Post by lanphear on Aug 21, 2008 18:42:17 GMT -5
Name: Layana Kalistis
Race: Echani
Age: 9
Height: 3'10
Weight: 50 Lbs
Appearance:
Like that without the jeans, halter top, glasses or piercings, also a little bit shorter.
Birth place: Gyndine
Occupation: Unsold Slave
Rank: Do everything she's told to do until she is sold
Bio:
Layana Kalistis was born on the planet of Gyndine to Vrook and Pandela Kalistis in 3611 BBY. Her parents were both Echani warriors as well as personal bodyguards to Morp the Hutt. They thought it best she be instructed into the Echani way from childhood and made it as rigorous as possible. They would also try and teach her about honor and doing the right thing in life. Despite the fact they worked for a crime boss like Morp they tried to make sure Layana lived a normal life, going to school, having friends and living normally as well as instilling her with their Echani heritage. However this wouldn't last forever, and while training in the backyard with her parents one day, the unthinkable happened.
Several armed men came bursting through the door, heavy blasters drawn. They quickly fired and disintegrate her fathers left leg, he tried to not scream but the pain was insufferable. She began screaming and crying hysterically as the men tortured and killed her parents. Face soaked with countless tears and coursing with rage and hate she would try to stop them but was quickly knocked out and taken by another man to their ship. The men worked for a rival crime boss, a rodian named Vrash who wanted Morp and everyone that worked for him dead. He commanded that any children found would be captured and brought into his slavery ring to be sold later.
She awoke to find herself trapped in a cage, she banged on the bars but was quickly electrocuted by a guard. They would take her from her cage a bit later, but only to have a tattoo applied to her arm to show others who she belonged to. After that she was locked back up in her cage and told to be quiet, and that she would be taken to another planet and sold soon. A few tears came out of her eyes as she tried to control herself. Thoughts of what were to come entered her mind, would she be beaten, tortured or worse. She could only hope for a miracle now, sadly she couldn't help but feel like the suffering had just begun.
Attributes:
All attributes are ranked from 1-10, 10 being near godlike.
Please be realistic when selecting stats, as no one person is good at everything. Keep your characters interesting and real by giving them weaknesses.
Physical Strength: 3
Intelligence: 2
Speed: 3
Leadership: 2
Unarmed: 4
Melee Weapons: 2
Ranged Weapons: 1
Alignment: +2
RP Sample:
Layana sat clutching the edges of her knees in a fetal position as the grim faced guards passed by her cage yet again. She had been shocked twice that day for crying and the scorched marks still burnt terribly. The horrific memory of her parents being brutally tortured and killed played back in her mind over and over again, each time causing her to grow more empty. Her hands began to tremble as the images flooded back in, the blood chilling screams of her mother and father echoed throw her soul. Tears rolled down her eyes and cascaded down her cheeks before splashing to the floor.
A surprisingly cheerful guard quickly noticed this and approached her cage. "Someone misses their mommy huh," the guard would say with a smirk across his face. She just hung her head down and looked at her feet as more tears silently fell. "Well let me see if I can help you with that," the guard chuckled out sadistically as he drove his staff into her flesh. Her head would shoot up as a banshee like scream pierced the room, the guard just continued laughing as he shocked her. Things began to fade out as her head fell to the ground with a gentle thump. The last thing she saw was the guard walking away to another small girl, and administering the same torture, the girls screams fading away as the darkness surrounded Layana.
Race: Echani
Age: 9
Height: 3'10
Weight: 50 Lbs
Appearance:
Like that without the jeans, halter top, glasses or piercings, also a little bit shorter.
Birth place: Gyndine
Occupation: Unsold Slave
Rank: Do everything she's told to do until she is sold
Bio:
Layana Kalistis was born on the planet of Gyndine to Vrook and Pandela Kalistis in 3611 BBY. Her parents were both Echani warriors as well as personal bodyguards to Morp the Hutt. They thought it best she be instructed into the Echani way from childhood and made it as rigorous as possible. They would also try and teach her about honor and doing the right thing in life. Despite the fact they worked for a crime boss like Morp they tried to make sure Layana lived a normal life, going to school, having friends and living normally as well as instilling her with their Echani heritage. However this wouldn't last forever, and while training in the backyard with her parents one day, the unthinkable happened.
Several armed men came bursting through the door, heavy blasters drawn. They quickly fired and disintegrate her fathers left leg, he tried to not scream but the pain was insufferable. She began screaming and crying hysterically as the men tortured and killed her parents. Face soaked with countless tears and coursing with rage and hate she would try to stop them but was quickly knocked out and taken by another man to their ship. The men worked for a rival crime boss, a rodian named Vrash who wanted Morp and everyone that worked for him dead. He commanded that any children found would be captured and brought into his slavery ring to be sold later.
She awoke to find herself trapped in a cage, she banged on the bars but was quickly electrocuted by a guard. They would take her from her cage a bit later, but only to have a tattoo applied to her arm to show others who she belonged to. After that she was locked back up in her cage and told to be quiet, and that she would be taken to another planet and sold soon. A few tears came out of her eyes as she tried to control herself. Thoughts of what were to come entered her mind, would she be beaten, tortured or worse. She could only hope for a miracle now, sadly she couldn't help but feel like the suffering had just begun.
Attributes:
All attributes are ranked from 1-10, 10 being near godlike.
Please be realistic when selecting stats, as no one person is good at everything. Keep your characters interesting and real by giving them weaknesses.
Physical Strength: 3
Intelligence: 2
Speed: 3
Leadership: 2
Unarmed: 4
Melee Weapons: 2
Ranged Weapons: 1
Alignment: +2
RP Sample:
Layana sat clutching the edges of her knees in a fetal position as the grim faced guards passed by her cage yet again. She had been shocked twice that day for crying and the scorched marks still burnt terribly. The horrific memory of her parents being brutally tortured and killed played back in her mind over and over again, each time causing her to grow more empty. Her hands began to tremble as the images flooded back in, the blood chilling screams of her mother and father echoed throw her soul. Tears rolled down her eyes and cascaded down her cheeks before splashing to the floor.
A surprisingly cheerful guard quickly noticed this and approached her cage. "Someone misses their mommy huh," the guard would say with a smirk across his face. She just hung her head down and looked at her feet as more tears silently fell. "Well let me see if I can help you with that," the guard chuckled out sadistically as he drove his staff into her flesh. Her head would shoot up as a banshee like scream pierced the room, the guard just continued laughing as he shocked her. Things began to fade out as her head fell to the ground with a gentle thump. The last thing she saw was the guard walking away to another small girl, and administering the same torture, the girls screams fading away as the darkness surrounded Layana.
I liked your bio, it is well written and a good starting story. Yah I can be picky about some details and I try and back it up with fact, but sometimes I make it up, hehe.