Post by nicktheepic on Nov 9, 2013 18:47:03 GMT -5
Name: Tenebris Lux
Race: Zabrak
Age: 30
Height:6'2
Weight:162lbs
Birth Place: Iridonia
Appearance:From a first glance, you can see that he is rather physically capable with a muscly build while being slim enough to be nimble and agile.
He has no hair on his head, instead his head is crowned by some rather blunt horns, as the horns get closer to his forehead, the larger they are. These are often not visible since he often wears a grey hood. However, the ones at the front are still visible since they poke through the end of the hood. It's also possible to see dents through his hood of where the horns are.
He has deep, forest green eyes. They are rather bright and they are probably the main feuture of his face.
His skin color is much like a human's, rather pale. Although, he does have some tattoos on his face which are a few shades darker than his skin tone. His tattoos go around the area of his face, avoiding the eyes, mouth and nose. They're in a kind of helix pattern and are outlined in a jet black color.
His lips are the same color as his face and are rather thin, he has a large scar streaking across his forehead.
His attire is comprised of what most Jedi wear, a white tunic and grey robes covered by a dark grey cloak. He also wears black boots and leathery gloves which he.
Personality: It's easy to infer from a first impression that he is less of an emotionless monk than other Jedi, he expresses his emotions much more freely which troubles his superiors. He's by no means short tempered; by non-Jedi standards he was quite calm. Like most Zabrak, he is rather confident, perhaps too much; it can sometimes lead him into awkward or even dangerous situations. He is also not one to give into peer pressure and is strong willed. It isn't easy to make friends with him however, but he is also loyal to those he calls his ally's.
He is a talented physical fighter however, his force skills aren't't great apart from enhancing himself in other ways, due to the fact that he expresses his emotion more than other Jedi, he can sometimes use force powers which require emotion to work although he only does this out of the eyes of other colleagues.
He has a large grudge against most Wookies and is extremely reluctant to talk to them since there's an ancient feud between the Wookies and Zabrak.
Faction: Jedi Order
Rank: Knight
Sub Rank: Shadow
Lightsaber: Double bladed, each edge is long and the blades are thin to get the blade into smaller gaps and to create cleaner cuts. This is the blade he completed to become a Jedi Knight, It's activated by the force. The grip is specifically designed specifically for left-handed people as Tenebris is left handed.
Colour: Purple![]()
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Practiced Lightsaber forms:
Shii-Cho 5
Ataru 1
Double Bladed Combat 4
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Force-Sensitive Abilities or practices:
Telekinetic: 5
Telepathic: 3
Body: 7
Sense: 3
Protection: 4
Healing: 2
Destruction: 3
Specialized Skills:
Force Camouflage
Battlemind
Attributes:
Physical Strength: 6
Intelligence: 5
Speed: 6
Leadership: 3
Unarmed: 6
Melee Weapons: 6
Ranged Weapons: 1
Note: He often uses force powers to boost these attributes.
Bio: WIP:
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Race: Zabrak
Age: 30
Height:6'2
Weight:162lbs
Birth Place: Iridonia
Appearance:From a first glance, you can see that he is rather physically capable with a muscly build while being slim enough to be nimble and agile.
He has no hair on his head, instead his head is crowned by some rather blunt horns, as the horns get closer to his forehead, the larger they are. These are often not visible since he often wears a grey hood. However, the ones at the front are still visible since they poke through the end of the hood. It's also possible to see dents through his hood of where the horns are.
He has deep, forest green eyes. They are rather bright and they are probably the main feuture of his face.
His skin color is much like a human's, rather pale. Although, he does have some tattoos on his face which are a few shades darker than his skin tone. His tattoos go around the area of his face, avoiding the eyes, mouth and nose. They're in a kind of helix pattern and are outlined in a jet black color.
His lips are the same color as his face and are rather thin, he has a large scar streaking across his forehead.
His attire is comprised of what most Jedi wear, a white tunic and grey robes covered by a dark grey cloak. He also wears black boots and leathery gloves which he.
Personality: It's easy to infer from a first impression that he is less of an emotionless monk than other Jedi, he expresses his emotions much more freely which troubles his superiors. He's by no means short tempered; by non-Jedi standards he was quite calm. Like most Zabrak, he is rather confident, perhaps too much; it can sometimes lead him into awkward or even dangerous situations. He is also not one to give into peer pressure and is strong willed. It isn't easy to make friends with him however, but he is also loyal to those he calls his ally's.
