Post by Elando on Mar 30, 2008 19:23:19 GMT -5
Name: Fredrick McNeal
Race: Human
Age: 17
Height: 5'11"
Weight: 195 lbs
Appearance: Fredrick can be described as stout, tall and stocky. He is not particularly muscular but he is still quite strong. He has short brown hair that's not in any particular style. He would blend well into a crowd as he has no distinguishing features except the scar on his chin which was caused by a nasty bar fight.
He regularly wears the traditional Jedi robes but has been known to wear more casual clothes such as a shirt, trousers and brown overcoat or brown leather jacket.
Birth place: Naboo
Faction: Jedi
Rank: Padawan
Bio:
Fredrick McNeal was born to Ewan and Jennifer on the planet of Naboo. His parents were just simple farmers but at a very young age Fredrick realised he was destined for something more, adventurous and exciting. When he was five his parents started to notice that he had strange and powerful abilities not possessed by the other children he played with.
Shortly after finding out about his 'powers' his parents contacted a Jedi knight who regularly visited the near-by towns, providing healing and counseling to the residents. After studying Fredrick from afar for many months the Jedi knight, who went by the name of Jonas Kilgrim, he decided that Fredrick's 'powers' were defiantly influenced by the force. He concluded his tests by taking a blood sample and discovered that Fredricks mediclorion count was exceptionally high. This confirmed the hopes that Fredrick was force sensitive.
However, being quite old already (six years old) Fredrick would have to appeal to the council for acceptance into the Jedi order. He traveled with Jonas to coruscant to stand before the council. After only a few weeks of tests the council deemed him too old to become a padawan and he was sent back to Naboo to live with his family.
As the years went on Fredrick's powers grew becoming stronger each day. Jonas continued his regular visits to Naboo to check on Fredrick from time to time. He not so much trained Fredrick, as guided him in the right direction teaching him to use his powers only in defense and for the greater good rather than evil.
By the time Fredrick was ten he had become proficient in the force, able to use his powers for basic tasks but had not yet fully harnessed his power. Unfortunately, in the first week after harvest his house was broken into by two members of "The Black Hand" gang. They pillaged his home as he lay cowering under his bed. Whilst looting the house Fredricks farther confronted the two assailants, but his attempts were in vain. They beat him in savage brutality infront of Fredricks eyes and left him for dead. In those moments Fredrick had gotten an insight into one of the murderers minds and discovered their hide out. The two gang members also made off with his mother as well as all the valuables in the house.
There was nothing Fredrick could of done for his farther as he lay dieing in his arms. The attack left Fredrick filled with hatred and he vowed revenge against the murderers. That night he took his Fathers hunting knife and set off into the wilderness to track the two gang members. For two days he hunted them, only sleeping for one or two hours at a time. Eventually he made it to their hideout, an old abandoned mine near the lakes.
As he entered the cave he could hear the screams of his mother echo around him. As they grew louder he rounded a corner and saw the two gang members beating her. Fear and hatred struck him as he saw them issue a final blow that broke her neck. As they laughed and joked, Fredrick crept up behind them, drawing the hunting knife as he went. He lunged at the nearest gang member like an animal and drove the blade into his back, lodging it deep into his spine. As the first one fell to the floor the other turned in shock but was immediately met by an enormous shockwave emitted by Fredricks hand. The gang member was flung through the air and into the cave wall and landed in a heap on the cold floor. As he tried to get up Fredrick levitated him and using the force began to slowly crush his wind pipe. As he struggled for breath Fredrick threw him into the wall again, killing him.
At that moment Jonas rushed into the cave, after being in the village near-by he sensed that Fredrick was in danger and rushed to his aid. He found Fredrick curled up in the corner, crying. After bringing him back to his house in the village Jonas decided that after the funeral of Fredricks parents he should be taken back to the council to appeal again.
