Legen Whiteheart

[Legen Whiteheart]

Appearance:



Name: Legen Whiteheart
Race: Human
Age: 19
Height: 6'0
Weight: 13 Stones = 182 Pounds
Birth Place: Tatooine
Faction: Jedi

Rank: Padawan

Bio: Legen was raised in a home with other children on a planet called Andooweel, which is in the outer rim territories of that region. The children Legen grow up with we're poor as was the home he lived in. He was at the age of 5 and was playing outside one day as a stranger walked silently up to him and crouch down to look at him closely. He was scared at first, the stranger placed his hand on his head and smiled at Legen, as he removed his hood.

He had pure green eyes with a dark brown beard and looked quite young, also his hair was wavy short dark brown hair.

He stood up from Legen and walked over to the owner of this home and began to talk to her. After he said afew words my owner, Miss Pen, eyes widened a little and after there conversation ended the stranger handed her a brown bag. Then he came over to Legen and said, "Are you ready young one, do you need to take anything with you?" he smiled as he finished his words. Legen shyly said, "no".

From the age of 5 and on master Jor has been teaching Legen the ways of the force as he grow into a teenager of 13 years old. Jor was telling Legen how he constructed his first lightsaber at the academy on Coruscant. Legen always wondered what happened to him, like why did he become an Ex-Jedi. Jor told Legen he left the academy and the position of being on the council as a master, because he was trying to convince all the other masters to hunt down Dark Jedi. Although Legen never asked anymore questions after that, but he wondered isn't that against what the Jedi strive for?

It was a happy and peaceful time as they landed on a planet in the outer rim territories. Legen has never heard of this planet before, "Halbara", master Jor told Legen as they both walked off the ramp. The planet was populated by Humans, there we're other species there, but Humans obviously we're dominating this planet. We we're shopping for supplies, the basic kind, food, water, air tanks, etc...

After afew hours, as this worlds sun was settling, Legen and his master was heading back to the ship to rest and be ready to launch as day break comes to the world again. But Jor and soon after Legen sensed a disturbance in the force, a black hooded figure stood infront of them and without a word from his lips, his lightsaber beamed out and cast it's red glare upon them. Fear took Legen as he's never seen another lightsaber before, mind a red one at that and Legen knew he was 'A Dark Jedi...'

Legen's master stood carmly and gave him a piece of paper with coordinates. He said to Legen, "please leave, this is between me and him, you must go to our ship and punch in those codes, let the ship take you to a distant planet where you will carry on your life from there. Good luck my Padawan, it's been fun". Legen started to cry whilst holding his brown robe, Jor put his hand on Legen's head and he looked up, Jor was smiling. "Please go", Jor said, he suddenly burst into force speed and slashed a huge blow at the dark figure. Legen turned and ran towards there ship while hearing lightsabers clash and force powers crushing through the still air.

Legen landed on a planet unknown to him at the time and needed information. He run down from the ramp and went to a information officer. "Excuse me but where am i!?". The information officer told him everything he needed to know. Planet: Engira, Region: Outer Rim Territories, Sector: Jospro Sector, System: Unknown, Inhabitants: Humans, Capital City: Unknown. Legen from then on carried his life by his own hands and followed the ways of the force best he could without a master...

That's the last Legen ever saw of his master and now he's told you his story, Legen has reached the age of 19 and is on his way to the academy of Jedi's on Coruscant. After some hours being on Coruscant and waiting for the council's decision to let Legen join or not has finally been answered as the doors open to the council room, Legen walks in and they begin to talk about him being accepted to the Jedi Academy, "congratulations" they say.

Color: Blue

Lightsaber: Single Blade

Practiced Lightsaber Forms:

Shii-Cho (All Jedi Practice this form, and know it by heart as it is the basis of all Lightsaber Combat.)

Main Form - Form V: Shien / Djem So

"You will doubtless encounter many situations with multiple assailants. To better protect yourself from blaster fire without compromising your offensive capabilities, use the Shien form."

―Kavar

Despite its metaphorical and literal strength, Form V was not without its weaknesses. Shien was particularly weak against a single opponent and Djem So was known for having a lack of mobility. However, a skilled duelist in Form V was capable of compensating for these weaknesses and employing the form effectively in combat.

By the time of the Ruusan campaign, the Djem So variant of Form V had been developed. Djem So had an emphasis on strength and power, allowing a user to make good use of his or her own physical size and strength. It was for this reason that Sith blademaster Kas'im advised the fledgling Darth Bane to learn Djem So; Bane's imposing size and strength would serve as the perfect compliment to Form V. Power attacks from a Djem So user could even knock an opponent back just through sheer kinetic force, throwing them off balance and leaving them vulnerable to further brute force strikes and power blows that sought not just to penetrate an opponent's defense, but push them back and leave them unable to counter blows.

Unlike Soresu or Ataru, Djem So required the user to not only counterattack, but press the assault, combining Force-enhanced strength with powerful blade combinations to overpower and overwhelm an opponent's defenses. Djem So's sheer power, when combined with physical and Force-imbued strength, was more than a match for Makashi's finesse and elegance when employed by a skilled practitioner.

Sub Form - Form III: Soresu

"Good. Do not block. Redirect. Wait for opponents to become weary or frustrated. Let them make a mistake, then seize the opening and make them pay."

―Darth Bane to Darth Zannah during her lightsaber training.

Soresu utilized motions that occurred very close to the body, in an attempt to achieve near-total protection and expend as little energy as possible while executing moves. Form III stressed quick reflexes and fast positional transition, in order to overcome the rapidity with which a blaster could be fired. This technique minimized the body's exposure, making a well-trained practitioner nearly invincible. Followers of Soresu preferred to remain on the defensive until their opponent left an opening that a Soresu practitioner could exploit. Observers generally described Soresu as a passive form of combat. Jedi with extreme patience and reserved personality often employed the form - in fact, during the Clone Wars, Soresu was the most commonly used lightsaber form in the Jedi Order.

Force-Sensitive Abilities Or Practices:

Sense (Knight)
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1 2 3 4 5

Telekinesis (Padawan)
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1 2 3 4 5

Force Leap (Padawan)
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1 2 3 4 5

Force Speed (Padawan)
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1 2 3 4

Healing (Padawan)
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1 2 3 4

Healing Trance (Knight)
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1 2 3

Farsight (Padawan)
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1 2 3 4

Beast Language (Padawan)
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1 2 3 4

Affect Mind/Mind Trick (Knight)
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1 2 3

Force Camoflage (Knight)
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1 2 3

Telepathy (Knight)
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1 2 3

Other Force Abilities Available: (If an applicant wishes to include these amongst their force powers the mods will require a lengthy explanation, or reasoning.)

Battle Meditation
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1 2 3

Battle-Meld
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1 2 3

Battlemind
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1 2 3

Malacia (Consular, Guardian, and Sentinel and up)
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1 2

Sever Force (Knight and up 'Killing Blow only')
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1 2 3

Morichro (Consular, Guardian, and Sentinel and up)
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1 2

Force Lightning (Consular, Guardian, and Sentinel and up)
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1 2

Attributes:

Physical Strength
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1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

Intelligence
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1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

Speed
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1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

Unarmed
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1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

Melee Weapons
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1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

Ranged Weapons
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1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

Leadership
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1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

Force Atunement
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0 1 2 3 4 5

[Jenno]

Okay, first of all, there are no unknowns here on SWU. Even though your character may not know his Birth Place, he still has a Birth Place and we need to know where that is.

And moving onto the largest problem. This bio is in 1st person. If you check the rules, and the majority of forum RPs, you will notice that things are to be written in 3rd person so 'he' or 'Legen' instead of 'I'. You'll have to change this throughout the bio.

Please change 'Sith' to 'Dark Jedi' because 'Sith', on this site, refers to the chosen Master and Apprentice any other user of the dark side, such as the NPC character in the biography, is known as a 'Dark Jedi' so please just change that one word and you'll be fine in that department.

Right, I would like you to answer a few more questions in the bio as well, by adding to it in places. There are a couple of things I would like to know, was his Master an ex-Jedi of some kind? Because I get the strong feeling he is but no definite answer. What age was he when he constructed his lightsaber? What was his Master's name? How come it took him 6 years to reach Coruscant? (I'd have thought it would make more sense for that even to take place when he was 19 and then he head's to Coruscant).

Those are a couple of edits I would like to make. Also, I'd suggest you look the bio over for any grammar mistakes, because there are a number of them.

Finally a task which is not so daunting, please scale down the character image so that it doesn't stretch the screen for people like myself ^^, thank you. (By the way, I'm liking the image, it's just screaming to be made into a signature).

That should be all, hopefully.

Also, if this character is coming to Coruscant after being taught by a Jedi who has left the order then he'll have to meet with the council to be officially accepted into the order (the threads of High Council members are stickied in the Jedi section, check to see which ones are active and pm asking if they'd be able to be the ones to accept you. Most likely only be a couple of posts. Either that or you could add that to the end of your bio to make things easier for yourself.)

Post to tell me when you've done, if you have any questions, just ask.

~Jenno

[Legen Whiteheart]

Ok i think i've done everything you've said. But the picture, because i don't know how to make it smaller?

Yeah i want it into a signature and a avatar too! hehe

If theres anything else tell me. ^^

[Jenno]

Still a couple of grammar discrepancies, but nothing serious.

Also, the image has bee rescaled and yet you say you don't know how to?

It looks good to me. But I would suggest that you follow my idea of saying that he's visited the council and they've accepted him into the order, otherwise you have to rp that out and it's a bit pointless. This way you can get straight into things.

Also, you need to say his Birth Place, don't put one down and say that isn't his actual birth place >.<. He doesn't necessarily have to know, but we, the staff, do.

That should be done afterwards so just tell me when .

~Jenno

[Legen Whiteheart]

Ok i've finally finished, my picture i think made itself smaller, i didn't do it................................................

Anyway, i hope i can begin, where do i start do i get a master so on, etc...

[Jenno]

This profile is officially APPROVERIZED!

Welcome to the active member base of SWU .

Now, the best thing you can do is advertise your interest in rping with someone in the Jedi/Sith plot thread and also mention that you're after a master. We don't have too many Jedi at the moment, but stick around and we'll be able to find a master for you eventually, more likely to find a place for you to just rp a bit first. If an active Jedi comes along then I'll also try and help to set something up.

If you have any more questions just ask.

[Legen Whiteheart]

Thanks for everything and well thanks basically.