He is a talented physical fighter however, his force skills aren't't great apart from enhancing himself in other ways, due to the fact that he expresses his emotion more than other Jedi, he can sometimes use force powers which require emotion to work although he only does this out of the eyes of other colleagues.
He has a large grudge against most Wookies and is extremely reluctant to talk to them since there's an ancient feud between the Wookies and Zabrak.
Faction: Jedi Order
Rank: Knight
Sub Rank: Shadow
Lightsaber: Double bladed, each edge is long and the blades are thin to get the blade into smaller gaps and to create cleaner cuts. This is the blade he completed to become a Jedi Knight, It's activated by the force. The grip is specifically designed specifically for left-handed people as Tenebris is left handed.
Colour: Purple
Practiced Lightsaber forms:
Shii-Cho 5
Ataru 1
Double Bladed Combat 4
-
Force-Sensitive Abilities or practices:
Telekinetic: 5
Telepathic: 3
Body: 7
Sense: 3
Protection: 4
Healing: 2
Destruction: 3
Specialized Skills:
Force Camouflage
Battlemind
Attributes:
Physical Strength: 6
Intelligence: 5
Speed: 6
Leadership: 3
Unarmed: 6
Melee Weapons: 6
Ranged Weapons: 1
Note: He often uses force powers to boost these attributes.
Bio: WIP:
Prolouge:
Born to honest, middle-class parents ,who were republic sympathizers, in Iridonia's capital, Tenebris was often looked up to by his friends; he had quick reflexes and uncommonly high physical strength, even by Zabrak standards. He felt no need to complain, he just thought he was lucky to be as capable as he was.
Finding out he's a Jedi:
At the age of four he was just outside his house after walking around the city with his mother. His mother entered the house and Tenebris about to enter it until he saw a peculiar human wearing brown cloak who was looking at him intently, he was only around 16 years old. Tenebris didn't look at him for long and was honestly quite frightened, he quickly entered and tried to forget about it. He found it rather difficult to sleep that night he wondered who the stange man was, he wondered if he should tell someone.
The next morning, nothing out of the ordinary happened, he got up had his breakfast like normal. He forgot about that strange man and carried on his usual buisness. In the afternoon he looked out of his window and saw the same man with another individual who looked more superior than him and was also carrying a large grey backpack; he opened his window to listen in on what they were talking about.
"Are you sure?" Asked the superior looking one skeptically,
"Are you sure?" Asked the superior looking one skeptically,
"Yes I am, master." Replied the one he saw originally who was quite obviously an apprentice,"What should we do?"
"Well, you said he was around four years old right?"
The apprentice looked to the other man, nodded and told him,"Around that age, I assume that's young enough to be taken to the temple?"
"Yes, we should take him the temple at once." He paused for a moment,"I can sense him."
Taken to the Temple:
Tenebris immediately shut his window. He was sure they were talking about him, what did they mean by the temple? He went downstairs to his father and told him everything that happened. "What did they look like?" His father asked,
"They were both wearing cloaks... One had a brown cloak and the one had a darker brown cloak." His father gave a look of disbelief,"What did they say?"
Tenebris hesitated for a moment and then replied,"They said something about a temple and then said they could sense me."
His father looked excited," No, but it makes sense now, your reflexes, your strength this is why..."
Tenebris looked at his father confusedly ,"What is it?"
"You're a force sensitive!" His father shouted ecstatically," I can't believe it a force sensitive in the family..."
Tenebris had only ever heard stories about force sensitives and Jedi but the fact that he was one was overwhelming. He was taking in the fact that he could be a Jedi when there was a rather loud knock on the door.
He knew it would probably be some Jedi to take him in, he ran to the door but his mother, not knowing about his capabilities got to the door first,"Calm down Tenebris." She sighed. She opened the door only to be met by two Jedi.
Shocked, she looked at the two Jedi,"Can I help you?" She said slowly.
Shocked, she looked at the two Jedi,"Can I help you?" She said slowly.
"It's about your child." Answered the Master, it was the same two Jedi as before,
"W... what about him?" She asked while turning to look at Tenebris.
"We believe he's a force sensitive." Replied the apprentice,
"No, that can't be righ..."