Two weeks past and Fredrick stood infront of the council again. Jonas explained to them about the power he'd seen Fredrick display and that he had no where else to go other than the academy. He also warned the council that he had seen alot of fear and anger in the boy and that if they did not act now Fredrick may fall to the dark side, or worse. After careful consideration the council reluctantly agreed to accept Fredrick into the Jedi order and be trained by Jonas.
Years of training past as Fredrick slowly learnt the ways of the force and of being a Jedi. The training was tough and sometimes monotonous which caused Fredrick to be arrogant and impatient. This concerned Jonas but he believed that with more training Fredrick could learn to contend with this. However, one month before his sixteenth birthday Jonas was killed when confronting a Sith on the forest moon of Paris IV. Fredrick barely escaped the encounter by fleeing the planet and returning to coruscant where he warned the council about the encounter. All that Fredrick has left to remember his old master is his lightsaber which he retrieved after Jonas was killed.
For two months Fredrick had been left to train and study in the Jedi temple. His only possessions are his mothers locket, with pictures of his mother and farther inside, his Fathers old blaster and Jonas's Lightsaber. He is currently awaiting a new master...
Lightsaber: Single Blade (Single Phase)
Color: Blue
Other Weapons: Fathers Baster Pistol
Practiced Lightsaber forms:
Shii-Cho - 3
Makashi - 1
Soresu - 1
Ataru - N/A
Shien / Djem So - 2
>>Sub-form Backhanded - N/A
Niman - N/A
>>Sub-form Jar-kai, or Dual Wield - N/A
Juyo - N/A
Double Bladed Combat - N/A
Force-Sensitive Abilities or practices:
Telekinetic: 6
Telepathic: 3
Body: 2
Sense: 3
Protection: 2
Healing: 3
Destruction: 4
Specialized Skills:
~ None Yet.
Attributes:
~ Stong in the Force
Physical Strength: 7
Intelligence: 6
Speed: 3
Leadership: 2
Unarmed: 4
Melee Weapons: 5
Ranged Weapons: 2
Force Attunement: +2
RP Sample:
Race: Human
Age: 17
Height: 5'11"
Weight: 195 lbs
Appearance: Fredrick can be described as stout, tall and stocky. He is not particularly muscular but he is still quite strong. He has short brown hair that's not in any particular style. He would blend well into a crowd as he has no distinguishing features except the scar on his chin which was caused by a nasty bar fight.
He regularly wears the traditional Jedi robes but has been known to wear more casual clothes such as a shirt, trousers and brown overcoat or brown leather jacket.
Birth place: Naboo
Faction: Jedi
Rank: Padawan
Bio:
Fredrick McNeal was born to Ewan and Jennifer on the planet of Naboo. His parents were just simple farmers but at a very young age Fredrick realised he was destined for something more, adventurous and exciting. When he was five his parents started to notice that he had strange and powerful abilities not possessed by the other children he played with.
Shortly after finding out about his 'powers' his parents contacted a Jedi knight who regularly visited the near-by towns, providing healing and counseling to the residents. After studying Fredrick from afar for many months the Jedi knight, who went by the name of Jonas Kilgrim, he decided that Fredrick's 'powers' were defiantly influenced by the force. He concluded his tests by taking a blood sample and discovered that Fredricks mediclorion count was exceptionally high. This confirmed the hopes that Fredrick was force sensitive.
However, being quite old already (six years old) Fredrick would have to appeal to the council for acceptance into the Jedi order. He traveled with Jonas to coruscant to stand before the council. After only a few weeks of tests the council deemed him too old to become a padawan and he was sent back to Naboo to live with his family.
As the years went on Fredrick's powers grew becoming stronger each day. Jonas continued his regular visits to Naboo to check on Fredrick from time to time. He not so much trained Fredrick, as guided him in the right direction teaching him to use his powers only in defense and for the greater good rather than evil.
