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Sept 14, 2015 18:09:01 GMT -5
Post by stoof on Sept 14, 2015 18:09:01 GMT -5
Official Name: all territory Jet Board Faction/Affiliation: Classification: sport equipment/ speeder Dimensions: 2x0.5x0.1 Height: 10 CM Width: 50 Cm Length: 156 CM Manufacturer: Stock/Custom: Custom Energy Source: mirco power cell Propulsion Type: air jet engine Top Speed: 65 km/h Crew Necessity: 1 Armor/hull: N?A Shields: N/A Armament: Passenger Capacity: 0 Other Equipment: Description/Role:modified jet board made to go into more territories then only water modified the engine and battery so it could go higher and faster. The board is made from plasteel
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Sept 15, 2015 22:40:44 GMT -5
Post by Fromikeable on Sept 15, 2015 22:40:44 GMT -5
I have only two minor critiques.
1) For the sake of consistency, let's just change the power source to "micro power cell". If all that's needed to power a full-fledged shuttle is a normal power cell, then this thing doesn't need much.
2) Propulsion type for a jet board would be, well, "jets".
2) I'm assuming this thing is just your average commercial jet board? If so, let's just say it's made our of a high-grade plastic or perhaps some cheap titanium.
Just hit up those for me and you're set amigo. Sorry for the wait.
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Sept 15, 2015 22:52:08 GMT -5
Post by Dutch on Sept 15, 2015 22:52:08 GMT -5
2) I'm assuming this thing is just your average commercial jet board? If so, let's just say it's made our of a high-grade plastic or perhaps some cheap titanium. I'd recommend plasteel
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Sept 16, 2015 8:27:32 GMT -5
Post by stoof on Sept 16, 2015 8:27:32 GMT -5
changed it
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Sept 16, 2015 11:40:09 GMT -5
Post by Fromikeable on Sept 16, 2015 11:40:09 GMT -5
Sweet deal daddio.
APPROVED.
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