Ikran(WIP)

[xavier]

Species Name: Ikran
Species Type: Reptilian Avian

Planet of Origin: Pandora
Average Maximum age: 100
Age of Maturation: 15
Average Height: 8'0
Average Weight: 300

Notable biological features: Males are brightly colored, like peacocks to attract Females. They are the only Members of the race to have teeth. They do not have beaks. Females are Brownish- Maroon color. They have beaks to pick up food and carry their children. The females have a large sack at the bottom of their beaks to keep the children.

Number of limbs and Type: 4, Quadruped

Culture:
History:

[Dire Wolf]

Are these things a total copy/paste of the critters from Avatar?

While this is technically allowed, I suppose, I would heavily suggest that you put your own creative license on the species. Call them something else. Give them different features. Try nad use SOME of that imagination that everyone has. x) Don't just go "o.o oooooh shiny! Avatar flying things!" and grab it.

[Vex]

Furthermore, how is it you have nothing about the creatures here in this thread, yet have:

Attributes-
Strength: 6
Intelligence: 6
Agility: 8

Offensive Weapons/Natural Defences: Her wings have sharp protective skin to cut through any enemy not wearing armor. Her beak is usually for pecking food but it can also be used to pick up heavy objects.

Protection: She has protective skin similar to that skin of a Terenetek.

Aggression: Mostly Passive but when threatend, is aggresive.

Loyalty: +7

Tool Using: N/A


Special Abilities: Spit Venom, Flight

...this in a pet app?


What would cause a flying creature to have Force-immune flesh? The terentatek was a sithspawn, created unnaturally to be a bane of the Jedi. What is your creature's reason?

Also...what natural reason would a creature have to grow wings capable of cutting through things? Wings, generally speaking, are the weakest part of a creature, required to be light in order to offer the propulsion need. Slamming them into things is generally bad.

Why spit venom. Once again...reasons...reasons are needed. Evolution can do crazy things...but there are reasons for them. What reason does a flying razorblade with Force-immune flesh need to spit venom, hmm?

There is also the fact that we do not have a planet Pandora. You'll need to make that and have it accepted before the creature itself could even be considered, let alone used as a pet.

And why are there two posts for the Ikran?

[xavier]

You People are weird maybe I should of added the WIP

[Dire Wolf]

Yeah.... it is sorta the rules if your app is incomplete. ; )

[Talau the Ever-Lurking]

Vex...you're my heeeeroooo ^_^

As dire said...no rip offs....we don't allow canon here for a reason, and we don't like outright ripping things off. I suggest that you

1) rename (as dire said)

2) rename the planet

3) try going for something similar, perhaps, in appearance, but not so exact. I know they're cool, I love them also, but if you want to ride an Ikran and run around as a giant blue cat, there's a site for that...here's the link: avatarparadiselost.proboards.com/index.cgi

[xavier]

You people are still weird, wait till I'm done. I'm trying to concentrate.

[Vex]

The entire point, Reivax, is that even if you get DONE, it's not going to be done, because of the above-mentioned issues. It's meant to help prevent you from doing work twice unnecessarily. We are trying to help you and make things easier, despite the attitude.

[Kella]

Moved to Incomplete Species due to thread inactivity. Will be restored to Pending upon request. :3