By the time Fredrick was ten he had become proficient in the force, able to use his powers for basic tasks but had not yet fully harnessed his power. Unfortunately, in the first week after harvest his house was broken into by two members of "The Black Hand" gang. They pillaged his home as he lay cowering under his bed. Whilst looting the house Fredricks farther confronted the two assailants, but his attempts were in vain. They beat him in savage brutality infront of Fredricks eyes and left him for dead. In those moments Fredrick had gotten an insight into one of the murderers minds and discovered their hide out. The two gang members also made off with his mother as well as all the valuables in the house.
There was nothing Fredrick could of done for his farther as he lay dieing in his arms. The attack left Fredrick filled with hatred and he vowed revenge against the murderers. That night he took his Fathers hunting knife and set off into the wilderness to track the two gang members. For two days he hunted them, only sleeping for one or two hours at a time. Eventually he made it to their hideout, an old abandoned mine near the lakes.
As he entered the cave he could hear the screams of his mother echo around him. As they grew louder he rounded a corner and saw the two gang members beating her. Fear and hatred struck him as he saw them issue a final blow that broke her neck. As they laughed and joked, Fredrick crept up behind them, drawing the hunting knife as he went. He lunged at the nearest gang member like an animal and drove the blade into his back, lodging it deep into his spine. As the first one fell to the floor the other turned in shock but was immediately met by an enormous shockwave emitted by Fredricks hand. The gang member was flung through the air and into the cave wall and landed in a heap on the cold floor. As he tried to get up Fredrick levitated him and using the force began to slowly crush his wind pipe. As he struggled for breath Fredrick threw him into the wall again, killing him.
At that moment Jonas rushed into the cave, after being in the village near-by he sensed that Fredrick was in danger and rushed to his aid. He found Fredrick curled up in the corner, crying. After bringing him back to his house in the village Jonas decided that after the funeral of Fredricks parents he should be taken back to the council to appeal again.
Two weeks past and Fredrick stood infront of the council again. Jonas explained to them about the power he'd seen Fredrick display and that he had no where else to go other than the academy. He also warned the council that he had seen alot of fear and anger in the boy and that if they did not act now Fredrick may fall to the dark side, or worse. After careful consideration the council reluctantly agreed to accept Fredrick into the Jedi order and be trained by Jonas.
Years of training past as Fredrick slowly learnt the ways of the force and of being a Jedi. The training was tough and sometimes monotonous which caused Fredrick to be arrogant and impatient. This concerned Jonas but he believed that with more training Fredrick could learn to contend with this. However, one month before his sixteenth birthday Jonas was killed when confronting a Sith on the forest moon of Paris IV. Fredrick barely escaped the encounter by fleeing the planet and returning to coruscant where he warned the council about the encounter. All that Fredrick has left to remember his old master is his lightsaber which he retrieved after Jonas was killed.
For two months Fredrick had been left to train and study in the Jedi temple. His only possessions are his mothers locket, with pictures of his mother and farther inside, his Fathers old blaster and Jonas's Lightsaber. He is currently awaiting a new master...
Lightsaber: Single Blade (Single Phase)
Color: Blue
Other Weapons: Fathers Baster Pistol
Practiced Lightsaber forms:
Shii-Cho - 3
Makashi - 1
Soresu - 1
Ataru - N/A
Shien / Djem So - 2
>>Sub-form Backhanded - N/A
Niman - N/A
>>Sub-form Jar-kai, or Dual Wield - N/A
Juyo - N/A
Double Bladed Combat - N/A
Force-Sensitive Abilities or practices:
Telekinetic: 6
Telepathic: 3
Body: 2
Sense: 3
Protection: 2
Healing: 3
Destruction: 4
Specialized Skills:
~ None Yet.
Attributes:
~ Stong in the Force
Physical Strength: 7
Intelligence: 6
Speed: 3
Leadership: 2
Unarmed: 4
Melee Weapons: 5
Ranged Weapons: 2
Force Attunement: +2
RP Sample:
