Post by corm on Aug 14, 2007 12:47:57 GMT -5
Jedi: Was, but he left the order.
Name:Allin Kienaan
Race: Human Male
Age: 22
Height:6'2"
Weight: 186 lbs
Appearance: (is coming)
Birth place: Mannan
Faction: Rogue
Rank: Padawan before he left the order
Bio: Allin was born on the ocean world of mannan, and lived there for two years of his life. While there he was discovered to be force sensetive and was taken in to train as a youngling.
At the academy he lived the life most did, that is most who were taken in at an early age. There he didn't recieve what most children did, love. While the jedi did take care of him, the relationship was more like that of an officer and his soldiers. From early on Allin developed a sense of compassion towards others, showing much empathy, for this reason he was well liked by his students. At the age of thirteen he became an apprentice, as he was taken on by his master Valin Lankost. The two developed quite a bond, and Allin was always eager to learn from him.
Allin was evidently more skilled with the force than with a saber, in fact he often preferred to settle fights without ever igniting his saber. It was something not too often seen in the order but it was something that got him recognition. When he wasn't with friends he could also be found in the library, studying and trying to unlock hidden secrets of the force. This practice wasn't encouraged due to the fact that so many had had this mindset before and fallen to the dark side. His master wasn't worried although because there weren't much hidden secrets of the force to be found in the library with a padawans pass.
Despite all of this there were some evident problems with allin. He didn't always agree with the order, and he always spoke his mind when he didn't. By the age of eighteen it worried his master, he always argued when he didn't think something was right, and developed bonds with others a bit too close. His master was sure to keep an eye out for him, and always remind him that giving in to emotions lead to the dark side. Allin always had a problem with that, the dark side and the light side both didn't seem too different to him, they both seemed to be serving a cause, their methods might be different, but in the end it seemed they all just wanted to bring the universe under their dominance (saying this to his master got him quite a scolding). His master became even more worried about him, he was straying down a path that ashould not be tread, and could very well lead him to the dark side.
A year later what his master thought turned to be close to what did happen. They were on a mission to Iridonia to save a senate official. The official lived in a city that was being attacked by an extremist group native to that world.
Iridonia
Allin stood in a large building, it was well furnished and had many portraits of noble looking iridonians. This was the home of the iridonian senate member Dryal Terrid. They had just found him hidden in a closet of the mansion. As Allin and his master continued along the hallway taking the senator with them they were constantly plagued with the sounds of explosions going off in the city. They began to rush to the rooftop on where they had landed their shuttle, and when they made it the senator and Allins master ran aboard the ship, but Allin stopped to look at the city. It was on fire, and there were people running as the sound of blasters neared, screaming was everywhere. Allins master ran up behind him
"Come there is no time, we must hurry!
"What about the people?" he questioned frantically
"We were sent here for the senator allin, not the people now come"
"No!" he shouted desperately "We cannot condemn these people to die"
"There are too many people, and the attackers are heavily armed, two jedi would not last long, come now". Time was running out, they had to leave now. Valin looked at his padawan "We have to leave". His padawan met his eyes, and something was there that wasn't before, allin shook his head.
"I'm sorry, I must help them"
The order will cast you out" Allin nodded
"So be it" he turned to look at the city.
"You are heading to your death" Allin turned to look at his master "I will die fighting" he muttered and ignited his lightsaber.
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Not even allin knows how he survived, in the wreckage of the city he was found a week later, with many wounds over his body, and a destroyed lightsaber next to him. He was treated for a few months, and when finally ready he left, but not before being confronted by an old friend.
In the spaceport
Allin looked at his Doran, he had not expected this. They were in a spaceport that was only occupied by a transport ship that allin was soon to leave on. Doran was possibly the closest friend allin had had, just recently knighted doran must have been on a mission in the area and heard of allin. Allin waited for doran to talk
"Why?"
"What"
"Before you leave tell me, why did you leave the order" allin dropped his head, he didn't want to have to talk about this.
"Look at you" he said sadly "Look at what they trained you to be." Doran had a confused look on his face. "You know why you have to enter the order at a young age, they brainwash you. allin was becoming frustrated thinking about it "They teach you to let go of your emotions, to block them out.
"Giving in to your emotions leads to the darkside" doran quoted the all to often line, allin shook his head.
"Thats what they taught you, but to lose ones emotion is to lose ones humanity" allin paused and took a breath "Jedi aren't human, and they make their padawans unhuman. They train you to let go of emotions so when you are given an order you don't think twice"
"No tha-" allin cut him off
"You are a pawn, the council uses you to achieve their means towards their goal for peace"
"Peace is a good thing"
"But the way they go about it isn't, they do what is important for their goals, not what is good or right, they destroy you, you aren't human because you don't accept emotion" Doran shook his head
"They have taught us, many people before thought what you did, and they all fell to the dark side"
"That is beacause they wanted everything to become simple, I promise you that I will not fall to that, but neither will I fall to the views of the jedi either. They both have simple and narrow beliefs, you must open up and expand your beliefs, that is what I did" Doran looked at allin sadly
"So what now?"
"I'm going to do what we should do, help others in need" doran shook his head
"You want too much"
Allin turned and walked towards the ship
"You want too little"
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And that is what he set himself to doing for the next four years, helping others as much as he can, traveling to many places and seeing many things, he is a wanderer, doing as much good as he can, and on the way learning as much about the force as possible.
