Post by thebearjew on Aug 4, 2011 0:41:29 GMT -5
Name: Jelen Lorr
Race: Miraluka/Chiss - Knowing that Miraluka have no eyes and that Chiss have red eyes that get more saturated with more oxygen, Jelen will have white eyes and an abnormal forehead. The white eyes mean he is colorblind, he can only see black and white. When there is more oxygen in the atmosphere objects have distinguished differences in shades. With less oxygen everything is closer to one shade of grey, making it harder to see.
Age: 10
Height: 5'8
Weight: 130
Appearance: Very pale blue skin, almost grey. White eyes, very glassy. He has jet black hair that forms into a long ponytail. The clothing he wears currently is the same as the sith below. Not the mask but the clothes, and he has a black robe that goes over the clothes. Photo cred to Rhardo on deviant art
Personality: Intelligent for a youngling, and innocent. His innocence only goes so far, Jelen naturally does bad things not knowing they are bad at the time. He is angry most of the time but keeps it pent up, which intensifies the feelings. Keeps to himself, alarmingly shy.
Birth place: Coruscant
Faction: Sith
Rank: Initiate
Previous Faction: None
Previous Rank: (Neophyte-Youngling)
Bio:
The Birth of Child
Jelen Lorr was a baby surrounded by mystery. His father, Tawwan Lorr, was a Chiss politician of the Nuruodo Family house, being the "Aristocra" of the family house he was in charge of his peoples military and foreign affairs. This put the popular politician in the Republic senate, therefor he was stationed on Coruscant. Jelen's mother, Katajj, was not Chiss however, she was of Miralukan dissent. A Chiss is required to mate within his family house, so the couple had to hide their marriage. Katajj was a force user, although not formally trained, she had a good handle on telepathy. Katajj had a dark past though, before meeting Tawwan, she was part of a street mob in the streets of Coruscant, her bosses used her force powers to further their own greed. It was not easy to get out of the mob but with help from Tawwan and his great wealth she was bought out.
She lived in a condo day to day, it was good for her because she didn't have to be in the bustling streets of the city, she could merely listen in using her telepathy. However one can only stay isolated so long. She begged and pleaded with her stern husband to have a child. He was greatly opposed to this because of the obvious risk of revealing the marriage. He would be executed their secret were brought to light. Regardless, a new baby boy was born, neither had heard of a Miraluka-Chiss hybrid in the past but the child that came out was beautiful. He had very pale, light bluish skin, it was no where near as saturated as his fathers blue pigmentation. He did have eyes, although they were not red like his fathers, they were white. And Jelen's eyebrows were extremely defined, almost as if the bones were trying to rip themselves free of the pale blue skin. Upon birth, the child let out an innocent giggle.
The Darkness Within
Now bearing child, and bliss with happiness, Katajj had meaning in life. She was to raise this baby with love and care. Tawwan saw things differently, Jelen did not take a liking to his father. Perhaps it is because the father was often working, but all light vanished from the younglings eyes as his father looked upon his face. It was a blank stare, as if the child felt nothing as his father looked upon him.
Things began to fall apart for Tawwan once Jelen was born. His blood brother, a rogue jedi knight, had always periodically checked in on his older brother, sometimes for money and sometimes for an occasional taunt. Tawwans younger brother came to his office in Coruscant, looking for money to get to the outer rim. Tawwan denied his brother this money, enraging the temperamental rebel. He could not make a scene in a republic office however, his presence could not be felt for he was rogue. He decided to wait in Tawwans home for further "negotiations".
As Tawwan entered his condominium late one night his wife was standing in the entrance hall with a startled look on her face. Suddenly she dropped face first in front of Tawwan, blood streaming down from the back of her head. From the shadows emerged Tawwans younger brother. He held a small dagger covered in blood. "You didn't tell me about my nephew Tawwan.....?" A gentle yet malicious grin crept from his mouth, Tawwan stood still, anxiously sweating while coddling his wife in his arms. "How could you...Moreth" Tawwan tried to continue but it was as if the very words had been taken out of his soul. "I struck up a deal with a local mob-lord, if I bring him yours and Katajj's head he will supply me with more than enough credits to get where I need be going. And I generally wanted to make you pay for betraying me..." He pulled from his robes a small figure, Jelen, whose desolate face stared upon his mother and father strikingly content. He then let out a slight giggle, as Moreth walked to Tawwan and slit his throat. Jelen then spoke his first words, "Bye-bye".
