Hedorah

[Meira]

Ok, great job in working in the past tense. There are still a few grammar mistakes here and there, but these are few enough now that they won't get in the way of approval.

Now, since you lowered his age to six, I'm going to have to ask that you lower some stats.

Shii-Cho should be dropped back to a 1

Depending on which Force skills he'll lean more towards, I ask that you lower one of your 2s to a 1. Your choice as to which one that is.

The RP sample is not required. Nor is it relevant to the character any longer. You can take it out.

[randy]

Edited grammar, spelling, and lowered some stats.


Still waiting for approval......

[Meira]

I'm going to go ahead and approve this!

But I forgot to ask you to lower the Atunement stat to a 2. Being so young, he won't understand the difference between the light side and the dark side. His views are likely naive because of his age. Lack of understanding means a lower atunement. Just make sure that gets edited, but I'm going to go ahead and move this to the approved section.

[randy]

Thanks Meira now I can finally start RPing here!

I'll start my RPs with Maximuses character Ozzie in his training class.

[Jenno]

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