Ash Rook

[Dutch]

Aug 13, 2015 15:50:46 GMT -5 DreadPirateMike said:

This gave him plenty of time to tinker with his Besilisk war droid

He really shouldn't have one of these yet.  They're only around in very limited number so far.  Again, that's something you'd have to discuss with Dutch

Jun 3, 2014 10:56:15 GMT -5 Dutch said:

Please take out mention of the basilisk war droid all together. Outside of Clans Ordo, Jendri, and a couple Republic museums the droid have been absent from the galaxy until very, very recently.

[Ash]

Ok from the top, good sir. And thanks for getting to this.

Biggest switch is im just making him human. I gave a few more details about how he looks, including his cybernetics. His beskar'gam is changed also, doing away with how it looked in favor of what everyone else is using.

Personality-wise i cleaned it up.

Ships, i changed it to the MRD-12 Modular Assault Frigate. Soon, if you give the ok with this ship, will put up the a modified version to be checked over, and have it tailored more to how i like it. And no basilisks because you all wanna limit Ash's resources.

Stats: I'm making a small change and upping his INT to above average. I will go more in depth in this in his bio. I made his so his father brought dishonor for the only reason i could think of. Probably because i was watching a movie or something. lol

Had an aptitude for tactics and whatnot... yea i brought some more explanation into there.

For the start of the training, i added in some more detail, with him learning less about mindless fighting and more on survival.

I got rid of the paperwork stuff. I know what you mean, and i worded it differently to more of a basic knowledge type deal.

For his first set of armor, i did what you recommended and made it an old set of his fathers.

For the carrying around of things, he doesn't carry both things around. It was given examples for what he would be carrying around.

For the investment stuff, i went into more detail on it. He no longer just stopped, but slowed down some, and learned from other peoples mistakes, with some help from older people.

For the Navy part, I'm thinking more along the lines of our own Navy SEALs. I picked the navy over the army because, like our own SEALs, he probably works closer with the Navy.

I changed it to just medical training, rather than advance, and gave a few examples of what even I can do. I also put medical in his skills as an apprentice.

Shield. Edited it.

I went in a little bit more on Karen. That should be enough right now for the moment hopefully maybe possibly redundancy.

What shield? I dont see one

I just took out the silencing part. He'll just yell. YELLING IS FUN!!!!!!!! *starts coughing*

As for Karen, i edited in there, right at the transition when he turned 28 and was more or less healed, that she joined the military working with supply and running whatever was needed back and forth. She moved to the front line after proving herself.

well, i think thats about everything now. I hope.

[DreadPirateMike]

Congratulations are in order, Ashbro.  This one's been a long time coming, and it took a lot of work, but your long night is over, because Ash Rook is... 

ACCEPTED! *

* With the exception of the ship.  As soon as Fro signs off on the modifications you have in mind, you can play around with that too.

[Dutch]

Aug 17, 2015 19:40:07 GMT -5 DreadPirateMike said:

Congratulations are in order, Ashbro.  This one's been a long time coming, and it took a lot of work, but your long night is over, because Ash Rook is... 

ACCEPTED! *

* With the exception of the ship.  As soon as Fro signs off on the modifications you have in mind, you can play around with that too.

[Dutch]

Accepted Stats

Ships/Vehicles:MRD-12 Modular Assault Frigate , modified Deathstroke As flagship.

Equipment:Beskar'gam.
Assault Cannon
Heavy Blaster Pistols.
Blaster Rifle.
Several took kits.

Stats:

Strength – Above average
Agility – Average
Intelligence - Above Average
Charisma - Average

Combat Training:
Unarmed: Adept
Melee Weapons: Adept
Ranged Weapons: Expert

Other Training:
Slicing - Novice
Piloting - Adept
Strategy – expert
Multi-lingual: Basic (fluent), Mando'a (fluent), shyrwook (understans), huttese (understans)
Stealth – Adept
Mechanical work - Adept
Medical training - Apprentice