Tanoahmoji (WIP)

[Tano "The sneaky half-wolf"]

Name: Tanoahmoji "Tano"
Race:Gurlanin
Age: 15
Height: 5 '10
Weight: 150
Appearance:
Birth place: Qiilura

Faction: Dark Jedi
Rank: Assassin

Bio:
Lightsaber: Two Shoto Sabers
Color: purple

Practiced Lightsaber forms:[/b]

Shii-Cho 5
Niman 4


Force-Sensitive Abilities or practices:

Telekinetic: 4
Telepathic: 5
Body: 6
Sense: 7
Protection: 5
Healing: 3
Destruction: 3

Specialized Skills:


Attributes:

Physical Strength: 6
Intelligence: 6
Speed: 7
Leadership: 3

Unarmed: 6
Melee Weapons: 5
Ranged Weapons: 4

Force Attunement: -1

RP Sample:

[A®heim]

Alright, I know this is nowhere NEAR being done and that smidgen of a bio is just an outline, but pointers never hurt.

No unknowns. Nobody else or even your character may know, but you as a writer do.

Cross-breeds are iffy on this forum, but I don't see why shapeshifters shouldn't be able to mix with others even if that is a somewhat creepy thought.

That's all I got for now, but rest assured there will be more. There WILL BE MORE.....

[Mara]

I'm sorry, but we don't allow shape-shifter species on this forum... You'll have to edit that.

[A®heim]

From what I've heard from talking to Tano is that he is shooting for an exception in that he has a disability causing him to have lost his shape-shifting ability.

[Tano "The sneaky half-wolf"]

I ask for no more comments at the moment for "Tano" here still needs lots of editing. Also like Arheim said Tanoahmoji is of the Gurlanin race, but is handicapped for he only has two forms. His original and the one displayed in his appearance picture. I'll later explain in the Bio why he has this disability.

[Mara]

Yes, but he would still be able to shape-shift in two forms. We don't allow ANY shapeshifting species at all. No matter if they're disabled or not.

I'm sorry. That's just the way it is.

[A®heim]

I don't know Mara. I got clearance for a Felacatian once (not the one in the mission) on the grounds that it wasn't really "shape-shifting" in the way the server wants to prevent. Of course, I had trouble developing the character and trashed it in favor of Rn'cherii, but you get my point.

I admit I'm partially defending this because Tano is my friend, but what if he was disabled COMPLETELY? He wouldn't be a shape-shifter then now would he?

[Tano "The sneaky half-wolf"]

How rude. >.< I asked to refine from comments at the moment didn't I? I know you are a clever one Mara, but if you don't ever give me time to explain then I'll probably never get Tanoahmoji approved. Beside the fact that he only can shift in between two forms doesn't make him as special as whole shape-shifters are at being annoyingly powerful and cheap. Beside wouldn't being a Wolf and Sub-human put him on almost equal grounds as the other species? I also ask that you give me more of a reason other then the fact that he is a shape-shifter as to why he can't be a shape-shifter. Also who is this we you spoke of in your first comment?

[starwarsgirl008]

Don't mean to barge in, but, I have to agree with Mara. A shape-shiffter (even if they have only two forms) is definetly unfair. It gives a character the abilties of more than one species, giving them adavantage in RPing. Not only that, but I can just imagine a cicrumstance in which you are looking to fight a character who only knows one of your forms. You simply change into your other form, your opponent does not know it is you, and you kill them. Get the point?

[Tano "The sneaky half-wolf"]

I know you weren't trying to hurt my feelings it's just that i haven't even come close to finishing Tanoahmoji and once i do all will be explained so i will not give up on him being a Gurlanin. So Please hold back for now. Really I know she's just doing here job as a mod, but you have to give me time to edit before you start pointing out what's wrong. That's all I'm going to say INTILL I ACTUALLY EDIT TANOAHMOJI.

[Tano "The sneaky half-wolf"]

Ok. I got some ideas for my next edit put i won't post in till next week. Just giving a heads up.

[Tano "The sneaky half-wolf"]

looks like that post i was talking about doing earlier, won't actually happen until this summer. Just don't have the time.

[Tano "The sneaky half-wolf"]

Finally schools over and next i shall begin on Bio and RP sample!

[Raloxmly]

YAY! I've begun working on the bio, and I have the first part up already.
I wish you good luck on your writings, Tano.

[Mara]

Hey, can ya shrink the images, at least the second one? It stretches the page way out.

[Tano "The sneaky half-wolf"]

I had forewarning of a post like that T^T....*sigh* I will, but write now i'm going to ask to have Tano put in the inactive bin since i don't have the time to work on him. I will get back to him,but not any time soon.