Koeing Turion vs Aarati Irawagbon

[Rugs]

SOMETHING SOMETHING SOMETHING THUNDERDOME!!!


We're gonna pretend those people aren't there, mmmk?

The ruins of a long forgotten enclave on a verdant world. They yet stand, though time, and civilization, seem to have forgotten them. Now they are abandoned, though two dark presences will soon fill them once more.

Koeing Turion vs Aarati Iragbon
Sith Dude vs Sith Dude-ette


6 rounds

My magic coin flip of destiny says Koeing is up first

Remember to attack in the first round

Rebel 1, Action!

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Koeing's ship rested on the grassy field surrounded by trees where the long forgotten enclave ruins stood. The ruins seemed to draw him to them as he stood just outside the door of his ship staring at them, Kayn who stood behind him in the ship doorway let a low menacing growl rise up from his throat."Calm yourself Kayn, i feel it too. Stay here." He nodded to the large cat and it slowly disappeared into the shadows within the ship. He began his approach, the grass rustling beneath his leather boots, his robes and hair flowing to the east with the light breeze. With his mind alert Koeing hesitated to step onto the stone floor of the ruined enclave his eyes narrowing slightly.

Koeing's right hand laid lightly on the hilt of Caeling his saber with the gorgeous silver blade. Finally with hesitation Koeing stepped up onto the stone floor of the enclave and began to make his way within, his eyes shifted around as he scanned the floors and walls. Covered with moss and vegetation it was obvious this enclave had been abandoned for quite some time, and whatever this other presence was within drew Koeing to it, though before he got more then ten steps he felt the dark presence to his right and turned on his heels to face it. A Dark Jedi, or Sith he couldn't tell all he knew is it was dark and it could be looking for what he was, so he would kill it.

Without hesitation now Koeing's body tensed and began it's normal routine, it fell into old patterns that suggested he was a veteran of combat. Instantly Koeing stretched out his reach with the force and began exploring his surroundings with it, it was then that he noticed some nice jagged chunks of stone that had been broken off by the vegetation that had grown through the cracks. Enveloping them in the force Koeing lifted two chunks and began to spin them. The chunks shot forward on a path that would collide with the dark female if she had not moved by now, at the same time his right hand wrapped around the hilt of Caeling, grasping it tightly and ripping it away from his side the blade ignited and became sustained with a low hum. Taking the opening stance of Jar'Kai Koeing awaited his opponents movements and began running through strategy plans in his mind.

[Dean]

Aarati had just landed ten minutes ago about to explore these ruins. Her first opinion was that they were beautiful to the eye of a professional. Sad enough, she wasn’t a professional. She just glanced around a few times to think where she would go first. She decided on just walking for a few minutes to breathe in the air and get to know the grounds for a few minutes before exploring more. You never knew what you would face in the course of the day so it was very wise to know your surroundings.

She wandered around a bit in a slow pace and couldn’t help but notice that the ruins were not taken care of. These buildings were maybe crafted centuries ago by some primitive human civilization that maybe died out when the rest of the galaxy got more advanced in techniques, maybe they had all been slaughtered by some alien life form. Aarati smiled for a moment at that thought, Imagining how primitive humans first would have sought peace with those that were invading, and later screaming in agony when they got slaughtered brutally. She let the force run through her body as if she was an antenna, but still couldn’t feel the agony of those that once lived here. Maybe they weren’t slaughtered or it was just too long ago.

At the moment she let the force run through her searching for emotions, she felt another life form coming closer; it appeared that Aarati wasn’t the only one to find these ruins. After some additional sensing she knew it was not a Jedi she would face, but it was force sensitive. She threw of her old and dusted Jedi cloak that she couldn’t help but wear, although she didn’t wash it. Revealing clothes in which she could easily move around, and possibly fight in. She took a breath and tried to flesh out her surroundings as if they were all part of her.

She could feel the force touching the two chunks of rock and she could also feel them being hurled at her. She reached out with the force to stop them in front of her and throw them back at her attacker, She didn’t care if they hit him, in fact she wasn’t even where she had just been. She had jumped up reaching five meters of height easily; She closed in on her opponent in a matter of seconds, while the rocks were still flying towards him. She got her lightsaber into her hands, the curved hilt being more familiar then anything else she had ever held. She ignited it mid air and came down on her opponent with an overhead double handed blow from above.

[Rugs]

Alright, you two get to be the guinea pigs in the first duel where I've decided to start grading harder, so let's see how this goes, eh?

Round 1
Koeng
Effort: 3/5
Fairness: 5/5
Detail: 3/5
Coolness: 3/5
Bonus: /2
Comments: Not bad overall. Seemed a tad on the short side, but I'm sure things'll pick up as the fight unfolds. Same goes for the coolness score. I expect that it'll rise has the fight progresses.


Daansn (Because I forget how to spell Aarrakfnalogfmaofma)
Effort: 3/5
Fairness: 5/5
Detail: 3/5
Coolness:3 /5
Bonus: /2
Comments: Same as above, for the most part.


Alright, so the fight's underway for real now. Both of you, go crazy (within the limits of still being fair and all that). Make this jank epic. Have some fun ;D

Total:

Koeing: 14
Daansn 14

ROUND 2 OF THE SUPER DEATH TRAIN IS UNDERWAY!!! FIGHT!!!!!!1!!!ONE!!!ELEVEN!!