And To The Beyond
Moreth decided to take the baby with him, he could sense a high Midi-chlorian count in the infant. After collecting his credits from the mob-lords, Moreth traveled to the outer rim planet of Klantooine. Klantooine is where the rogue jedi resided after leaving the jedi order, he wanted more from the force than what the order could provide.
Due to his chiss descent, Jelen had an accelerated growth rate, although merely 3 years of age, he looked like an 8 year old human. His intelligence was that of an 7 year old human as well, however he held almost no memory of his parents, or the incidents that had occured a year prior. He had just now started to understand things, such as behaviors and communications. Jelen almost never spoke a word, for Moreth did not have the patience to deal with the youngling. He often left him in the hutt alone for days at a time, he did not provide the child with food or water, or even companionship. It was like Jelen was an inanimate object, a simple thing that lay about the hutt, part of the background. Jelen knew nothing else though, and thought it was normal so he did not feel sad or lonely. He was often outside playing with the various creatures on the planet.
It was while outside with the creatures where Jelen began to tamper with the force. With no parental guidance of any kind he did what he want and thought anything was usual, he often would capture paddy frogs from a nearby swamp and experiment his abilities on them. Jelen emitted pressure which crushed the animals, he made one explode once, he even ate them alive due to starvation. The neglect from Moreth twisted the child, he was so far from any cities that civilized interaction only happened with Moreth, this is partly why he did not speak. He was rather emotionless too, there was no feeling behind his thoughts or action. Jelen just did what he wanted, while killing these creatures he felt nothing. Nothing was wrong,nothing was right, it just was what it was to Jelen.
The Inception of Violence
This isolation went on for about 3 years, and by the time Jelen was 6, he was in the preteen years of his life, he had the body of a 12 year old. He bored of life in the hutt, and soon demanded Moreth to take him into town with him. Moreth followed suit, knowing it was time to begin teaching him the ways of the force in a controlled manner. However the years of neglect turned Jelen's mind sour, he loathed Moreth for leaving him in the hutt all the time.
Moreth slowly began to trust the youngling and started taking him into Treema, the capitol city of Klatooine, to help with his various business transactions. Moreth was a smuggler, buying and reselling stolen republic weapons. He was notoriously known for being a former jedi, and this instilled fear into his clients. Traveling with Moreth taught Jelen several things, he learned how to manipulate others using the force, how to assertively use his vibro blade, how to run a business, and most importantly he gained a basic knowledge of Republic materials.
Although this was a good means of business, Moreth was not pleased. He was greedy, and now that Jelen was coming of age with an ample body and a grasp of the force, Moreth would exploit it. Moreth took Jelen all over the planet, the pair were feared for their force powers as well as their reputation of destruction.
The Twist of Fate
One mission however, went horribly wrong. Moreth had taken advantage of the wrong foe, a bounty hunter named Talohn Rhade. Talohn was a mandalorian general stopping in on Klatooine for repairs to his ship. Moreth offered to repair the ship but took it apart and stole the parts of the ship for resale. He thought that just leaving the city would be safe but the hunter asked around and received information about the notorious smuggler. He tracked Moreth down to his and Jelens hutt, where he waited for them to return.
After a week of waiting, Moreth and Jelen returned from selling the parts to the ship. Talohn was hidden outside the house, and after the pair entered he pulled a trigger, the hutt blew up into flames. After the dust settled, the bounty hunter looked about the flames, Moreth lay on the ground burnt to a crisp yet still barely breathing. Talohn shot him in the head, killing the disgrace of a jedi, however Jelen lay completetly untouched, yet unconscious, on the floor against the wall. Unbeknownst to Talohn or Jelen himself, he had emitted a force barrier to protect from the explosion.
The mandalorian recognized this as a force ability and took the youngling with him as he took Moreth's money and left Klatooine. He had bought a simple two seated starfighter to get to Dathomir, where he had several allies at the sith academy. When arriving Jelen was immediately added to the academy as a sith initiate, he had tons of untapped potential which would soon be exploited by the darkside.
Through the Teachings
Now that Jelen was in a structured environment with other people his age he felt even more cutoff from the world. Before when he had been with Moreth he was forced to be alone, but now that he was with other people he couldnt socialize. Because of this Jelen took to researching, regardless of his violent nature. For several months, Jelen was lost in the sith archives, learning of the ancient sith lords and their ways, he learned the secrets of the sith techniques and ancient titles. Through this he took an interest in sith inquisitors, and sith alchemy.
