Kane Tagron Kolorat

[suicidalsith0]

Name: Kane Tagron Kolorat
Race: Kharanai
Age: 46
Height: Approximately two meters
Weight: 100 kg
Appearance: Long black hair, cut back in traditional Kharanai style; Normal Sith Robes; blue eyes - entirely so except the pupil (a Kharanai trait); medium build.

Birth place: Kharan (the city of Palantis to be specific)

bio: Born heir to the title of Gold Duke of the Kolorat Clan, in another time, Kanes' life would have been one of great prestige and honor. Yet, all such things were shattered with the Republic's bombardment of his world 6 years ago; his parents perishing in the bombing. As Kharanai are ultimately descended from Jedi who disagreed with the Council on certain dogmas millenia in the past, they thus have a great potential with the Force, and Kane is no exception to this. Seeing his great potential, his superiors were quick to promote him; and soon even a Sith lord could not ignore the talented young man. Giving him some formal training in the Force, and promoting him to general, The sith lord began to take a great interest in him; almost replacing in Kanes' mind the role of father that the old Republic had stolen from him.

Yet, war was not everything to him. Hatred alone did not cling to this warrior's heart; no, there was another, softer voice calling to him, surrounding a young woman who had joined the Dark side, also of Kharanai race. Over time, his feelings for her grew to the point that, while from traditionally enemy clans, he pledged her the Ghastar Vow; the most sacred of all in Kharanai tradition. Yet Kanes' tragedy had just begun, for Melotra - the young woman - was shortly thereafter deployed as an espionage agent on a Republic world where she was shortly thereafter captured and tortured. Though Kane led a strike force to break her out of her imprisonment, in the end, her injuries sustained proved too great; she died approximately 5 hours after arriving in a medical unit.

The terms of the Ghastar Vow were clear; Kane was bound by the Kharanai notion of Justice to avenge her death, and avenge it he would.


Lightsaber: Single, Style II (aka, similar to Dooku's)
Color: Silver.
Faction: Sith
Rank: Dark Master

[Xaojii]

Note: Any character above level of Dark Knight must have a Sample Post involving that character's personality, powers, and overall RPing style.

is Kharanai a custom race or something, I'm not finding it on the Wookiepedia

if your Bio is set during the Clone Wars, that'll have to change, this is set 3000BBY

[suicidalsith0]

its just another type of humanoid

Sample post:

A woman with long dark hair and ethereal white skin looked on at Kane with dark honey eye's and held one of her whips up as dagger like talons extended from a gloved hand and a smile appeared on her china doll face that spoke of soon to be carnage

“Care to play”


Kane looked up, and grinned he stood up and lit his light saber a crimson blade shot out. He took a Juyo saber stance. “Yes….I would..” Kane wait for her to make the move he wanted to spot her weaknesses before the battle started.


Lilith looked at the man with a cold indifference as she ran her hands quickly through her hair and tied the end off in a ponytail. With a small leer she showed a three small needles get inserted into the end of the ponytail and the second whip at her side. As a show of honor, when her ponytail touched the ground she assumed an impersonal stance with her light whip deactivated in one hand and the claw ready in the other in a Tràkata stance with her eye's half closed Lilith looked forward, her voice sounded like silk along the skin as she spoke with a psychotic gleam in her eye

“What do you think, first blood?”


Kane gave her a cold stare as she went into her fighting stance, He grinned and spun his lightsaber . Taking a Ataru stance. “Ladies first….” Kane said with a smirk.


Lilith looked at Kane and crouched, then using her bent knee to propel her towards Kane with speed with a small twist Lilith spun and activated her lightwhips with a snap-hiss and sizzle as it's Rainbow colored energy lace scathed and ground infront of her. When she was three feet infront of Kane Lilith dug the claw lightly into the ground and cracked the whip to intertwine with Kane's hand above his saber. The iron lace that guides the energy would only singe hair unless she pulled. With a hiss Lilith spin kicked at Kane's feet. When she spoke with a small grunt and moan the scent of flowers filled Kane's lungs

“If you Insist my dear..…”


Kane closed his eyes, He sensed the moves Lilith was making, also the motions of the whip. He felt it rap around his saber, He opened his eyes quickly ,pulled up on his lightsaber sending Lilith back up. Then Kane recovered from the spin kick by using the force to flip himself back on to his feet. Then used the force to push Lilith away from him. “come…” Kane took the Juyo stance to tighten his defense, he wouldn’t let his defense slip again.

[Xaojii]

Like I said for your BH character, I'm not sure exactly what to look for to approve your character, I can only offer tips. After someone tells me what to look for, then I can approve things.

It all looks fine, the sample, but I'm not sure about the Race, if it's not canon, then I can't be sure.
Forgive me, I only started Moderatorism today.

[suicidalsith0]

You make it sound like a Religion lol

But its alright. if you could get another mod to check me off that would great.

[Xaojii]

I don't know them that well, at least not on a personal note, but everything looks fine.
For me, being a Moderator is sort of a religion, it's like a sacred duty, and thus should be treated like one "Respect the rank, not the person" or something like that...

either way The Republic hasn't done anything, not that I know
3000BBY, post-KOTOR means that there hasn't been anyrepublic bombings, and I really can't be sure if the planet in question of bombardment isn' Canon.

Have you seen Lilith/Belle Morte? she said she'd join... I enjoyed the dark aspect of her characters...

[suicidalsith0]

well it sounds sacred i guess lol.

So it would be considered the Old republic??

and yes that was one of the practice battle she & I had.

[Xaojii]

yes Old Republic, when there was peace and suchforth, after the event of KOTOR

you'd win, my chracters have no super powers, or nor do they have protection against lightsabers, besides, there is no where to have practice battles here. that and I'm a crappy RP battler.

Do you know where she is though? any contact? she better keep her word, that or I'll make her keep it...

[suicidalsith0]

ah i see.

nah thats okay. you just have Practice :]

and no. didnt really talk that much.

[Jenno]

I'm going to leave this to Xaojii, since I think he's on a roll here.

As for Belle, she's a member, she just has a different name and hasn't been around much.

[suicidalsith0]

well what do you say Xaojii?

accepted?

[Xaojii]

no, you havn't fixed the bombardment thing, and I'm confused, was she tortured by the Republic?
If so this has incosistencies, I'm not sure anymore. I think my train of thought left without me...

[suicidalsith0]

oh well...just read the whole things again...
and yes by the "old republic"

[Xaojii]

Yeah, because this was before The Galactic Civil War, there wouldn't be any bombings on any planets, and the Sith were in hiding, and all the other planets outside the core planets weren't on any major conflict. After KOTOR the Sith went back into hiding. You're guing to have to rethink you Bio before I can accept it

just to let you know for your Sith character to conform into a plot, here's Plot2, as stated in Official Plot Discussion p.1 by Cyberguy

"Plot4: The Sith Empire, existing on the outskirts of Republic Space, has received much financial support from members of the Aristocracy. With this in hand, they have begun a government, where power is spread across the aristocrats, acting as a sort of senate, but one with very little actual say in the affairs of the Empire. Furthering this, they have amassed a small sith military, and has begun arguing with the Republic that they should lay claim to certain other Outer Rim Worlds to support their government and their people. Military forces, both Republic and Sith, have begun to patrol the border between the two powers. Tensions are rising, and anything could set them off."

[suicidalsith0]

i'll base the rest of bio off the plot

[Xaojii]

I'm sorry if I ruined what you were going for essentailly, it was good, but it didn't quite fit. I also apologize if it upset you too bad.

[suicidalsith0]

nah its all good.
I dont get bothered by much