Cho Wroth vs Argon Farwell

[Lemur, The Kool-Aid Guy]

SWU's favorite (and only) Noghri Sith vs Kermit's newcomer Jedi Knight.

The duel will be five rounds, beginning with whichever one of you posts first. No rush though.

You will be judged on the categories of effort, fairness, detail, and coolness. Each of these is out of five possible points. There are also two possible bonus points if I feel you've earned it. Hint, making me laugh is a good method.

Your fight takes place here:


You may begin when you are ready.

[Foxfire]

The location was perfect and the timing couldn't be better for a new sith foothold. The location Nar Shadda and the timing was after the gutting of the blades from their former base. Now the Hutts have see the power shift and has agreed to a shadow base upon the moon world. A remote deralict smuggler hanger/base. The perfect location to set the next stage of conquest from.

To search it out was none other than the shadow beast himself, Honog noghri of the Sith. His reputation for hidding in plain sight made him also the first choice to feel out the base. The Darth's had wanted to search this place out before they spent money and set bodies to hold the shadow base. Honog's ability to hide with in the force also was another reason why the darth's though of him, not to mention that if he died that they weren't out anything but a marked traitor and wardog.

He had spent the last five hours getting to know and stalk out every shadow within the base. With his force signature masked by the shear nearness of the connection Honog had to rely solely upon his other senses. These to were honed by years of noghrish hunter training. Every sound and gust of wind caught his attention. His nose was in full effect as he sniffed out anything with a pulse.

When he had neared the planet he submerged himself into the force knowing that any foot hold incursion would be expected. So when he heard from local informents that a Jedi was seen and being given the run-around he readied himself for a duel like no other. Unlike the previous battles the jedi knew he was there and they faced off blade to blade. This time the jedi's knowledge would be limited and surprise would be likely on his side.

So awaiting in the shadows the noghri stayed and slowly moved. In utter silence of a alpha noghri hunter Honog stalked. Becoming a shadow himself moving in and out with out sound and breath. His claws wanting to feel the flesh of the Jedi. His mouth watering over the salty sweet taste of potential force enhanced blood. What was more he could feel the weight of his saber upon his hip. They had not had enough of the feel of battle and wanted more. He would give them more than they might handle on this occasion.

[kermit]

Argon walked trough the old building. He had been sent to kill a Sith, and he was going to do it.

It had sounded exciting.

We have reason to believe a major Sith is on Nar Shadda. You are to go there and kill him.

But, as the assignment wore on and his frustration mounted, he still could not find him. But, here, he was sure, he would find him. Argon did not know the name of the Sith, but he knew he was here. He could sense it.

He caught sight of the Sith.

"Is this the part where I say a cool pun?" he joked. Then he drew his lightsaber, and prepared for battle...

[Lemur, The Kool-Aid Guy]

Round One

Foxfire
Effort: 3/5
Fairness: 5/5
Detail: 3/5
Coolness: 2/5
Bonus: /2
Comments: Here's the beginnings, so it's hard to say what's what. Your post has been perfectly adequate so far, but there's always room for improvement.

Kermit
Effort: 2/5
Fairness: 5/5
Detail: 1/5
Coolness: 1/5
Bonus: /2
Comments: You're going to have to up your game here. More detail, more effort. But you can salvage it.

Total:

Foxfire - 13
Kermit - 9

Continue on to your next round.