Xathe {WIP}

[Nate]

Name: Xathe

Race: Iridonian
Age: 32
Height: 6'2”
Weight: 219lbs

Appearance:

Eyes: Dark yellow, almost orange in color.
Skin: Dark White/Light Grey in color, covered by full body tattoo, symbolic of the Iridonian species, symbloising devotion and sex appeal.
Hair: none, several horns, covered in a metal covering, simply for asthetics.
Build/Body:
Clothing:



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Personality:

Birth Place:


Faction: Sith
Rank: Initiate

Bio:

Lightsaber:



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Color:

Practiced Lightsaber Forms:

Shii-Cho:
Makashi:
Soresu:
Ataru:
Shien/Djem So:
>>Sub Form Backhanded
Niman:
>>Sub Form Jar Kai or Duel Wield
Juyo:
Double Bladed Combat:

Force Sensitive Abilities or Practices:

Telekinetic -
Telepathic -
Body -
Sense -
Protection -
Healing -
Destruction -

Specialized Skills:

Force Crush -

Attributes:

Physical Strength -
Intelligence -
Speed -
Leadership -

Unarmed -
Melee Weapons -
Ranged Weapons -

Force Attunement:

RP Sample:

[Nate]

ready

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Height: 5'11"
Weight: 162lbs

He is twelve. Too much growth hormone when younger?

Jesiac quickly picked up on the technologies surrounding him, and under close supervision by his master, built both a splicing and hacking personal computer on a gauntlet on his right hand

He is twelve. Even if he spent his entire life up until this point studying tech, he wouldn't be able to build this.

crowd grew restless, and engaged Ratha, attacking her to help the appearingly defensless young boy.

Defenseless? He is holding a lightsaber. Plus, this is Nar Shaddaa we're talking about.

Physical Strength - 5
Intelligence - 5
Speed - 5

Five is average for a human adult. He is twelve.

Stats are on the high side. Here are some links to rrecently approved characters of similar age. You should be within this range.

swrponline2.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=jedaccept&action=display&thread=7537

swrponline2.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=jedaccept&action=display&thread=12435

swrponline2.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=jedaccept&action=display&thread=12433

swrponline2.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=jedaccept&action=display&thread=12167

[Nate]

Age: 19
Height: 5'11"
Weight: 167lbs

Fix'd

Jesiac quickly picked up on the technologies surrounding him but he was still only ten years old, and even under close supervision by his master, could not manage to build a splicing and hacking personal computer on a gauntlet for his right hand, and had to have Ratha build it for him. Jesiac was however, able to build, what he felt was a more ergonomic hilt design for his first light saber

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Jesiac parried Ratha's attacks with sheer luck and good timing, often barley jumping out of the way and keeping his saber off, as she hacked and slashed wildly in his direction. This tactic had two benefits, on the lesser side, it was meant to frustrate Ratha and demonstrate that his force abilities were faster and stronger then she had thought, but primarily, the continuous yelling and screaming coming from the angry Tweil'ek began to draw a crowd in the filthy streets of Nar Shadda. Jesiac foolishly continued to defend against Ratha over and over and luckily managed to barely hold his ground by dodging and rolling for several moments, as the growing crowd grew restless. Jesiac seen his opportunity and yelled for the crowd to help, begging for forgiveness from Ratha, and convincing even the dirtiest scum of the the Nar Shadda streets to help this young helpless boy out. Several men from he crowd engaged Ratha, attacking and overpowering her only momentarily, to help the appealingly defenseless young boy. As the men yelled to the young boy to escape while he could, they gave him the edge he needed only briefly, and he acted quickly, before Ratha had the opportunity to explain her ruthlessness with such a young man, and regain her advantage over him. Jesiac ignited his crimson saber he had hidden on his right side, and surged forward. To the crowds disbelief,

Fix'd

Practiced Lightsaber Forms:

Shii-Cho: 5
Makashi: 1
Soresu: n/a
Ataru: n/a
Shien/Djem So: n/a
>>Sub Form Backhanded
Niman: n/a
>>Sub Form Jar Kai or Duel Wield
Juyo: n/a
Double Bladed Combat: n/a

Force Sensitive Abilities or Practices:

Telekinetic - 4
Telepathic - 2
Body - 1
Sense - 2
Protection - 1
Healing - 0
Destruction - 3

Specialized Skills:

Force Crush - preliminary stages of development

Attributes:

Physical Strength - 4
Intelligence - 5
Speed - 4
Leadership - 3

Unarmed - 3
Melee Weapons - 2
Ranged Weapons - 1

Force Attunement: (-7)

Fix'd

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First of all, a sixteen year old boy with no lightsaber isn't going to last long against a knight with a lightsaber who is faster, stronger, and more experienced than he is. Yet somehow he is supposed to do this for long enough (unlikely given how slow he is) to convince a bunch of pirates, thugs, and gangsters to intervene on his behalf by going after a lightsaber-wielding foe with their bare hands (instead of all simply clearing out of the room and moving down to the next bar, a far more likely reaction).

Second, the event is premised on the idea that a bunch of Nar Shaddaa thugs are going to attack a dark jedi knight with a lightsaber with their bare hands, somehow succeed at overpowering her, and then all being cut down by the apprentice of the knight they just overpowered, who is far less experienced and skilled than the one they had just overpowered.

[☠War☢Gerbil☠]

*points something out* I don't think we can have black lightsabers :\


but sick ass looking guy you got thar nate!

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Moving to Incomplete.