Jedi Exile Dirk Heminal (wip)

[gundam007j]

Name:Dirk Heminal
Race: human/ Miraluka mix
Age: 21
Height:5 foot 11 inches
Weight:150
Birth place: Roxas Prime, n/a

Appearance: 
always wears a flat cap and blue scarf, brown hair, slightly scarred face and electric blue eyes unusual for his Miraluka species as they are born without eyes, usually glares at people(he is leaning against a metal surface btw)

Personality: slightly psychopathic and prone to staring down large armies and losing, usually keeps to himself. weakness: orphans, will do anything to help them, because he has strong ties to them


Faction: Jedi/Exile
Rank: exile for 7 years

Lightsaber: Single blade. Duel-phase. Dual Wield. 
Color: cyan (second phase white) (both)



Practiced Lightsaber forms:

Shii-Cho   3
Makashi    0
Soresu     0
Ataru       4
Shien / Djem So    4
>>Sub-form Backhanded
Niman       4
>>Sub-form Jar-kai, or Dual Wield
Juyo        0
Double Bladed Combat

Force-Sensitive Abilities or practices: 

Telekinetic: 7
Telepathic: 6
Body: 2
Sense: 8
Protection: 2
Healing:  3
Destruction: 2

Specialized Skills: machine meld, able to control machines and in some cases become one with a machine, only for a short time, also the player must go uninterupted


Attributes:


Physical Strength: 4
Intelligence: 7
Speed: 6
Leadership: 2

Unarmed: 2
Melee Weapons: 6
Ranged Weapons: 7

Bio: an orphan on Roxas Prime always felt comfortable around machines. at the age of six rebuilt an escape pod and was picked up by a passing jedi diplomacy ship, taught in the ways of the force by ________ and exiled for killing (PLEASE GIVE STORY IDEAS)

[gundam007j]

come to think of it this guy is a little op...

[sparrow]

Jun 4, 2013 20:03:12 GMT -5 gundam007j said:

come to think of it this guy is a little op...

Well,... you're not wrong.

Before you proceed, you should probably read the section notes and take a look at some approved characters to get a better sense of how to go about writing this. Also, he's not really a jedi, is he? So he should probably be in the Fringe section instead.

[gundam007j]

the only problem is he acts like a jedi but isnt bound by the law... i tried to get a new section called the exile alliance... silly right

[gundam007j]

how about now?

[Dutch]

Please read the Jedi Section Notes, and check out some previously accepted profiles to get an idea of what an acceptable character should be like.

[Swamps]

If you want to play an exiled Jedi how about looking at the Grey Jedi application in the Fringer section?

swrponline2.proboards.com/thread/1413/fringe-grey-jedi-application

EDIT: Also looking at your application, you need to take a look at some accepted applications before you go any further.

[gundam007j]

can i have some specific suggestions?

[Dutch]

Simply put, this character doesn't belong in my section. Unless he's affiliated with the Jedi Order, he is considered a grey Jedi. Unless he calls upon the darkside, then he'd be a dark Jedi. I can move this to Fringe- where grey Jedi go- if you'd like.

[Dutch]

Moved to incomplete... I think...

[gundam007j]

just delete it