As he continued to dabble into the history of the sith, other students began to berate him. They didnt understand why he didnt like fighting and practicing his use of a lightsaber, or why he didnt show anger an hatred like the others. They accused him of being soft and the personal attacks began. Jelen would be jumped by several others at a time and gained many scars from this however it hardened his resolve. He hated those in power, the structure of society was corrupt in his mind, and he wanted to change this. He began to train in private, reading texts he was able to pick up a basic knowledge of soresu and djem so to defend himself and hone his anger into a fighting style. Also due to his chiss heritage he was growing more rapidly than the others. So although he was ten, puberty for chiss began at this age, so he appeared to be 15 and had to conscious of a 15 year old.
Jelen was soon easily able to fend off the groups of sith initiates that despised him so much. Jelen had pieced together his childhood, drawing much anger to the death of his parents by Moreth, and the bounty hunter who had stolen the satisfaction of revenge from him. Jelen hated himself for not killing Moreth when he was younger, so much built up anger within him drove him to strive for power.
Jelen yearned for a different method of teaching, he wanted a master, someone to teach him things he couldnt learn from researching. There was no way Jelen could implement the ancient techniques unless he gained the strength to do so. In his mind the only way to do this was to stand out as the most powerful student a sith master could choose from. He fought other students, further developing his skills with a lightsaber and the telepathic ways of the force. And soon he was notably one of the most promising initiates in the academy.
Lightsaber: Traing Lightsaber
Color: Red
Practiced Lightsaber forms:
Shii-Cho 3
Makashi 0
Soresu 2
Ataru 0
Shien / Djem So 3
Niman 0
>>Sub-form Jar-kai, or Dual Wield
Juyo 0
Double Bladed Combat 0
Force-Sensitive Abilities or practices:
Telekinetic: 2
Telepathic: 3
Body: 1
Sense: 1
Protection: 1
Healing: 0
Destruction: 1
Specialized Skills: N/A at the moment
Attributes:
Physical Strength: 1
Intelligence: 3
Speed: 1
Leadership: 1
Unarmed: 1
Melee Weapons: 3
Ranged Weapons: 0
Force Attunement: -2
RP Sample:
Race: Miraluka/Chiss - Knowing that Miraluka have no eyes and that Chiss have red eyes that get more saturated with more oxygen, Jelen will have white eyes and an abnormal forehead. The white eyes mean he is colorblind, he can only see black and white. When there is more oxygen in the atmosphere objects have distinguished differences in shades. With less oxygen everything is closer to one shade of grey, making it harder to see.
Age: 10
Height: 5'8
Weight: 130
Appearance: Very pale blue skin, almost grey. White eyes, very glassy. He has jet black hair that forms into a long ponytail. The clothing he wears currently is the same as the sith below. Not the mask but the clothes, and he has a black robe that goes over the clothes. Photo cred to Rhardo on deviant art
Personality: Intelligent for a youngling, and innocent. His innocence only goes so far, Jelen naturally does bad things not knowing they are bad at the time. He is angry most of the time but keeps it pent up, which intensifies the feelings. Keeps to himself, alarmingly shy.
Birth place: Coruscant
Faction: Sith
Rank: Initiate
Previous Faction: None
Previous Rank: (Neophyte-Youngling)
Bio:
The Birth of Child
Jelen Lorr was a baby surrounded by mystery. His father, Tawwan Lorr, was a Chiss politician of the Nuruodo Family house, being the "Aristocra" of the family house he was in charge of his peoples military and foreign affairs. This put the popular politician in the Republic senate, therefor he was stationed on Coruscant. Jelen's mother, Katajj, was not Chiss however, she was of Miralukan dissent. A Chiss is required to mate within his family house, so the couple had to hide their marriage. Katajj was a force user, although not formally trained, she had a good handle on telepathy. Katajj had a dark past though, before meeting Tawwan, she was part of a street mob in the streets of Coruscant, her bosses used her force powers to further their own greed. It was not easy to get out of the mob but with help from Tawwan and his great wealth she was bought out.
