Post by epitaph93 on Jun 13, 2011 0:35:20 GMT -5
I just read Dutch's poems lol. I like them a lot, he's pretty funny. I figured I would post one of my own, as poetry is one of my major hobbies. Ironic that a poetry hater would inspire a poetry lover, but oh well 
enjoy.
Thoughtless
I'm trying to live and I'm trying to learn.
I'm starting to cave and I'm starting to burn.
My thoughts are tangled in ways I can't handle.
I'm fighting for justice and I'm becoming so thoughtless.
My heart is not beating and my wounds are all bleeding.
My face feels like it's melting and all I have is nothing.
I'm screaming from pain and I'm fighting in vain.
My ache will not end and her love won't begin.
I reach to the sky and it turns to its side.
It can't stand the sight of my face in sunlight.
I cower and quake as my life slowly breaks.
She watches and waits knowing my real fate.
I circle this drain and deal with this pain.
All I can do is write and I don't even know why.
So let this blood that I spew quickly come through.
And please let me die 'cuz I'm sick of my life
I want you to see what you're doing to me.
I just want to feel and not have to deal.
I just want to die and I don't want to hear your lies.
Don't say that you love me or pretend that you want me.
We both know it's bullshit so save your breath and your spit.
Though you can't deny the strength of my spine,
I have the world on my shoulders and I can't stand getting older.
As the years pass me by I slowly start to cry
for the love I have known and the ache I have sewn.
I trudge through this cold both weak and yet bold.
I am so famished from being banished
I'm nothing to you and I have nothing to do,
but lay here and die just lay here and cry.
My eyes are weeping while my love is sleeping.
All along she didn't care, all these thoughts I can't bear.
So if you're not heartless then stop being careless,
and save me from all this before I turn reckless.
Save me from what I might do and know that I love you.
enjoy.Thoughtless
I'm trying to live and I'm trying to learn.
I'm starting to cave and I'm starting to burn.
My thoughts are tangled in ways I can't handle.
I'm fighting for justice and I'm becoming so thoughtless.
My heart is not beating and my wounds are all bleeding.
My face feels like it's melting and all I have is nothing.
I'm screaming from pain and I'm fighting in vain.
My ache will not end and her love won't begin.
I reach to the sky and it turns to its side.
It can't stand the sight of my face in sunlight.
I cower and quake as my life slowly breaks.
She watches and waits knowing my real fate.
I circle this drain and deal with this pain.
All I can do is write and I don't even know why.
So let this blood that I spew quickly come through.
And please let me die 'cuz I'm sick of my life
I want you to see what you're doing to me.
I just want to feel and not have to deal.
I just want to die and I don't want to hear your lies.
Don't say that you love me or pretend that you want me.
We both know it's bullshit so save your breath and your spit.
Though you can't deny the strength of my spine,
I have the world on my shoulders and I can't stand getting older.
As the years pass me by I slowly start to cry
for the love I have known and the ache I have sewn.
I trudge through this cold both weak and yet bold.
I am so famished from being banished
I'm nothing to you and I have nothing to do,
but lay here and die just lay here and cry.
My eyes are weeping while my love is sleeping.
All along she didn't care, all these thoughts I can't bear.
So if you're not heartless then stop being careless,
and save me from all this before I turn reckless.
Save me from what I might do and know that I love you.