"Yes he is." Interrupted the Master, growing impatient "In fact, I think he already knows, after eavesdropping on us earlier", he looked at Tenebris, smiled, then he looked at Tenebris' Father,
"It's true!" He told her, excitedly,"Our son is a force sensitive!" He cried, grinning, he looked at the two Jedi,"What should we do then?"
The Master coughed lightly and said,"He shall be taken to the temple, he'll be trained into a Jedi."
His mother who was firmly gripping Tenebris on the shoulder asked,"Will me and Tenebris be able to stay in contact?"
The Master and Apprentice suddenly looked at each other gravely, they both looked at Tenebris' parents,"No" they both told them grimly.
Tenebris' father's grin subsided,"W... why not?" He asked.
The Master quickly replied,"It's against the Jedi code."
Tenebris' father sighed and looked at his wife,"What should we do?"
The Master stated,"It's your decision."
Tenebris' Mother looked at him,"What do you want to do?" She asked softly.
Tenebris was confused on what to do. Being a Jedi was exciting, but he needed his parents. However, Tenebris was naive, his curiosity(ironic, considering curiosity is against the Jedi code) and excitement forced him to say,"Yes..."
His mother and father let out a large sigh and a tear stroked down his mother's face,"Is that... What you really want?"
Tenebris stared at her for what seemed like forever, finally he nodded. There was silence for about a minute which was eventually broken by the Master saying,"Well, shall we go?"
Tenebris nodded and started walking away from his house until his father grabbed his arm,"Wait!"
Tenebris looked at him,waiting for his Father to continue until he said,"Always remember us, please."
Tenebris nodded, his Father and Mother stared at Tenebris,"Bye..." She whimpered, the Jedi Master, pushed Tenebris' back and ushered him forward, he started walking away from the house. He looked back and saw his Mother and Father hugging each other, both with tears rolling down their cheeks. They walked towards a large building, he recognized the place but he was never allowed in. He often saw ships taking off and landing in there. Of course this was the shipyards, not that Tenebris knew that. The Master, Apprentice and Tenebris entered through the large door.
When he entered the room was absolutely breathtaking, arrays of different kinds of ships, some he had never seen before, the room was extremely bright and a light grey color. There were several docks with ships in them, he guessed which ship belonged to the Jedi, one was dark grey and rather rusted, he assumed that didn't belong to the Jedi, needless to say it didn't. Eventually, they stopped at a freighter which was a grayish color. Tenebris stopped and stared at the ship,"Is this the ship?" He asked. The hangar doors were opening and the Master started to walk in,"Yes it is..."
Tenebris nodded, his Father and Mother stared at Tenebris,"Bye..." She whimpered, the Jedi Master, pushed Tenebris' back and ushered him forward, he started walking away from the house. He looked back and saw his Mother and Father hugging each other, both with tears rolling down their cheeks. They walked towards a large building, he recognized the place but he was never allowed in. He often saw ships taking off and landing in there. Of course this was the shipyards, not that Tenebris knew that. The Master, Apprentice and Tenebris entered through the large door.
When he entered the room was absolutely breathtaking, arrays of different kinds of ships, some he had never seen before, the room was extremely bright and a light grey color. There were several docks with ships in them, he guessed which ship belonged to the Jedi, one was dark grey and rather rusted, he assumed that didn't belong to the Jedi, needless to say it didn't. Eventually, they stopped at a freighter which was a grayish color. Tenebris stopped and stared at the ship,"Is this the ship?" He asked. The hangar doors were opening and the Master started to walk in,"Yes it is..."
Tenebris walked onto the ship, when on board the hangar doors closed behind him. He stumbled into the room, the master started walking down the room which was white and had a lot of expensive, looking machinery. He was taking in the setting until he was interrupted by a stern, grey haired man in an officer's uniform saying,"I assume you've got what you came for?" he straightened his back and looked at Tenebris,"Including something extra?"he inquisted
"He's a force sensitive." The Master answered, unloading a backpack onto the floor.
The officer smirked,"You came looking for some old antiques and found a Jedi, well done."
The Master smiled back then turned and walked towards Tenebris,"Don't get too comfortable," he exclaimed,"we'll be there soon.
"What were you doing here anyway?" asked Tenebris.
"Well," he told him,"This planet, Iridonia, was host to countless battles between us and the Sith in the past. We just came here hoping to retrieve a few artifacts," he indicated towards the bag,"we weren't disappointed."
At this moment the same, stern man as before walked in,"prepare for light speed sir!"
The Master cracked his fingers,"We'll be there soon."
Tenebris realized he hadn't even looked out of the window yet. Curiously, he peered out and was met with the harsh surface of Iridonia; Iridonia's surface was craggy and full of pools of acid. This shocked Tenebris, he'd never been any further than the the border of the city and never expected it to be like this. He was looking at the planet from space but he could still tell it was a terrible place to live, especially compared to Kashyyk(A nearby planet) which was tropical. That planet was the homeland of the Wookies. He couldn't help but feel a certain jealousy for them. Suddenly, the planet surface started morphing in the opposite direction as well as the stars. He clutched a nearby crate.
"Calm down! We're going into light speed." Smirked The Apprentice. "Just go to the crew quarters and take a rest. The beds at the end are unused."
Tenebris took his advice as he was exhausted he walked towards the quarters and when he was their he observed the room. It was white and had 13 beds. The ones at the ends were obviously unused as he was told. He dropped onto one and fell into an uninterrupted sleep. He woke up feeling much more attentive. He walked out of the crew quarters, rubbing his eyes. He didn't know his way around the ship and so he wondered around aimlessly, observing all the expensive equipment. Eventually he accidentally walked into the Apprentice,"I've been looking for you," he told him,"anyway we're here now."
Tenebris peered out of the window and saw a huge city; this setting wasn't too new to him though since he lived in the capital of Iridonia for all of his life but before him was a gigantic building."The Jedi Temple..." declared a familiar voice behind him," I guess this is your home now.
Tenebris gazed at the temple in astonishment, he followed The Master and Apprentice into the gigantic entrance.
Life Of a Youngling:
Tenebris became a Youngling of the Jedi Temple; years passed while he trained. He was a formidable opponent in battle, mostly because of his attunement of modifying his body with the force which he was especially skilled at. When he was six, he was training his moves with a lightsaber until he was confronted by a somewhat nemesis he made when he made shortly after he arrived here, John Dolore. He was a brown, haired human who wore light brown robes and had a relatively orange skin color"Hey!" He shouted angrily. A few days ago Tenebris managed to publicly humiliate him by force pushing him over after he insulted him for no good reason. Tenenbris sighed,"What now?"
"Meet me in the training hall in five minutes with a training saber!"
He stormed off while Tenebris was staring at him. He smirked to himself; he was unsure if dueling fellow younglings was even allowed but he wasn't about to let the chance of beating John in a saber battle slip by. Five minutes later he exited his room and traveled towards the training room. An rather large crowd of younglings there, he grabbed a training saber off of the weapons rack. John saw Tenebris pushing himself through the crowd, then walking towards him,"Okay then you swine, finally time t..."
Tenebris ignited a blue saber and launched it at John who backed away and narrowly missed it. John instinctively ignited his saber and stumbled back up. He sprinted towards Tenebris. Tenebris hadn't fully mastered force jumping but he had a decent grasp of it for a youngling, he managed to jump and only just skim John's head and landed behind him. He swung his saber at John's back before he had time to react. He flinched in pain, put his hand on his back and fell on his knees. Tenebris unlit his saber and picked John's saber up, walking back to the weapons rack. He put the lightsabers on the rack feeling rather highly of himself. The crowd looked at Tenebris in awe. He looked at John who was walking towards his room with his hand on his back. Tenebris started to also walk towards his room, when he passed John, Tenebris saw a look of disgust upon John's face. He felt a massive confidence boost after that fight. Over the next few years, he gained renown as a capable fighter and eventually, the time came to become a padawan.
Padawan Years:
At the age of ten, Tenebris was ready to be chosen. He had small doubts whether he'd be chosen or not. Eventually, he felt a hand on his shoulder."Hello again." Tenebris looked behind himself confusedly, he saw the same apprentice who sensed him six years ago,"It's been some time." He remarked.The apprentice was recently promoted to a Knight and was given the chance to tutor a padawan. He told Tenebris that he was his master now and Tenebris was no longer a youngling. The Knight's appearance changed a lot since they last met, he wore light-brown robes and a dark brown utility belt, his hair was black and quite long and he had blue eyes and pale skin. " I'm not sure if I told you my name." He held out his hand, indicating a handshake,"It's Owen Curus."
Tenebris held out his hand and they both shook hands. The next few years mainly consistied of training with Owen, honing his lightsaber and force skills. He was too young to go on any real missions. However, when he was 16 he was sent on a diplomatic mission to Mandalore to discuss a treaty between the Rebublic and the Mandalorians. Well, he and Owen weren't the Diplomats, but they were protecting the senators. While at the temple, Tenebris was oddly nervous, Owen was giving him some reassuring words about easily outmatching John Dolores, "But he wasn't even chosen to be a padawan anyway." Replied Tenebris. Which was true because no master was willing to take him.
"Well, he deserved it anyway." Owen declared."Look, I know you haven't made one yet but..."He held out a single bladed lightsaber in his hand,"I have a spare."
Tenebris looked at him and slowly took the lightsaber, he ignited it and it shone a blue color"Are you ready?"
Tenebris smiled,"Yes"
"Then let's go, chances are we won't run into any combat anyway." Owen told him.
They both walked to the hanger, Tenebris had flashbacks of when he was walking into the hanger when he was four years old. They both got into the shuttle, Owen and Tenebris took hold of the ship controls."Prepare for lightspeed." He announced, the stars began to morph backwards. A few days later they arrived at Mandalore. They both left the shuttle and saw a Mandolorian diplomat with two soldiers in red armor by his side. The diplomat hissed,"Good you're here, the Republic senators will be here soon..." He looked at a metal building,"come in!" he ordered. They walked into the large building and entered a room with three closed doors at each wall and one open door which they entered from," I don't like this,"Owen whispered,
"Neither do I Master, I sense something bad, really bad."
Suddenly, all three doors opened to reveal Mandolorians in red armor, all of them pointing blasters at the two Jedi. Both of them ignited their lightsabers,"Get back to the ship!" Owen shouted. Tenebris ran with his saber still ignited, he ran outside but was only met with three mandolorians with blasters."Stop him!" One shouted, the soldiers were about three meters away so Tenebris force leaped in front of them them. He slashed one of the blasters in half and slashed two of the soldiers in the stomach and pointed his lightsaber at the soldier he disarmed. The soldier looked behind him and ran away. Owen ran out of the building, deflecting blaster fire with his green lightsaber."RUN!" He yelled.
Tenebris ran towards the ship but the Mandolorians were shooting at it and it blew up. He backed away from the explosion. He looked at the Mandolorians and ignited his lightsaber to block the blaster fire. After a short period of time, he became overwhelmed by the sheer amount of laser fire and got shot in the chest, he clinched onto his chest after being shot. Although, he was rather resilent as a Zabrak, he held up his lightsaber with the hand he wasn't clutching his chest with and managed to block one more bullet before being hit in the arm, then leg. He then lost consciousness.
He woke up laying down on the hangar of a ship, Owen was kneeling at his side with a medical droid,"Will he be okay?"
The droid looked at Owen and told him in a metallic voice,"He has just regained consciousness."
Owen looked at Tenebris who was wearily opening his eyes,"Thank god, are you all right?"
"Y... yes master." he managed.
"The senator's are safe, we managed to warn them about the attack just before they were about to dock. I force jumped us both onto the ship. Mandolorian bastards, we never should have trusted them. Anyway, we're going back to Coruscant."
When they got back to the temple, he ushered to the courtyard and sat on a bench. He looked at the cloudy sky. He sighed to himself, he was knocked out on his first mission. He felt useless. Although, at the corner of his eye, he saw a man there. It was Owen. Tenebris looked at him then quickly looked back at the ground.
"What is it?" Owen asked.
Tenebris looked at Owen,"It was my a chance to prove myself. But I failed."
Owen smiled lightly,"Tenebris Lux, you stood up against three fully trained Mandolorian soldiers and prevailed and you also managed to hold your own up against an entire firing line of them for a few seconds."
Tenebris looked at his arm, his cloak had a hole in it where it had been torn from blaster fire but there was no physical injuries,"What happened to th..."
"Kolto,"interrupted Owen,"Lots of it", Owen looked at the lightsaber adorning Tenebris' hip,"You can keep the lightsaber until you make your own if you want."
"Who's was it anyway?" asked Tenebris.
"Ah." remarked Owen,"Well, it was a lightsaber I used originally for duel wielding but that seems to be out of my taste now. I just prefer one."
Tenebris looked at Owen's lightsaber which had an abnormally large hilt.
"To be honest," Owen declared,"I think you're ready to build your lightsaber anyway."
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