Lady Liagri [WIP]

[Vette]

Name: Servina Liagri
Race: Morellian
Age: Sixty-Three, 63.
Height: Five-Foot & Nine Inches, 5'9.
Weight: One-Hundred and Twenty-Seven Pounds, 137lbs.

Appearance:
Personality:
Birth place: Khar

Faction: The Sith Order.
Rank: Master.

Previous Faction: Dark Jedi.
Previous Rank: Knight.

Lightsaber:
Color: Red

Practiced Lightsaber forms:

Shii-Cho
Makashi
Soresu
Ataru
Shien / Djem So
>>Sub-form Backhanded
Niman
>>Sub-form Jar-kai, or Dual Wield
Juyo
Double Bladed Combat

Force-Sensitive Abilities or practices:
Tutaminis
Force Drain
Force Storm

Telekinetic: 1 - 10
Telepathic: 1 - 10
Body: 1 - 10
Sense: 1 – 10
Protection: 1 - 10
Healing: 1 – 10
Destruction: 8

Specialized Skills:

Attributes:

Physical Strength: 1 - 10
Intelligence: 1 - 10
Speed: 1 – 10
Leadership: 1 - 10

Unarmed: 1 - 10
Melee Weapons: 1 - 10
Ranged Weapons: 1 - 10

Bio:


RP Sample:

[Moonfire]

Hi Vette! Welcome back!

Just a few minor concerns with what you've got so far, I know you're not set here yet and all that.

You have your lady here at the age of 63 and human and have a picture of a 20'sish looking young lady. If only we all aged so well? Is this intended to be a picture of her in her younger years or a current one?

As much as I'd love to say she's aged gracefully thats not really realistic portrayal.

www.hdwallpapersfan.net/wp-content/uploads/2014/09/Meryl-Streep-Pictures-14.jpg

Meryl Streep here is 65 and aged wonderfully compared to many, such a dignified classy lady! So, just wondering!

So excited so where you're going with this character and can't wait to do the full review ^^

[Vette]

Believe me, I know, haha. That was meant to be edited younger the day I posted it, but it happened to slip my mind. But can you edit out that image? Lol, or shrink it?

[Dire Wolf]

If it's about the age, just pick a morellian. They're very long lived for that nice human+, youthful attractive JM. Also, we don't delete bios. What Moonfire meant wasn't criticism, just a passing comment to hopefully make your life easier down the road. What I saw looked pretty good thus far, and was actually looking forward to writing with you and that character.

[Moonfire]

Yeah! Definitely not critism, Vette! I was just checking a quick passing concern! Please do not feel the need to delete the bio or the thread!

Long lived human-like species are all over the place and feel free to pick, I also edited the picture down to a link <3

I'm very sorry to have caused any sort of offense!

[Vette]

Oh no offense was taken, no worries. Its just one of my little weird quirks. xD

[Mara]

Howdy there.

Just something I noticed --

Not sure what kind of appearance you are going for, specially body type... but at her current height and weight, while in the normal range, are at the low end. So she'd be quite thin I would think.
I mean, I weighed around that back in college, and I'm only 5'6"... and you have her 3 inches taller than that.

So what I'm saying is, if you wanted a more curvy/muscular body, I'd add some weight to her. But she could stay as is if you wanted to go with a more slim/lean body type.

[Moonfire]

Still working on this, Vette? :3

[Apillis]

Just as a heads up, Morellians age a lot slower than other species. Being 63 for them is fairly young, they don't actually hit their "prime" until around 110-115 years old or so, while retiring age is about 150-170 years old. So at 63 one would still be pretty young, basically like an adolescent in their upper-teens. Because they age slower, they develop slower as well, which means just because they're 63 or so doesn't necessarily translate to being as good as say 63 year old human who them relatively hit masterhood a couple decades ago, in the case of a Morellian they'd still be learning.

[Neology]

Moved to incomplete.