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Koeing's time to think ended and he had to act, noticing the stance of his enemy he knew Jar'Kai would be a terrible mistake, and so considering he had not ignited his second saber Koeing switched to Shii-cho and his body shot into action. Shifting his weight forward Koeing's leg muscles began to tense as they exerted the correct amount of force it would take for Koeing to run towards the rocks. As the rocks came within range he enveloped them in the Force stopping their approach, at that moment his legs tensed and exerted the maximum amount of force they possibly could forcing him up through the air to land on the stones.

With his boots firmly planted on the stones he shifted his body forward and twisted it preforming a corkscrew flip into the air. The rocks were released the moment his boots left them so he no longer had to exert himself holding them up, just as the two passed eachother Koeing was directly above Arati. The silver and red blades would ignite the area with a light akin to the flash of a sun, then just a split second later the light would dissipate and Koeing was then behind Arati completing the corkscrew and his left arm came forward. The force began to coalesce down his forearm then came to a head in his palm, shooting out the physical wave of power could strike Arati in the back if she didn't act.

The problem with this was the fact that after the force push Koeing would land flat on his back on the stone floor, with a grunt he would roll backwards and breath heavily as he hunched over to compensate for the pain in his back. He had no time to succumb to pain and so using the pain to fuel his now rising anger Koeing straightend his back with a grunt, the muscles tensed and spasmed but he forced them into submission through his will. Taking a two handed Shii-cho stance Koeing glared at this woman while his body began to shake, the rage welling up within him threatening to explode, teetering on the edge between sheer anger and Force Rage.

Koeing extended his reach with the force and began exploring his surroudnings for anything he could use, noting them within the recesses of his mind and moving on. This woman would make the next move and he planned on being ready for her, and so Koeing would prepare mentally as he would need the full extent of his powers for this fight. Eventually he would be forced into using his Lightning and possibly Force Drain, he had to contain his useage of the force as to not tire himself out and give this victory away.

[Dean]

She was in mid-air and noticed that her opponent took a Shii cho stance. This would get quite interesting. It was uncommon though, everyone mastered it so it was quite predictable to fight against. That didn’t matter for her at all. She gave a grim smile as her opponent flew into the air and collided with him for just a split second. It had been a while ago since she had been in a lightsaber battle. She could hear both the silver and the red blade hum in the silence of the ruins. When their lightsabers collided hers was pressed slightly back and she could smell the ozone smell that came from her blade.

As he passed she smiled to the air that was just visible between the stone ruins, her brain still fully active and thinking out battle plans for the rest of the battle. She could feel the force gather at some place but for the moment didn’t care. The force would guide her for now, just as it always had done. It would be alright, she would kill her opponent and it wouldn’t matter after that anymore. She started to also gather the force, building up her power a little so she could defend against whatever his plan was.

She was falling controlled to the ground and felt that there was a current of force energy about to struck her in the back that would break her bones if she didn’t defend. She threw up a force barrier to lessen the power in which it struck down on her. Shifting her landing into a roll landing nimbly on her feet just 5 seconds after she had jumped into the air to give the first lightsaber blow.

She had around ten meters of distance between her and her enemy. He had fallen on his back but almost right away jumped up again and took a shii cho stance. ’’To bad he didn’t break his back while he was at it’’ She thought. She brought her lightsaber up in the classic Djem sho stance and charged in on her enemy.

When she was only a meter away she pretended like she was opening with a classic move but instead she jumped up and made a gracious roll over his head. In mid roll she slashed at his back. She landed and turned around returning into the djem sho opening stance that hugely differed from the little ataru show she had just given, although this was quite the extend of her knowledge on the subject. She was very much an amateur in it.

Behind her enemies back there were two stone chairs, She grabbed one with the force and pulled it so it was flying right at her, and with that it would first strike her enemy since he stood before her.

[Rugs]

Round 2
Koeng
Effort: 4/5
Fairness: 5/5 Nice, having him fall over and take the first 'hit,' though I s'pose it wasn't really a hit so much as it was clumsiness
Detail: 4/5 Good job with describing the events that happened in the post
Coolness: 3/5
Bonus: 1/2 I think this is the first time I've ever seen a non-paddy use Shii-Cho. Kudos on that
Comments: It was better. I'm still holding the coolness scores down because I am convinced that things will get better as the fight goes along.


Daansn (Because I forget how to spell Aarrakfnalogfmaofma)
Effort: 4/5
Fairness: 4/5 Plays into my next point, but I couldn't really tell if his push affected her that much or not
Detail: 2/5 Could be a bit clearer. I had to read some things a few times to grasp what they meant.
Coolness:3 /5
Bonus: 1/2 Interesting ploy with the random Ataru switch
Comments: It wasn't bad, but it just didn't really grab me that much.

And to both of you, while this fight isn't bad, it's a bit... slow. Gimme some action. Make this jank exciting. I realize the fight just really started, so they might be feeling each other out, but take things up a notch. Also, some dialogue would be lovely, and could perhaps add to the atmosphere. That's just a suggestion, though.

Total:
Koeing: 31
Daansn: 28

Koeing's pulled into the lead. If you want motivation, Daansn, there it is; and Koeing, you better take things up if you want to hold onto that lead, because I'm sure Daansn will be after you now.

Anyway, Round 3 starts now.

Carry on, gentlemen.