Zakel'vox

[Bishop/Zak]

Name: Zakel’vox (Zak for short)

Race: Twi’lek

Age: 12

Height: 5’4

Weight: 110

Appearance:

Birth place:Ryloth, Leb’Reen

Faction:Jedi
Rank: Youngling

Bio:

Zak was born to into a normal Twi’lek family on the planet Ryloth. His life with his family was short lived, he was selected by a Jedi Master to come to the Jedi Temple and begin training as a Jedi due to his force sensitivity.

The only memories Zak has is at the Jedi temple, he lived there for the majority of his life and went through the normal training for a young aspiring youngling. Zak was always a shy student and rarely made friends with his fellow students. His mind was focused in his studies and he often lost track of everything while he was in the archives.

Zak was one of the most advanced students in his classes; he was just barely over average when it came to lightsaber usage but he studied hard and never gave up on learning. He was Always dreaming of one day becoming a padawan and going off on great adventures. As his thirteenth birthday approached he became more anxious at being chosen as a learner, and often searched for ways to make himself noticed.

Lightsaber: Single Blade (Single-phase)
Color: Blue

Practiced Lightsaber forms:

Shii-Cho 3

Force-Sensitive Abilities or practices:

Telekinetic: 2
Telepathic: 1
Body: 1
Sense: 2
Protection: 1
Healing: 2
Destruction: 0

Specialized Skills:

Attributes:

Physical Strength: 3
Intelligence: 3
Speed: 3
Leadership: 1

Unarmed: 2
Melee Weapons: 5
Ranged Weapons: 1

Force Attunement:

+4

RP Sample:

[Meira]

A couple of things.

First, just run through the bio again, looking for grammar points. There's not much, so don't worry about that.

Mastery of Shii-Cho isn't allowed until the end of padawan training. This one takes the longest to learn because it is the first one learned. You'll notice that after mastering Shii-Cho, other style mastery comes faster, this is because Shii-Cho is the basis. Anywho, so a youngling on the brink of Shii-Cho, who is slightly above average would have a 3, so change that.

No younglings are taught destruction skills, as those are Dark Side traits, you'll have to take that out. Also, strength could be bumped up to a 3 if you like.

Aside from those points, I think you've demonstrated great restraint with this youngling and made his stats very realistic. Let me know when you've made the modifications.

[Bishop/Zak]

k ran spell check and modded stats, thanks for the compliment, I got an idea what level people should be at when i went through Bishop

[Meira]

Accepted

[Jenno]

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