Light Saab

[Light]

Name: Light Saab

Race: Human

Age: 12

Height: 4'3

Weight: 90lbs

Appearance: media.photobucket.com/image/anime%20jedi/yourstruleyanonymous/anime/1143441896005.jpg?o=2
(Imagine him shorter and skinnier ;D)

Birthplace: Coruscant

Faction: Jedi
Rank: Youngling

Bio: Living in a world filled with nothing but Jedi, Light grew up loving the work of Jedi and light sabers, though it was kind of far to actually meet one. His uncle was an old Jedi Knight who taught him the ways of the force and trained him so that he could live up to his name and be a Jedi. Light's parents didn't approve but he wanted to do it for them. Also, when his friends learned that he was a Jedi in training, they envied him. Though he still went to school, he still trained and sometimes got to visit the Jedi temple. His uncle enrolled him in the Jedi academy and told him that he would be able to learn the Jedi ways when his parents said it was OK or when he finished school. Either way, it was OK with the Jedi. That was the last day Light saw his uncle.

A bounty hunter and a sith lord attacked the Jedi temple and was looking for a certain Jedi who still wasn't found. Light's uncle and his master was the only Jedi there at the time and had a duty to protect the temple and fought. Though the hunter and the lord was killed, Light's uncle was killed and his master decided that it was time for him to go into exile from the Jedi. His last mission was to tell Light the bad news and then he was allowed to leave.

When news reached Light, he begged his parents to allow him to uphold the Jedi code and walk in the footsteps of his uncle. They had no other choice and allowed him to go into the academy for his uncle. He placed the dream for being a Jedi aside and did it for pride. It would all be personal.

Lightsaber: Single hilt training Lightsaber
Color: Blue

Practiced Lightsaber forms:
Shii-Cho

Sense (Youngling and up)
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1 (2) 3 4 5

Telekinesis (Youngling and up)
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1 2 (3) 4 5

Force Leap (Youngling and up)
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1 2 3 (4) 5

Attributes: (Be reasonable)
Physical Strength
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1 2 3 4 5 (6) 7 8 9 10

Intelligence
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1 (2) 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

Speed
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1 2 3 4 5 6 (7) 8 9 10

Unarmed
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1 2 3 4 (5) 6 7 8 9 10

Melee Weapons
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1 2 3 (4) 5 6 7 8 9 10

Ranged Weapons
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(1) 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

Leadership
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1 2 (3) 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

Force atunement (Have you been following the light path or the dark path?)
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0 1 (2) 3 4 5

[Jenno]

First of all, I take it you must have originally drafted this up before last Sunday? Because since then we've revamped the character application sheet. Take a look at it :here:.

Now, the bio.

'Living in a world filled with nothing but Jedi'

that statement isn't really true, if it were I doubt there would be gangs, murders and such on Coruscant.

Okay, and about how Light is submitted to the order, not acceptable, he wouldn't be able to carry on his regular school life. The latest he would have been allowed to join the temple would have been at the age of 6, after that and he'd have been seen as too old.

I have a problem with both the mention of a Sith Lord and the scenario in which they fight. First of all, there are no 'Sith' the closest thing to a Sith Lord would be a Dark Jedi Master. Also, the Jedi Temple would not be empty at all, it never is. You'll have to change this, I recommend to some kind of mission where they were ambushed. But it's up to you.

So yes, you need to review the bio, I'd also check for the grammar errors in your piece.

Please make said changes and reply once you've done them.

Thank you,

~Jenno

P.S. Welcome to SWU

[Jenno]

Moved to Incomplete Profiles.