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[Seraph]

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[DreadPirateMike]

Hey there, Seraph. My name's Mike, one of the mods here. I hope you're settling in okay, and be sure to let me or one of the other fun colored names here if you need anything. Anyway, I know you're still working on this, but a couple details caught my eye, and I figured I'd point those out now. Maybe save you some trouble later in having to edit your bio.

- The first biggie is all the lightsaber proof metal augmenting his frame. I'm afraid, for fairness reasons, that's a bit of a no no here. You're certainly welcome to use durasteel or something, which would make him resistant to MOST forms of injury, although it would also make him somewhat slow.  But being able to just shrug off a clean lightsaber hit is just a step too far.

- Obviously, final judgement on the various stats will happen only after the application is completed, but a Superior rating in both physical stats is not often accepted. Especially for a Force using character. Keep in mind, being as STRONG and as FAST as a humanoid can possibly get are two very different things, requiring sacrifice in one area or another. You need to condition different muscles.

- And, lastly, there's actually a specific site rule about Juyo. For a character to even start learning it, he needs to have completely mastered three other styles, one of which has to be Shii-Cho. Your guy's almost there, but not quite.

Aaaaand, that's all I've got! Good luck!

[Neology]

Moved to incomplete.