Post by Khall on Mar 18, 2013 1:08:17 GMT -5
Still a major W.I.P and will continue to get modified and refined. If you're into watching progress take shape that's cool and I welcome you to comment on what you like so far, but as is evident by the notes I've scrawled in the bio section I still have a long ways to go and am still brainstorming large parts of the bio and personality. One thing I am pretty adamant about are all stats. I feel very strongly that I can write an exemplary bio to support them. Funny enough I'm more sure on the stats than I am on his name.
Name:Khall ( phonetically it’s “K??l”
Race: Hybrid (3/4 Vahla ; 1/4 Umbaran)
Age: 45
Height: 5’10
Weight:185 lb.
Appearance:
Face: The first word that may come to mind if asked to describe Khall’s appearance is spectral. He has nearly chalk white skin touched with the slightest tint of a tanner pigment. His facial structure is somewhat gaunt with well-defined bone and muscle outlines. His Umbaran ancestry gives him dark sunken eye sockets which house a pair of piercing foggy pale lavender eyes that seem deeper than the void. There are numerous scars carving up his visage. There are three prominent scars on his face; the first of which being a large reverse C shaped scar starting from a good distance up the right side of his scalp that curves down between the center of his eyes and then down beneath his right eye ending on his cheek. The next scar starts as an X over his left brow, but one of the legs goes across his eye and when it reemerges below it splits into two prongs a few inches long each. The third scar could actually be counted as two separate scars, but Khall introduces them together since he got them at the same time. They’re both single diagonal lines, one on each cheek, angled from ear towards mouth. It should be noted though that sometimes Khall frequently has his face covered to some degree or other and thus his scars can’t always be fully seen if seen at all.
Body: Khall’s physique is very athletic from a lifetime of honing it into the ultimate tool much like any artisan hones his respective craft to as close to perfection as he can attain. If one could strip away the layers of clothing that mask his anatomy they’d see a finely chiseled muscular human-like body resembling fleshy white granite. His muscles aren’t huge, but they’re very well defined and compact. Indeed his skeleton is in accordance with his Vahl heritage, being most composed of tough thick cartilage rather than bone, though he does retain some bones that strengthen his overall structure. The end result is a being much more flexible than a usual Umbaran, but less frail than a typical Vahla.
Personality:
Birth place:Roon
Faction: Dark Jedi / Rekindled Ember of Vahl
Rank: Master
Previous Faction: N/A(same faction entire life)
Previous Rank: N/A
===Armament===
Lightsaber(s): dual-phase Shoto(x1) & single blade dual-phase lightsaber(x1)
Color: Smokey Orange(both) from a Vahleemikeershahn crystal or “Diamond of Vahl”
Non-Light Weapons: Two gray/black kerambits made of quadranium
Practiced Lightsaber forms:
Shii-Cho 5
Makashi 2
Soresu N/A
Ataru N/A
Shien / Djem So N/A
>>Sub-form Backhanded N/A
Niman 5
>>Sub-form Jar-kai, or Dual Wield 5
Juyo N/A
Double Bladed Combat N/A
Force-Sensitive Abilities or practices:
Telekinetic: 3
Telepathic: 8
Body: 3
Sense: 8
Protection: 6
Healing: 2
Destruction: 4
Specialized Skills(force): Drain Knowledge, Battlemind, Tutaminis
Specialized Skills(non-force):
VirtaavaTeurastaja(explained in bio)
Natural ability to see in ultraviolet vision (weaker than full blooded Umbarans)
Natural ability to influence others (weaker than full blooded Umbarans)
Languages:Basic, Vahla, Umbarese, Bocce
Attributes:
Physical Strength: 5
Intelligence: 6
Speed: 8
Leadership: 7
Unarmed: 8
Melee Weapons: 8
Ranged Weapons: 2
Bio: martial art comes from line of Umbaran martial artists, grandfather was a Rootai bodyguard and granted permission to leave Umbara on his own when his Rootai died naturally. His years
of service had brought him to many planets and he now desired to go exploring.
story of betrayal, relying on ones self to overcome the odds, get some Alexander
Selkirk-esque action going on
Training practice with sticks and later parangs
Work trakata into the duel with rival
acquire additional crystal from dead rival
Virtaava Teurastaja martial art mixture of K’thri(kung fu), Jar’Kai(swords), and Teras Kasi(silat)
Write about development into the Vahlnaga Kurgenost (The prophesized “son of Vahl”/warrior leader of the vahl forces)
don’t stop until all stats are significantly supported
RP Sample:
