projectsunfire
...oh how we miss him...
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Achievements Unlocked: Paramore, Base Buster, Gunslinger, Tactical Assault, Survivor, Vacationist
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Feb 16, 2008 13:09:59 GMT -5
Post by projectsunfire on Feb 16, 2008 13:09:59 GMT -5
*OBJECTION!!!* oh sorry was just looking at your descripton picture. Really cool, but it reminded me of Pheonix Right. Anyway... On to the massacre.
Raise his Phys-str. He's military trained he should be hefty, and special forces guys need to be able to do all kinds of physical stuff.. Stabbing...Neck breaking... stabbing... (twice as much stabbing as neck breaking)
In your Bio, you need to go over the little spelling mistakes.
Arent all newborn children young?
I'm slapping a not approved on this little gem until you've made an editting run, and you've gone through it looking for inconsistancies.
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Antonus
The Comeback Kid
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last online Aug 12, 2008 13:36:35 GMT -5
Padawan
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Feb 18, 2008 15:52:42 GMT -5
Post by Antonus on Feb 18, 2008 15:52:42 GMT -5
Alright, well i guess Sun *Hates Me* but anyway i'll get right on it...
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projectsunfire
...oh how we miss him...
1,666 posts
4 likes
Achievements Unlocked: Paramore, Base Buster, Gunslinger, Tactical Assault, Survivor, Vacationist
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last online Jan 17, 2010 2:40:54 GMT -5
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Feb 22, 2008 22:04:53 GMT -5
Post by projectsunfire on Feb 22, 2008 22:04:53 GMT -5
Much better. Approved.
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