Lightsaber: Single
Color: Orange
Name:Allin Kienaan
Race: Human Male
Age: 22
Height:6'2"
Weight: 186 lbs
Appearance: (is coming)
Birth place: Mannan
Faction: Rogue
Rank: Padawan before he left the order
Bio: Allin was born on the ocean world of mannan, and lived there for two years of his life. While there he was discovered to be force sensetive and was taken in to train as a youngling.
At the academy he lived the life most did, that is most who were taken in at an early age. There he didn't recieve what most children did, love. While the jedi did take care of him, the relationship was more like that of an officer and his soldiers. From early on Allin developed a sense of compassion towards others, showing much empathy, for this reason he was well liked by his students. At the age of thirteen he became an apprentice, as he was taken on by his master Valin Lankost. The two developed quite a bond, and Allin was always eager to learn from him.
Allin was evidently more skilled with the force than with a saber, in fact he often preferred to settle fights without ever igniting his saber. It was something not too often seen in the order but it was something that got him recognition. When he wasn't with friends he could also be found in the library, studying and trying to unlock hidden secrets of the force. This practice wasn't encouraged due to the fact that so many had had this mindset before and fallen to the dark side. His master wasn't worried although because there weren't much hidden secrets of the force to be found in the library with a padawans pass.
Despite all of this there were some evident problems with allin. He didn't always agree with the order, and he always spoke his mind when he didn't. By the age of eighteen it worried his master, he always argued when he didn't think something was right, and developed bonds with others a bit too close. His master was sure to keep an eye out for him, and always remind him that giving in to emotions lead to the dark side. Allin always had a problem with that, the dark side and the light side both didn't seem too different to him, they both seemed to be serving a cause, their methods might be different, but in the end it seemed they all just wanted to bring the universe under their dominance (saying this to his master got him quite a scolding). His master became even more worried about him, he was straying down a path that ashould not be tread, and could very well lead him to the dark side.
A year later what his master thought turned to be close to what did happen. They were on a mission to Iridonia to save a senate official. The official lived in a city that was being attacked by an extremist group native to that world.
Iridonia
Allin stood in a large building, it was well furnished and had many portraits of noble looking iridonians. This was the home of the iridonian senate member Dryal Terrid. They had just found him hidden in a closet of the mansion. As Allin and his master continued along the hallway taking the senator with them they were constantly plagued with the sounds of explosions going off in the city. They began to rush to the rooftop on where they had landed their shuttle, and when they made it the senator and Allins master ran aboard the ship, but Allin stopped to look at the city. It was on fire, and there were people running as the sound of blasters neared, screaming was everywhere. Allins master ran up behind him
"Come there is no time, we must hurry!
"What about the people?" he questioned frantically
"We were sent here for the senator allin, not the people now come"
"No!" he shouted desperately "We cannot condemn these people to die"
"There are too many people, and the attackers are heavily armed, two jedi would not last long, come now". Time was running out, they had to leave now. Valin looked at his padawan "We have to leave". His padawan met his eyes, and something was there that wasn't before, allin shook his head.
"I'm sorry, I must help them"
The order will cast you out" Allin nodded
"So be it" he turned to look at the city.
"You are heading to your death" Allin turned to look at his master "I will die fighting" he muttered and ignited his lightsaber.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Not even allin knows how he survived, in the wreckage of the city he was found a week later, with many wounds over his body, and a destroyed lightsaber next to him. He was treated for a few months, and when finally ready he left, but not before being confronted by an old friend.
In the spaceport
Allin looked at his Doran, he had not expected this. They were in a spaceport that was only occupied by a transport ship that allin was soon to leave on. Doran was possibly the closest friend allin had had, just recently knighted doran must have been on a mission in the area and heard of allin. Allin waited for doran to talk
"Why?"
"What"
"Before you leave tell me, why did you leave the order" allin dropped his head, he didn't want to have to talk about this.
"Look at you" he said sadly "Look at what they trained you to be." Doran had a confused look on his face. "You know why you have to enter the order at a young age, they brainwash you. allin was becoming frustrated thinking about it "They teach you to let go of your emotions, to block them out.
"Giving in to your emotions leads to the darkside" doran quoted the all to often line, allin shook his head.
"Thats what they taught you, but to lose ones emotion is to lose ones humanity" allin paused and took a breath "Jedi aren't human, and they make their padawans unhuman. They train you to let go of emotions so when you are given an order you don't think twice"
"No tha-" allin cut him off
"You are a pawn, the council uses you to achieve their means towards their goal for peace"
"Peace is a good thing"
"But the way they go about it isn't, they do what is important for their goals, not what is good or right, they destroy you, you aren't human because you don't accept emotion" Doran shook his head
"They have taught us, many people before thought what you did, and they all fell to the dark side"
"That is beacause they wanted everything to become simple, I promise you that I will not fall to that, but neither will I fall to the views of the jedi either. They both have simple and narrow beliefs, you must open up and expand your beliefs, that is what I did" Doran looked at allin sadly
"So what now?"
"I'm going to do what we should do, help others in need" doran shook his head
"You want too much"
Allin turned and walked towards the ship
"You want too little"
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
And that is what he set himself to doing for the next four years, helping others as much as he can, traveling to many places and seeing many things, he is a wanderer, doing as much good as he can, and on the way learning as much about the force as possible.
Lightsaber: Single
Color: Orange
