Ryuua Towa

[LadyTowa]

Name:Ryuua Towa

Race:Twi'lek

Age:34

Birthplace: Ryloth

Allegiance:Sith

Status: Sith Lady

Rank: Sith Lady(Don't really know what the ranking system is, clarify if possible.)

Height:6'3

Weight:150 lbs

Appearance: Ryuua looks much more clothes than the average Twi'lek. She wears a long metallic-like dress, which doesn't limit her fighting capabilities because of it's sleekness. It has a large red line in the middle of the knee area of the dress, along with small metal parts scattered around it. The long sleeves have a black patch where her forearm is, it's the imperial symbol on them. She wears silver gloves, with a black coating where the palms are. Her skin is dark blue, with black splotches on her head. Her eyes are generally a dark red, but turn a golden yellow whenever she uses her force powers. She wears a silver accessory on her head, and one of her eyes has a deep scar from the invasion she launched on her own clan.


Personality: Ryuua is very cruel. If she finds someone helping her lackluster or not worth her time to help, then she will most likely kill them. But she does treat those she finds exceptable quite politely. This happens many times, much more than her killings.
     Ryuua is very cunning and calm. Even if she's losing a fight, she won't show her concern. She watches her opponent's technique, studying their moves, opening, etc. Even when she's not in a fight, she plans a strategy that will work for her as well as her droids/soldiers.
     Ryuua thinks that the Sith should rule the galaxy and everyone in it. But she also is very interested in the Jedi. She doesn't believe in their views, but is interested in their abilities. She believes they have a value in their lives in some way, even though she has killed a select few of them.
     Ryuua plans to become the future ruler of the Sith. She believes the more she does for the Sith Empire, the more likely she will become a higher rank than any of her fellow Lords, and possibly someday, inner sanctum members. She respects the emperor nonetheless.

Ships/Vehicles: Standard starfighter 

Equipment: Double Bladed Lightsaber, with a curved center, and a red color crystal. Blaster Pistol. Armor that helps to protect her from the slashes from lightsabers and shots from blasters. Her Padawan Lightsaber, one bladed, with yet another curved end, with a red color crystal.

Stats:
Strength-Average
Agility-Superior
Intellegence-Average
Charisma-Above Average

Force Stats:
Telekenetic-Expert
Telepathic-Apprentice
Body-Unskilled
Sense-Adept
Protection-Unskilled
Healing-Unskilled
Destruction-Expert

Combat Training: Blasters:Adept, Echani Martial Arts: Expert

Force Training: Force Fear:Apprentice, Force Drain: Master

Other Training: Slicing: Adept, Piloting: Expert

Lightsaber Training:
Shii-Cho-Adept
Makashi- Expert
Soresu-Apprentice
Ataru-Unskilled
Shien-Novice
Niman-Unskilled
Juyo-Unskilled
Double-Bladed Combat- Master 

Biography- Ryuua was born on Ryloth in 3633 BBY. She was very innocent as a child, and worked to help their clan, yuu'owa. Her harmless and loving nature made very likable in her clan, and it stayed that way for a long time. She even escaped the boundaries of her capabilities as a female Twi'lek
     She did more of her fair share of the work around her clan. Ryuua hated that other Twi'lek females were just used for their natural beauty and slave work. It angered her very badly, to the point where she wanted to erase the custom for herself. She began doing harder jobs that tired her much, but soon she became one of the strongest of the Twi'lek females.
     When Ryuua turned 18, she began to grow as a force user. She soon stopped her jobs and began to train in the way of the force, although it was highly unlikely a result would show. But slowely and gradually and time after time, she gained her force abilities as the days went by. Then her darker abilities came, like her force lightning, And it would soon change her life forever.
     When her dark abilities came, everyone in the clan began to fear her. Everyone in the clan shunned, shut her out, didn't speak with her, except her mother and father. This made her even more enraged. At age 28, she eventually went crazy from all her friends abandoning her, and killed both her parents with the powers she obtained. It was there that she went on the path of he dark side.
     She got ahold of a Rylothian starfighter and left Ryloth. She then went straight to Korriban to become a Sith. She only took the most intense training, and nothing more. She quickly became a Padawan and claimed a master named Fortu'Hama, another Twi'lek. Once she was given her first Lightsaber, she knew the true power of the Dark Side. The two fought together for about a year, before Ryuua found she was stronger than her master. On the next mission they went on, Ryuua killed Fortu in the midst of battle. She was soon found overachieving, and began to rise in the imperial rankings. When she became a Siyh Lady, she received her double bladed Lightsaber, and instantly became very loyal to the emperor, and was sent on more advanced missions. But one day, she went on her own mission to get revenge on her clan.
     She and a group of other Sith Warriors invaded the Yuu'owa clan. She killed every last member of the clan and had all their homes destroyed. It was then that she left Ryloth for good. From then on, she spread fear and malevolence throughout the Galaxy. 
 
