Logan Stellar (Ready to be accepted)

[logan]

Name: Logan Stellar

Age: 11


Race: Human

Height: 5'2

Weight: 112

Appearance: img507.imageshack.us/img507/2576/untitled4ls0.png he looks like this except he has blonde hair and has 1 light saber and no lines under his eyes and hie eyes are gray.

Faction: Jedi

Rank: padawan

BirthPlace: Kasshyk

Bio: Logan was taken from his parents at infancy like most jedi then he was taken to the jedi temple to trian as a youngling he has been trainingg there since he was 2 and now is ready for a master he shows promise as a jedi and he shows promise in malkashi and shien.( i dont know at else to type since he is a youngling and hasnt been on missions on anything yet)


LightSaber: Single blade Single phase

Color: Unstable Purple

Practiced light saber forms: Shii-co 5. But he shows promise in shien and ataru and malkashi



Force-Sensitive Abilities or practices:

Telekinetic: 6
Telepathic:4
Body: 2
Sense: 3
Protection: 5
Healing: 1
Destruction: 4


Attributes:

Physical Strength: 4
Intelligence: 5
Speed: 5
Leadership: 2


Unarmed: 5
Melee Weapons: 2
Ranged Weapons: 4

Force Attunement: +6

Rp sample:
It is not needed for younglings that is what i heard

[Iota]

no black lightsabers, black lightsabers were made for irritating fanboys and are not actually canon colour for a lightsaberas it would overload the lightsaber and probably make it explode.

[logan]

If the people who made black lightsabers made the starwars games and movies isnt it canon

[Iota]

the black lightsaber colour was only made for the force unleashed... they made it because it was requested so much...but it is not canon.

[logan]

but since they made it isnt it canon

[Iota]

no, they stated it was only made for the game and that it is not canon. The lightsaber would explode and probably kill the user.

[Jenno]

In all honesty, canon or not does not matter for us here. Even before TFU we did not allow black lightsabers and after the game things are still the same.

Why? Now, I know a lot of people think they would be cool or suit their character, but in all honesty, they wouldn't work. A lightsaber is still governed by the fact the blade functions through light. Thus, a black lightsaber crystal would not allow the light to pass through it to create a black blade. No, instead the crystal would absorb the light continuously until it, more than likely, exploded. This is also why we do not allow pure white blades as the light would not be able to pass through a white crystal either.

I'm sorry, but would you please change the colour of your lightsaber. Also, if you do go for an 'odd' colour (not blue or green) then you will need to include how your character got it in your bio as the can't just pull them from the air.

Thank you,

~Jenno

[logan]

i did include but fine ill change it

[logan]

can there be like a lightsaber that is dsplit down the middle in two colors

[Zarkan]

No.

[logan]

ok fine

[Iota]

he is way too tall for his age.

bio is too bland and needs to be in more detail, minimum 3 paragraphs. decent paragraphs and not generalisations.

X-wings don't exist yetas they were made a few years before the battle of yavin in episode 4, we roleplayer 3,602 years before the battle of yavin.

whgat was the mission to kashyyyk for? why did they get attacked and by who? former jedi or not, he would of taken the padawan back to the temple as soon as possible

gold crystals? no gold crystals..there are yellow crystals..if thats what you mena? they are not rare.

at his age he would only still be learning Schii-Cho.. there is only one style of it...shien can be erased as he would not be old enough or confident enough to learn a new form.

physical strenght is too high for his age, take it down to a 5. raise his intelligence up to 5 minimum..jedi are wise and educated, not baffoons.

put destruction down to a 0 please, he is 11 years old, the jedi would not of taught him anything to do with this kind of force usage, nor would this former jedi.

if you want to do an rp sample, i suggest 2 to 3 paragraphs.


overall, this is quite a poor bio, no offense intended ofcourse. i would suggest reading other bio's for hints and tips on what to do for yours. There are also alot of spelling and grammer mistakes too.

-Not Accepted- awaiting neccesary changes before re-assesing

[Jenno]

There are actually gold lightsabers, so that will be allowed. However, it will only be allowed under the condition that you explain how he got it. You say 'went to a cave' but what cave where? The ones the Jedi typically go to for their lightsaber crystals, Ilum, only creates green and blue crystals.

So explanation is needed, but it is possible.

~Jenno

[logan]

Hes 19

[Jenno]

Name: Logan Stellar

Age: 11

[logan]

oh srry i was looking looking at some1's profile and it said 11 there i changed it

[Jenno]

The rest of the listed things still need to be changed.

[<('.'<)-echofire-(>'.')>]

Isn't he not allowed to have more shien than shii-cho?