Rio
"Where have hearts that loved gone? Why did hearts that believed die?"
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Apr 17, 2010 16:36:19 GMT -5
Post by Rio on Apr 17, 2010 16:36:19 GMT -5
Faction: Mandolorians Department: Special Ops Rank: Corporal Name: Misuzu Kusakabe Race: Human Age: 17 Height: 5ft 7" Weight: 109 lbs Birth place: Shogun Appearance: Personality:Skills:Attributes: Physical Strength: 7 Intelligence: 5 Speed: 7 Leadership: 3 Unarmed: 3 Melee Weapons: 9 Ranged Weapons: 3 Alignment: +1 Bio:Password: Kylah RP Sample:
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Derriphan
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Apr 17, 2010 17:15:47 GMT -5
Post by Derriphan on Apr 17, 2010 17:15:47 GMT -5
Um I'd suggest getting someone to resize your image.. The img in your profile is huge along with your sig image. Just an fyi.
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Rugs
The ring-dang-doo, now what is that?
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Apr 17, 2010 20:59:06 GMT -5
Post by Rugs on Apr 17, 2010 20:59:06 GMT -5
Yes, do shrink that image.
Also, I know this is a WIP, but I can tell you right now that 9 in melee ain't gonna happen. For her age a 6 or so, if she's good, but not a 9. And, while I'm going on about stats, you'll probably have to end up dropping that 7 to a 5 or 6, and I'm reserving judgment on the speed score until I've a bio to base it off of.
And her rank is too high to be 17.
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Vex
A Self-styled computer geek that moonlights as a G.I. Joe.
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Apr 17, 2010 23:15:52 GMT -5
Post by Vex on Apr 17, 2010 23:15:52 GMT -5
Hey Rio....just a couple things you might want to consider:
I know Mando's go through their Verd'goten at 13. 17 is still really young. How much time has she spent in the military? A Corporal is a lateral rank promotion for the Army, putting them into a position of authority over troops. Generally takes at least two years to get to the rank (Specialist) that can be laterally made a Corporal. If its Corporal like the Marines, its a straight rank, the lowest Non-commissioned Officer rank.
Special Operations generally don't pick up new soldiers or those with limited experience. 9/10 (I don't count the army's 18X program), they are soldiers with a fair amount of experience in the regular military who choose to go through a selection and training process. Maybe its a bit different for Mandos, but I doubt its much, given the Mandalorian emphasis on warriors.
Misuzu is exceptionally close to anorexically thin (BMI at 17) at 109lbs and 5ft 7in....there is no way she'd be able to match a 7 for strength...there's just not enough mass there to be able to match the equivalent of a high end male strength. Supermodel thin can't bench 350...that dog ain't gonna hunt.
And like Rugs said...the melee score is close to godly. At that age, she should still be improving...even if she is exceptionally good for her age, which Rugs' suggestion would more than equate. Should give her space to grow.
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Rugs
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May 10, 2010 11:35:19 GMT -5
Post by Rugs on May 10, 2010 11:35:19 GMT -5
Is this still being worked on?
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Rugs
The ring-dang-doo, now what is that?
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May 13, 2010 0:02:38 GMT -5
Post by Rugs on May 13, 2010 0:02:38 GMT -5
Moved to inactive pending
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