She lived in a condo day to day, it was good for her because she didn't have to be in the bustling streets of the city, she could merely listen in using her telepathy. However one can only stay isolated so long. She begged and pleaded with her stern husband to have a child. He was greatly opposed to this because of the obvious risk of revealing the marriage. He would be executed their secret were brought to light. Regardless, a new baby boy was born, neither had heard of a Miraluka-Chiss hybrid in the past but the child that came out was beautiful. He had very pale, light bluish skin, it was no where near as saturated as his fathers blue pigmentation. He did have eyes, although they were not red like his fathers, they were white. And Jelen's eyebrows were extremely defined, almost as if the bones were trying to rip themselves free of the pale blue skin. Upon birth, the child let out an innocent giggle.
The Darkness Within
Now bearing child, and bliss with happiness, Katajj had meaning in life. She was to raise this baby with love and care. Tawwan saw things differently, Jelen did not take a liking to his father. Perhaps it is because the father was often working, but all light vanished from the younglings eyes as his father looked upon his face. It was a blank stare, as if the child felt nothing as his father looked upon him.
Things began to fall apart for Tawwan once Jelen was born. His blood brother, a rogue jedi knight, had always periodically checked in on his older brother, sometimes for money and sometimes for an occasional taunt. Tawwans younger brother came to his office in Coruscant, looking for money to get to the outer rim. Tawwan denied his brother this money, enraging the temperamental rebel. He could not make a scene in a republic office however, his presence could not be felt for he was rogue. He decided to wait in Tawwans home for further "negotiations".
As Tawwan entered his condominium late one night his wife was standing in the entrance hall with a startled look on her face. Suddenly she dropped face first in front of Tawwan, blood streaming down from the back of her head. From the shadows emerged Tawwans younger brother. He held a small dagger covered in blood. "You didn't tell me about my nephew Tawwan.....?" A gentle yet malicious grin crept from his mouth, Tawwan stood still, anxiously sweating while coddling his wife in his arms. "How could you...Moreth" Tawwan tried to continue but it was as if the very words had been taken out of his soul. "I struck up a deal with a local mob-lord, if I bring him yours and Katajj's head he will supply me with more than enough credits to get where I need be going. And I generally wanted to make you pay for betraying me..." He pulled from his robes a small figure, Jelen, whose desolate face stared upon his mother and father strikingly content. He then let out a slight giggle, as Moreth walked to Tawwan and slit his throat. Jelen then spoke his first words, "Bye-bye".
And To The Beyond
Moreth decided to take the baby with him, he could sense a high Midi-chlorian count in the infant. After collecting his credits from the mob-lords, Moreth traveled to the outer rim planet of Klantooine. Klantooine is where the rogue jedi resided after leaving the jedi order, he wanted more from the force than what the order could provide.
Due to his chiss descent, Jelen had an accelerated growth rate, although merely 3 years of age, he looked like an 8 year old human. His intelligence was that of an 7 year old human as well, however he held almost no memory of his parents, or the incidents that had occured a year prior. He had just now started to understand things, such as behaviors and communications. Jelen almost never spoke a word, for Moreth did not have the patience to deal with the youngling. He often left him in the hutt alone for days at a time, he did not provide the child with food or water, or even companionship. It was like Jelen was an inanimate object, a simple thing that lay about the hutt, part of the background. Jelen knew nothing else though, and thought it was normal so he did not feel sad or lonely. He was often outside playing with the various creatures on the planet.
It was while outside with the creatures where Jelen began to tamper with the force. With no parental guidance of any kind he did what he want and thought anything was usual, he often would capture paddy frogs from a nearby swamp and experiment his abilities on them. Jelen emitted pressure which crushed the animals, he made one explode once, he even ate them alive due to starvation. The neglect from Moreth twisted the child, he was so far from any cities that civilized interaction only happened with Moreth, this is partly why he did not speak. He was rather emotionless too, there was no feeling behind his thoughts or action. Jelen just did what he wanted, while killing these creatures he felt nothing. Nothing was wrong,nothing was right, it just was what it was to Jelen.
The Inception of Violence
This isolation went on for about 3 years, and by the time Jelen was 6, he was in the preteen years of his life, he had the body of a 12 year old. He bored of life in the hutt, and soon demanded Moreth to take him into town with him. Moreth followed suit, knowing it was time to begin teaching him the ways of the force in a controlled manner. However the years of neglect turned Jelen's mind sour, he loathed Moreth for leaving him in the hutt all the time.
Moreth slowly began to trust the youngling and started taking him into Treema, the capitol city of Klatooine, to help with his various business transactions. Moreth was a smuggler, buying and reselling stolen republic weapons. He was notoriously known for being a former jedi, and this instilled fear into his clients. Traveling with Moreth taught Jelen several things, he learned how to manipulate others using the force, how to assertively use his vibro blade, how to run a business, and most importantly he gained a basic knowledge of Republic materials.
Although this was a good means of business, Moreth was not pleased. He was greedy, and now that Jelen was coming of age with an ample body and a grasp of the force, Moreth would exploit it. Moreth took Jelen all over the planet, the pair were feared for their force powers as well as their reputation of destruction.
The Twist of Fate
One mission however, went horribly wrong. Moreth had taken advantage of the wrong foe, a bounty hunter named Talohn Rhade. Talohn was a mandalorian general stopping in on Klatooine for repairs to his ship. Moreth offered to repair the ship but took it apart and stole the parts of the ship for resale. He thought that just leaving the city would be safe but the hunter asked around and received information about the notorious smuggler. He tracked Moreth down to his and Jelens hutt, where he waited for them to return.
After a week of waiting, Moreth and Jelen returned from selling the parts to the ship. Talohn was hidden outside the house, and after the pair entered he pulled a trigger, the hutt blew up into flames. After the dust settled, the bounty hunter looked about the flames, Moreth lay on the ground burnt to a crisp yet still barely breathing. Talohn shot him in the head, killing the disgrace of a jedi, however Jelen lay completetly untouched, yet unconscious, on the floor against the wall. Unbeknownst to Talohn or Jelen himself, he had emitted a force barrier to protect from the explosion.
The mandalorian recognized this as a force ability and took the youngling with him as he took Moreth's money and left Klatooine. He had bought a simple two seated starfighter to get to Dathomir, where he had several allies at the sith academy. When arriving Jelen was immediately added to the academy as a sith initiate, he had tons of untapped potential which would soon be exploited by the darkside.
Through the Teachings
Now that Jelen was in a structured environment with other people his age he felt even more cutoff from the world. Before when he had been with Moreth he was forced to be alone, but now that he was with other people he couldnt socialize. Because of this Jelen took to researching, regardless of his violent nature. For several months, Jelen was lost in the sith archives, learning of the ancient sith lords and their ways, he learned the secrets of the sith techniques and ancient titles. Through this he took an interest in sith inquisitors, and sith alchemy.
As he continued to dabble into the history of the sith, other students began to berate him. They didnt understand why he didnt like fighting and practicing his use of a lightsaber, or why he didnt show anger an hatred like the others. They accused him of being soft and the personal attacks began. Jelen would be jumped by several others at a time and gained many scars from this however it hardened his resolve. He hated those in power, the structure of society was corrupt in his mind, and he wanted to change this. He began to train in private, reading texts he was able to pick up a basic knowledge of soresu and djem so to defend himself and hone his anger into a fighting style. Also due to his chiss heritage he was growing more rapidly than the others. So although he was ten, puberty for chiss began at this age, so he appeared to be 15 and had to conscious of a 15 year old.
Jelen was soon easily able to fend off the groups of sith initiates that despised him so much. Jelen had pieced together his childhood, drawing much anger to the death of his parents by Moreth, and the bounty hunter who had stolen the satisfaction of revenge from him. Jelen hated himself for not killing Moreth when he was younger, so much built up anger within him drove him to strive for power.
Jelen yearned for a different method of teaching, he wanted a master, someone to teach him things he couldnt learn from researching. There was no way Jelen could implement the ancient techniques unless he gained the strength to do so. In his mind the only way to do this was to stand out as the most powerful student a sith master could choose from. He fought other students, further developing his skills with a lightsaber and the telepathic ways of the force. And soon he was notably one of the most promising initiates in the academy.
Lightsaber: Traing Lightsaber
Color: Red
Practiced Lightsaber forms:
Shii-Cho 3
Makashi 0
Soresu 2
Ataru 0
Shien / Djem So 3
Niman 0
>>Sub-form Jar-kai, or Dual Wield
Juyo 0
Double Bladed Combat 0
Force-Sensitive Abilities or practices:
Telekinetic: 2
Telepathic: 3
Body: 1
Sense: 1
Protection: 1
Healing: 0
Destruction: 1
Specialized Skills: N/A at the moment
Attributes:
Physical Strength: 1
Intelligence: 3
Speed: 1
Leadership: 1
Unarmed: 1
Melee Weapons: 3
Ranged Weapons: 0
Force Attunement: -2
RP Sample:
