goes on. Push yourself to make each post better than the last.


Danthien- 12
Jerek- 12

And we're off with a tie.

Rebel 2! Action!

[danthien]

Rajj walked over to the edge of the bridge as Lon fell to the bridge below. He smirked as he watched the Jedi land and grab one of the boulder pieces with the Force and launch it at Rajj. Because of the distance Rajj easily stepped to the side as it came up, missing him. Shaking his head and dis-igniting his lightsabers, Rajjdan thought about his next step.

Rajj ran over to the end of the bridge he was on and with a side-ways flip, jumped onto the side of the pillar. He immediately printed straight down its side, using the Force to keep him attached to the surface as he ran. Halfway down he leaped off, landing on the bridge the Jedi was on about twenty feet away, rolling as he landed to redirect his momentum. Quickly coming back up and re-igniting his lightsabers, Rajj charged at the Jedi, spinning his blades.

"Defend yourself, Jedi!"

Rajjdan grinned maniacally as he attacked, striking fast and hard. Rajj gave three strikes, the first high on Lon's left, going down on his shoulder, the second a counter-clockwise spinning strike to Lon's waist on the right side, and finally, following the spinning strike, Rajj's right blade returned for another strike, at the Jedi's head. After the three swift strikes, Rajj quickly spun away, shooting a burst of Force Lightning at the Jedi before getting back in a defensive Jar-Kai stance.