RP Sample: Ryuua was quiet. She had just come back from her mission, but she didn't seem satisfied. It seemed as if it wasn't enough for her nowadays. She just wanted to continue working towards her goal to become the ruler of the ship. It was time to get back to work. There was no rest for the wicked. One of the droids on the battleship informed her of the incoming fleet. She smiled, and ready for the fun to begin.

[Rugs]

Howdy. Welcome to our site. Pardon our delays here.

Gonna try to keep this to-the-point and simple

For starters, can't begin as a member of the Inner Sanctum. You have to work your way up to that IC. So the highest she could start out as would be as a Sith Lord/Lady.

Also, need a written appearance. As you can tell from your attempt to put it in her profile, you can't always rely on a picture. And your avatar can change, etc.

Stats:
A superior and legendary, for a generally normal species, is too much. You need to knock those both down, either to both above average, or one at average and one superior.

Destruction should come down to Master. Also, your basic powers like push, pull, speed, etc. don't need listing. Those are assumed under the various branches of the Force. The only two you need to list are Fear and Drain.

Just glancing at her light saber stats, she's too spread out (and possibly too young) for a specialist rank. We mean that as a stat to show total dedication to a form. Characters with it typically only have one or two forms at most as secondary forms.

Bio:

Ryuua was born on Ryloth in 3633 BBY.

At the top of the app it says Korriban xP

When Ryuua turned 18, she became very force sensitive. Time after time, she gained her force abilities as the days went by. Then her dark abilities came. And it would soon change her life forever.

Force affinity is something you're born with. Now she might not realize it or it might not manifest until she's 18, but it's not something that just pops up.
Also, abilities are typically brought out through training, not just sort of showing up

And it's not really clear what you mean when you say the dark abilities came. Did she do something?

And for the record, killing other sith, as she does her master, just for the sake of it would more likely be frowned upon than praised by our Sith Order. Gotta fight a war; can't do that by killing each other.

[LadyTowa]

Edited the app.

[Rugs]

Reading my past post, that should have said destruction should come down to expert. Down to master doesn't make any sense lol. That's my fault ^^;;

And like I said, the only two powers you need to list under force training are fear and drained. The others are all generally-assumed powers. It's up to you, but just so you know

The V-wing you list, what do you mean? My mind immediately goes to the Galactic Republic fighter, which is out of era. (Similarly, the Chir'daki fighter she uses later in the bio is also out of era. An easy way to avoid that headache would just be to say she used a starfighter.)

When she became an Inner Sanctum member, a Darth...

Like I said, the Inner Sanctum is closed except for gaining the rank through RP. She could become a Sith Lord/Lady. Still get the Sith name, just no Darth in front of it. Also need to remove the Darth from your thread title.

Anyhoo, just those few quick touch ups and you're more or less set.

[LadyTowa]

Just edited.

[Rugs]

Go forth

Equipment: Double Bladed Lightsaber, with a curved center, and a red color crystal. Blaster Pistol. Armor that helps to protect her from the slashes from lightsabers and shots from blasters. Her Padawan Lightsaber, one bladed, with yet another curved end, with a red color crystal.

Stats:
Strength-Average
Agility-Superior
Intellegence-Average
Charisma-Above Average

Force Stats:
Telekenetic-Expert
Telepathic-Apprentice
Body-Unskilled
Sense-Adept
Protection-Unskilled
Healing-Unskilled
Destruction-Expert

Combat Training: Blasters:Adept, Echani Martial Arts: Expert

Force Training: Force Fear:Apprentice, Force Drain: Master

Other Training: Slicing: Adept, Piloting: Expert

Lightsaber Training:
Shii-Cho-Adept
Makashi- Expert
Soresu-Apprentice
Ataru-Unskilled
Shien-Novice
Niman-Unskilled
Juyo-Unskilled
Double-Bladed Combat- Master