Kaelis Bendath [WIP]

[Rogue Eclipse]

Name: Kaelis Bendath
Race: Human
Age: 26
Birthplace: Raxus

Allegiance: Himself
Status: Mercenary/Assasin
Rank: Freelace

Height/Weight: 1.88m 72kg
Appearance:

Personality:

Ships/Vehicles:

Equipment:

Stats: (Feeble, Below Average, Average, Above Average, Superior, Legendary)

Strength -Average
Agility - Above Average
Intelligence - Superior
Charisma - Average

Combat Training: (Unskilled, Novice, Apprentice, Adept, Expert, Master)

Other Training: (Unskilled, Novice, Apprentice, Adept, Expert, Master)

Biography:

Roleplay Sample:

[tepigturtwig]

Alright, can I just give a quick suggestion? I'm not the guy who approves things, just a player with recent experience in character apps. Although you have yet to touch on the two things that usually draw out problems: bio, and training, I see one small problem. Correct me if I'm wrong, but, those stats are too good. First off, please note what Superior means here. It means really, really, really, smart. Like, Einstein levels or around them. It's fine to be smart, I mean, my only character has Superior intelligence and is around the same age as Kaelis here. But, here's the thing: Your other stats aren't getting hurt for that. My character is so smart since he spends all his time in the Jedi archives, (He's a padawan close to knighthood, btw, so if I mention Jedi things, that's why) to the point where it is unhealthy. His speed and strength are taking a huge hit for his intelligence, which makes those stats reasonable enough to work. If you are going to take a superior stat, please, make atleast one below average. Don't take a feeble, it's the equivalent of a handicap, but, atleast one below average. Having a medium strength, higher speed, and genius character, and at his age, is a little much.